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My Marvel Random Power System
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Follow the journey of Alexander(Alex) Knight, as he tries to settle in the marvel world, but what if his reincarnation created problems for higher beings right from the start!!!!!!!
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in one side this story is written well enough that any errors can be dismissed and i like overpowered main characters, on the other side it's full of plotholes and out of nowhere nerfs just so he can make side chapters that dont even matter (dont know if im putting this right) and some powers are kinda wrong, shadow clones as an exemple are not hivemind jutsu where you can simply experience everithing at the same time. overall its good enough to kill time if you are bored and dont want to think too much about plot , just an power fantasy.
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For once there has been a really good Marvel fanfiction, and this one so far has been almost perfect with no flaws. <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
amazing story looking good so far.. love the way you handle the pirate.. please don't drop. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Made the mc just weird…. Who tf would wish for a lab filled with advanced alien technology but not the knowledge as to how to use it 🤦♂️🤦♂️ I’m sorry but this start was good until you started giving the mc a random mix of powers from anime powers when he’s.. would’ve been more believable if the random power system only had powers from dc, marvel and other superhero comics.. the wishes was extremely stupid and unrealistic, who in their right mind would want the experience of Batman when he’s not even in dc so the only part that will be useful if the martial arts and some fighting experience considering the difference in marvel and dc villains and waste a wish to change how to system look 🤦♂️🤦♂️ Again started good but then took a stupid turn
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what the hell,author-san !!! I'm at chp. 11 and it is still like info dump and mc gaining so many powers without context. he also has too much cheat like abilities without any effort and there is extremely less conversation. i don't know why people are telling its best...there are many others better than this......i hope you try to solve this problem...BTW great job on writing something..."creation is hard"
not that great I dont like mc a little bit. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
its like reading a shopping list linked with some story elements and name-droppings. too many skills, no 'need' to have them, just nice to have with no real reason why he got x legendary skill(s), or why the mc is so lucky
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I read all the chapters currently out in a day, and I enjoyed it. It is worth giving it a try, before deciding not to read it. Ps. Keep up the good work.
its rushed and focuses less on detailed character progression with legitimate story telling. It has good potential its just poorly used. it feels more like an abridged description of a story from a first person perspective rather than a legitimate story.
nice going also the length of chapter is also great , story development is also well done just the mc's character development personal relationships have less focus .Grammer is a bit lacking at some points nothing too troublesome . KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.✌
Amazing Story so far. Looking forward for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story was good and not a fan of hearm but it's ok 👌 Hope this will continue and will not get dropped ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
keep writing bro, your writing quite well but the the problem is, you don't update new chapter regularly, so if you could update timely it would be much better, (just a request)😊
It felt like I was reading a very long summation. Powers and the system has many errors and plot holes.. for example "Ban's healing" because from what I'm aware of Ban from 7DS power is Immortality, no healing. Then lets say MC has bans healing power, but why hes afraid to go beyond 20% of OFA power?.
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Spoiler de révélationVolume 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 : Volume1- The Vigilance Arc
- 1 Journey to Marvel!.. ARE YOU SERIOUS!?!?! 3 years ago
- 2 Looks like My Situation is Complicated 3 years ago
- 3 Waking Up a Storm 3 years ago
- 4 Waking up a Storm (part-2) 3 years ago
- 5 Waking up a Storm (part-3) 3 years ago
- 6 Explaining to Alfred 3 years ago
- 7 The Ancient One and Training 3 years ago
- 8 One For All is back BOII!! 3 years ago
- 9 Nightclaw vs Ulysses Klaue! 3 years ago
- 10 Helping Ben! 3 years ago
- 11 Black Body and personal planet- GET! 3 years ago
- 12 Middle School and Enigma! 3 years ago
- 13 Hater's gonna Hate 3 years ago
- 14 You got reverse UNO'd Boii 3 years ago
- 15 Fury's … Fury? and punishing a Professor! 3 years ago
- 16 Catching a Snake by it's Tail! 3 years ago
- 17 Trapped!! 3 years ago
Volume 2 : Volume2-It all starts with Iron Man
- 18 Iron man vs Iron Monger! And I make a cameo, I guess! 3 years ago
- 19 More Spider's? More trouble! 3 years ago
- 20 Training the Spider's And the Serpent Society! 3 years ago
- 21 Hand and Kingpin! 3 years ago
- 22 The Spider's and Black Cat! 3 years ago
- 23 The Defender's Assemble!... and Prelude to a War! 3 years ago
- 24 Monaco and The Lizard! 3 years ago
- 25 Dealing With Lizard and Tony's Party! 3 years ago
- 26 Rhodes and Tony!... Aaaand busted! 3 years ago
- 27 Fury's... Furious! and Harry's Party! 3 years ago
- 28 You Have Fuc*ed Up Now! 3 years ago
- 29 The Defender's Unite! 3 years ago
- 30 Decisions and Whiplash! 3 years ago
- 31 Kingpin's Last Stand! 3 years ago
- 32 Enigma VS Terrorbite!! 3 years ago
- 33 Hey Tony meet Terra!.. Tony you Alright?? 3 years ago
- 34 Upgrade! 3 years ago
- 35 I Believe In Second Chances, But You Lost Yours Years Ago! 3 years ago
- 36 Upgrading the Arsenal! 3 years ago
- 37 Lay off The Fangs! 3 years ago
- 38 Blade!! 3 years ago
- 39 Out For Blood! 3 years ago
- 40 It Starts Now!! 3 years ago
- 41 Showdown! 3 years ago
- 42 Showdown (part -2) 3 years ago
- 43 Showdown! (Part - 3) 2 years ago
- 44 Showdown! (Part - 4) 2 years ago
- 45 Showdown! (Part - 5) 2 years ago
- 46 A Night To Remember(R-18)! 2 years ago
- 47 FIGHT!!! 2 years ago
- 48 A New Threat!! 2 years ago
Authr can write and his grammar is good. But Mc swalow. One of those mc that dont kill ( i am not saying kill everybody but... come on there are joker cases). His hero name is enigma. What a joke. I read 11 chapters. Mc already has 4 identities. One is he with glasses, so he can go to school... I mean what? why? Pointles detailed description of stupid stuff. WWe get it you have gadget belt. Now be a good batman and just use a thing and then say you had it on belt. He has really big powers but they are sealed. He trained magic but uses martial arts to deal with thugs. Just bind them and be done with it. He uses grapling hook to move around. Such a batman fanboy. If my had no powers ok. But he has them so why do this?... Anywy sorry for the rant but this was just so frustrating for me to read.