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When You Are the System
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[This novel has been suspended. Read it if you wish, but author-san will not update]
Jia Xinyue. Normal university student from China, no aspirations for the future, likes hotpot.
All she did was try to return a pendant to a mysterious dark-haired stranger, which gets her killed!
Instead of becoming the all powerful MC with a golden finger, she is forcibly placed into a system... as the AI? But she's human?
Why is she here?!
Who's that blonde bunny over there! Eh? It's her host?
They don't even speak the same language...
Kian is a foreigner who died before achieving his ultimate goal of revenge. Now, he is the host to a broken AI who thinks she's human?! Having never read a cultivation novel before, he's completely clueless!
Jia Xinyue: This old lady will carry you through! I'm a battle-hardened veteran when it comes to these novels.
Forced into a bond with Kian, this "broken AI" resolves to strive for her ultimate goal:
To get out of being a "AI" and find the annoying guy who put her there and beat the sh*t out of him!
Plagued by badly designed controls, this adopted pair of siblings must learn how to survive whilst climbing up higher in a world where strength dominates all.
Whilst avoiding the schemes of Lan Clan, will they ever find a way out of this world?
No one is who they seem. Is Kian truly the young boy he says he is? What are the true intentions of Wang Feng?
And for Jia Xinyue, why does she feel like she's forgetting something?
Jia Xinyue: @Author, you barely give me any time! Let me remind you that this is a female protagonist novel!
Author: You'll get your turn in the next world
Jia Xinyue: What next world? Don't tell me it's world hopping-
Author: Yes. Blame Wang Feng.
Wang Feng: WTF?
800-1800 words per chapter.
[EDIT: author is working on Instead of Empress, I will be Emperor!]. also, you are a fool if you plan on reading this. don't.
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Been following this for a while now. The quality of writing jumps from chapter 1-15, you can see the obvious improvement. Keep it up! Lots of fun characters, and the writing went from "better than the average webnovel" to "wow this is descriptive".
The grammar is definitely a lot better than most of the original novels on webnovel. The story is quite interesting. You can tell that the author has done a good job improving the quality of their writing as you read along. It’s a fun read!
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This review is part of a review swap, valid till chapter 20 Writing Quality: (4) I'd give it a four, there's some areas in the dialogue that could have used some extra details like Chapter 13, "wasn't important.." -->could have added something afterwards, "Wasn't important.." Lan Wei said with an indifferent look on his face. Something like that. But actually this is story is one of those well written ones on WN. Story Development: (4) a good pace. Unlike most stories the build up isn't too slow or too fast, important details are discussed in the starting few chapters. I'm unfamiliar with this genre of novel, so I'm not too sure what direction the story is supposed to go in. But from what I've read so far, things are progressing. Character Design: (4) I'm loving how down to earth the MC is. She seems to have a laid back and casual personality despite her presnt circumstances. Her attitude brings forth a comedy flavor to the story. Kian's background still seems vague to me, but this is only the start of the story. I'm sure the author will give sufficient background information for key characters. Updates: Not going to rate, the author seems to be busy with real life. World Background: (5) We learned about the system from the start of the novel, so I'd give the world background five. No areas confused me despite the fact that I'm not familiar with system novels.
The writing quality is good though there are a few mistakes here and there. But they are not much noticeable. The improvement in the chapters is great and praiseworthy! The characters are awesome! This story has great potential. Looking forward to the next chapters! :)
An interesting image of the system, well, anyway, unexpectedly! Rabbit? Involuntarily, the image of Alice immediately appears ... But probably this is a new story. Intrigued! I'll start reading!
Jilid 1 : The First World: Lan Wei
- 1 I was just trying to be a good citizen!! 5 years ago
- 2 Bad first impressions 5 years ago
- 3 Are you secretly a M? 5 years ago
- 4 When you have your dreams crushed 5 years ago
- 5 Kids, this is why you stay in school 5 years ago
- 6 Is she a human or an A.I? 5 years ago
- 7 Cat videos are qual-kitty ent-purr-tainment 5 years ago
- 8 Beware of girls who like to ship things...I mean, people 5 years ago
- 9 In all honesty, fate is a b*tch and hates my guts 5 years ago
- 10 Please, I just want to become an unparalleled existence and have lots of beauties with me- wait no I'm a girl-! I meant guys, not girls! 5 years ago
- 11 A distinctive voice with an odd mystery 5 years ago
- 12 Lan Wei's wish for vengeance 5 years ago
- 13 Who is Han Xue and why is he so flirty?? 5 years ago
- 14 Nobles are never good people 5 years ago
- 15 I swear I'm not a pedo 5 years ago
- 16 Jia Xinyue is a total foodie... 5 years ago
- 17 Mr and Mrs Nagging 5 years ago
- 18 Sibling love is a thing, you know 5 years ago
- 19 Wen Ning, the swordmaster 5 years ago
- 20 Ah yes, let's throw my disciple into a dangerous trial because I "forgot" the basics of cultivation 5 years ago
- 21 The Trial - Part One 5 years ago
- 22 The Trial - Part 2 5 years ago
- 23 The Trial – Part 3 5 years ago
- 24 Looking through Kian's eyes 5 years ago
- 25 Who is this woman? 5 years ago
Grammar is good for webnovel quality. Seems to be a decent plot. Comedy for now, seems to have some darker foreshadowing...Will wait to see where this ends up. Give it a try, it has quite a bit of potential.