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By accident, Lu Zhiyu found the entrance to a low-dimensional world, and thus began a totally different journey!
Free to control everything in the low-dimensional game, Lu Zhiyu felt like a gamemaster, and even God.
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Tulis ulasanMC becoming godlike and emotionless really fast. The writting and the translation is horrondous to get through. Better to read something else !!!!!
WTH? The storyline is good, but the characters... SMH! Not only that, the science is inacurate, especially when he had cancer, he suddenly cured just by looking at his cells and doing some yoga, like WTF?!
TLWR(Too long won't read): Don't read it. It's purely wish fulfillment without any struggles. By reading it, you can easily get trapped. It's not worth getting trapped into. The first few chapters had promise of maybe some character relationships or development, but in the end he cut himself off from everyone he knew, spent the rest of his life as a billionaire and a God. On this website, there's nothing wrong with wish fulfillment because that's just the kind of stories that are highly rated here. But really, this story is just nonsensical. The author doesn't even bother to look up anything science related as a lot of the things here are pulled straight from his ass. He has a shallow perception of how the world works, and that is detrimental to writing a story ABOUT creating a FREAKING WORLD. Translation quality: It's okay, no typos or anything. The translation and grammar itself is understandable Stability of updates: It updates daily, so if you got sucked into this trap of a novel, you'll have a hard time getting out. Story development: As of now, anything interesting has been thrown out of the window. I suspect that it might be a long time until the main character finds himself struggling with something again because he is literally a god at this point, both in terms of the world he's making, and the power he has in the real world. At the start, the author was doing something really interesting with the character. It showed that the main character was slowly becoming disconnected and less human as he became more and more powerful. The author could've delved deeper into the philosophy of being a human and becoming a God. On the values of life. But clearly, the author doesn't actually understand the value of being human as he just went ahead and made the main character cut off from the rest of the world so he could focus on being a god. I could even feel that this isn't what the character wanted. At the start, you can see his frustrations of not being able to get the girl even with mind reading. He's constantly haunted by his failed romantic relationship by the little sister of his ex. His two relationships after coming in touch with mind power had broken off of him because he didn't seem to love him. The author could've delved deep into the psychology of being all-powerful in exchange of your personal connections with other people. BUT, not all people on this website are looking for something great. Let's talk about in webnovel standards. First, a protaganist with a cheat, great! Second, beautiful love interests, great! Third, an external goal which drives the plot (curing himself of his cancer), great! What happens after he cured himself of cancer? Well, he just did his own thing and left everyone he knew. Now there was no direction besides building the world he created. What about the world he was creating? Maybe there are some fantastic struggles that could pull you in? Well, all of them are glossed over! Since it's a perspective of a god, everything happens in a blink of an eye. The most touching emotions I have felt so far is the one with the first human king and the first elf. I hope that the novel sprinkles more of these in the future, but I'm just really frustrated with the lack of struggle. Even mainstream novels at least pretend to have struggles for the mc before face slapping the villain with the main character's cheat! Character design: For me, every character besides the MC is more loveable. I just can't stand the MC not because of himself, but because I can see how unnatural it is for the MC to do all of these things. As a writer and a reader, I feel that the MC has a lot that he wants to say, but is drowned by the voice of the author. The life of the MC, ironically even though he's becoming a god, he can only be controlled by the author without doing what he actually wants. He is simply the author's avatar, with no will of his own. AGHH World background: A LOT of the logic doesn't make sense, BUT the system of getting mind power from the zero dimension is cool. If I could, I would write with this concept. It's cool because it explains why the beings in the world he created are able to get power from the source. But on a downside, the author clearly does not understand how 2D organisms work. You can't just lob an ant into a 2D space. Only a cross section would freaking fit because of the dimensions. It won't become a fucking drawing. Though it's understandable since the platform he was using was a scroll and kind of like a painting aesthetic? But it contradicts the actual laws of dimensions. Well, he was saying something like the 2d world in the scroll was slowly becoming 3d, but the author was pulling A LOT OF BULLSHIT LOGIC FROM HIS ASS. Just remembering how he turned the scroll world livable is just painful. My braincells are dying from trying to comprehend his flawed logic. Final note: I wanted this to work. I, personally, want to feel what it's like to be God, but this novel oversimplifies it. I feel sorrow for the main character because he has such a terrible author. Who knows, maybe it'll get better in the future. But in the end, chapter 42 is a bad place to be. A reader should never go to a bad place just to read the good parts. I'll probably still follow this book because I am indeed in the trap of reading it, but I still have the hope that it becomes better. If it becomes premium, I'll delete this book from my library. Peace.
Okay first of all i hope this won't go premium soon, the mc can create a world and play god so this is a plus for me because i have hard time finding creating a world concept, i can't wait to see the mc make world like cultivation or magic, keep up the good work!
Membuka SPOILERI really enjoy reading this novel, even thought there's only 30+ chapters so far. Actually, I see that in reviews and comments at the beginning a lot of ppl complain about the story being 'unscientific'. But let's remember that this novel is in fantasy genre section for a reason. The author tries to be logical and for a layman the logic is alright to read. The modern world in this novel isn't even the focal point so far and when it becomes so... like I said, it's 'fantasy' for a reason... That aside, the MC's development is very fast - from a sick modern man on a verge of dying to an almost immortal handsome being in these 30 chapters. Other stories take at least few hundred if not thousand chapters for it. However, this is actually needed because MC creates worlds, where time flows thousands times faster than in RL, so if he wants to stay there and play 'God', he has to have a longer lifespan. His other abilities also develop quickly, but aside from being smarter and one other thing (don't want to spoil too much), he isn't all that powerful. Other characters are not described much and don't feature a lot in the story. With the MC becoming a god basically, that's to be expected. What I like the most is world building. I don't really care for laws, time and space - I am not a scientist and don't have interest in that area, so descriptions about it are just skipped. What I like is seeing how, after the creation of the new world, the MC creates life, humans, etc. I believe that later it will be even more interesting as there's basically no limit to world creation. Well, anyway, if you are someone who likes fantasy genre and doesn't mind reading a few not too scientific chapters in the beginning, then this novel you may really come to like. The translation is quite good and the story only gets better (so far) from the beginning.
