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Feel free to use this story as a basis for your own. Or just pick up where I left off. I want nothing to do with this fanfic.
I'm now writing other fanfics for my own personal entertainment and I may or may not upload them on here. I'll probably make FanFiction.net my main upload site...
I won't apologize, because you shouldn't expect anyone's first fanfic gets finished. I was overwhelmed by the massive amounts of positive (and some negative) reviews, and fell into a hole where I started to like where I was going, but also pressured to write a good fic for the readers.
I also made the mistake of writing and releasing a chapter the same day without having at least 10 chapters in the bank lol.
Now, after months of consideration, I now dislike this story. I wish I could nuke it off the face of the earth from my phone, but since I can't be bothered to go through the desktop version it will stay here.
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The writing quality is pretty good. However, the story is essentially just following canon so far, with the MC just planning to follow around Aang like a lost puppy. The worst part is that the MC has no personality. He spends all his time fangirling Toph, and doesn't have a single independent thought.
I like his personality and the abilities he got. not too overpowered and not too weak it is just perfect!good job.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌
This fanfics a bit above average, and the only problem I have with it is the MC having a IQ between 73-85. He's not that bright at all. Though he's pretty strong so I guess that cancels out how dumb he is. The fanfic is almost exactly like canon except for a couple fight scenes, but it's basically the same as canon.
I really liked the story in the start. Then it started going downhill... nothing new just the same ol'canon (may change later but rn it's pretty much canon)...MC gets new bending like they are candy..and he is pretty stupid ( then again everyone is stupid sometimes ). But main point is that it's pretty dull and plain story... you'll get bored reading it after few chapters. if it changes in future I'll delete this review. Bye...Good luck
As the master of NOHAREMSECT, it's my duty to support one of my disciple by giving you a 5 heavenly star pills to help you defeated those Young masters from the other sects. NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT NOHAREMSECT
Very good. Мне в падлу писать на английском. Так что скажу на русском. Автор ты большой молодец, продолжай в том же духе!!!
I'm excited since I don't think I've seen a novel where the mc is an earth bender. I've voted this a 5-star since I haven't read any of it yet so let's hope you will do good author.
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Finally an avatar fic with the most Versatile bending type. Not like all the other fics going for fire or water. I like this, thank you author
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i love their interactions and how he genuinely likes her and that earth bending has infinite potential and love the writing and all the good comments coming from many people.
I want to like this story, and I sorta did at the start. The MC started out as someone who went after what he wants, but quickly ran out of things to want. The author is now switching to third person because his OC MC has so little additional perspective he can't write from his POV anymore. At this point Lu Chen exists to win fights and give vague hints. He is lube for the original cast, and provides no impact of his own anymore.
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Such a great story author forced my hand five star! ……………………………………………. …………………………………………… …………………………………………….. ……………………………………………. …………………………………………….
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Honestly the story itself is quite good, theres no mistakes in the writing so its understandable unlike some novels, the ideas behind the plot are also quite good. its just the way its written really annoys me for some reason. its written like a diary, its first person so theres a lot of I’s, which just if im being honest ruins the immersion into the story. I couldnt get passed it and ended up dropping the novel, but if you can get past the writting style its not a bad novel. peoples preferences differ so give it a try, if you like it awesome if you dont, then thats to bad, cause your like me, meaning your very picky with what you read and are nearly always bored
Yo Author I'd like to suggest keep going daily uploads, the best 7chap per week. I've found gold in reincarnation tag and wouldn't read if it wasn't for the reviews here. And this fanfiction is awesome and can't find another like this.
Yo pls update more I can't wait m8. update more update more update more update more update more update more update more update more update more update more update more
THIS IS GOLD! I HAVE BEEN SEARCHING FOR A GOOD OCxTOPH FAN-FIC FOR YEARS AND I FINALLY FOUND THE GOLD!! PRAISE THE AUTHOR! PRAISE THIS MAN!