zBaisao

zBaisao

1yr

Commented

Interesting. I just watched the movie.👍

ch 25 Exploring

Chronicles of a Telekinetic with a Group Chat (Archive)

Movies · RubberPeen

zBaisao

2yr

Commented

Have good rest author-san! I'll feed and take care of ya if u want a break...

Ce chapitre a été supprimé.

Overlord: Ghosthood

Anime & Comics · Month

zBaisao

2yr

Posted

It felt like I was reading a very long summation. Powers and the system has many errors and plot holes.. for example "Ban's healing" because from what I'm aware of Ban from 7DS power is Immortality, no healing. Then lets say MC has bans healing power, but why hes afraid to go beyond 20% of OFA power?.

My Marvel Random Power System

Anime & Comics · The_Dusk_Ninja

zBaisao

2yr

Posted

boring shallow character design #.................... ................ .............. . ..................... .......... .......................

My Life as a Gamer Across the Multiverse(ENG)

Anime & Comics · MoonDevourer

zBaisao

2yr

Commented

Moar..

ch 33 Similar stories and the meeting

Multiverse of Marvel

Movies · thelightedghost

zBaisao

2yr

Posted

grammar and writing quality was good but i felt some of the plot was forcefully trying to change.. ..........................................

In Marvel with King’s Powers(Nanatsu no Taizai)

Anime & Comics · Hancock_Sama

zBaisao

2yr

Posted

Writing quality and world background is kinda good and mediocre. story development is kinda lacking of what I expected to a slice of life. all about simpin' ladies and their 'colourful attributes' depicted to almost each chapters(iloveharemtho). Keep it up author!👍