This IS GOOD!! GOLDEN! A DIAMOND IN A RUBY!!! you all must read this- a bit fast pace but its enough to make a whole new world for us readers. He's pretty much a god by chp15 lol hahhaha
"Get served" system that provides everything and anything. Let's be honest.It's just godhood that gets "explained" with a lot of stupid nonsense filler. My mistake. No it's not godhood. A god wouldn't even consider an animal harem. It's just a m@strubation session of the author and everyone has to bear witness and rate his "performance" with 5 stars. No thank you.
Lol that wuxia novel got push back another week? Is it the third week? Let make it the fourth :) I like dododododododododododooddoododododododo
It's a great concept but, sadly, it has been very poorly executed (I think an 8 yr old could have written it better) Crazily fast-paced progression makes his "accomplishments" seem uninterestingly mediocre at best... The fact that he becomes a man-slut as soon as he gets "powers" just makes it even more boring to read... Closing Remark(s): This novel isn't worth the effort it would take to think of one...
Ok I will start with the fact that the concept of the story is kinda interesting. Basically mc becomes a god over a 2d univercancerse of his own creation. Sounds cool, right? Well the problem with this novel is the author has no understanding of science or human biology yet precedes to talk about things like how if everything stopped moving then time would stop or the stupid idea that yoga and eating well will help his cancer. He seems to think controlling the various glands in his body will cure his cancer and wants to make himself taller by making more growth hormone, which wouldn't work at all but would instead give him a problem like enlarged feet or hands and the like. Growth hormones don't make you taller if you are full grown like damn. But of course the journey doesn't end here, beside the authors atrocious understanding of basic science, he loves just summarizing chapters. What do I mean by that? Well I mean a chapter will read like a summary. Little to no detail at all. In the span of a single paragraph he can pick a girl up, have sex, and be home in as little as 4 sentences. Honestly it was the concept of the mc being in control of a new world that got me reading this but this is at best a 2 star novel. The mc is more 2d then the world he controls. The author just ****ting on basic science is what destroys this fucking novel, it would have been a thousand times better if the author came up with a magic reason for his cancer being defeated and why he gets taller and **** instead of trying to use his incredibly limited understanding of the human body to write how the mc plans to make himself better. Read if you have nothing better to do or read. Literally a newspaper is better than this.
Membuka SPOILERDon't read this if you're obsessed with tiny details, the story is most enjoyable when viewed on the bigger picture. The MC is an absolute joy to read with his crazy yet somewhat unrealistic ideas, it's amazing seeing the repercussions and cause of his actions, despite knowing it'll be a short novel it's a joy to read in bursts!
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The story is nice but the translator is an asshole, he left the last 20 chapters of the novel premium locked (its been locked for more than a month already) meaning theres no way for normal members to finish the damn novel unless they pay for premium access. Don't read it if you're looking for a novel you can actually finish.
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An OOOOOOOOP MC Godlike male that spread hormones and make females want to xxxx him So far this is semi harem for me, there are lots of girls but mc xxxx them one by one after breaking up with other. Maybe in the future it'll become real harem when MC xxxx them at the same time Btw it's a short and interesting novel hopes it'll translated fast
I...I don't know what to say of this novel....Unique I guess? Progression - MC --> Sick --> found item --> throw all logic out the window --> become sexy --> bang everyone --> pull money out of his ass --> play god --> Bang ant queen. This novel is the first novel I seen that makes absolutely no sense or has any direction direction. I have absolutely no clue how it is this high in the rankings or why so many people are giving power stones to this novel. I know that the site modifies the ratings on their premium novels. But this novel is just plain unreadable. "Suspend your disbelief and you should find happiness". I tried but failed. I just could not continue with the non-sense anymore. The comments in the chapters were really funny and the only thing keeping me interested. that is it. I hope I don't read something like this again and alter some of my logic my brain has built up.
I love the story and its side characters especially the Wizards. it reminds me of Warlock of the Magus World. I love how the MC is starting to feel like a father with him being a father of 2 daughters and the creator of the world Maria. I want to know what the Antqueen in the early chapters is up to when she got out of the Maria World but maybe it's still in the later chapters. All in all a good novel for me when you want to feel like a God. I think the only bad thing is the slow update and with the privelege thing going on and it looks like its not updating.
This is a good novel. why did the readers think that the science in this novel fail. WTF!! This is just a fiction it's not real. Criticize the char development, plot progression, etc. not the fucking science of this novel.
It had very good story line and stable world building. Although there are some parts which are quite illogical but hey fantasy men throw away your logic and don’t torture yourself just enjoy it all I want to ask author is just why my cat girls and wolf girls and tiger girls were called orc? Is it because orc ancestors are pigs so you lump them together?
Website : qidian china Views : 7.95million Rating : 8.7(427) Chapters : 450+ Status : completed Word count : 1.13million author level : lv5 No of works : 2 Disscussion : 69561 Year started : 2017 Chinese title : 低维游戏