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Pokemon Battle System: I Reincarnated As A Charmander

Video Game 112 Chapitres 1.0M Affichage
Auteur: ThatGoodStuff

3.83 (12 audimat)

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After waking up as a Charmander, Lian discovers he possesses a Combat System. By continuously battling and earning combat ratings, he can become increasingly stronger. However, Lian, who is profoundly lazy, pursuing strength through battles isn't his desired lifestyle. He simply wishes to be an ordinary Charmander.

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NightroPulse

The story is decent, but leans too much into the explanatory style, where every little thing needs an explanation behind it that it gets annoying. Even reminders to some degree from previous chapters. I mean, they CAN be summed down a bit. There's also a lack of character description, only mentioning clothes and gender. Naming sense is also poor, from regions (people names) to cities (animal or object) and even some people (gender confusing names). ____________________ Grammar is great, but there's an obvious use and over reliance of [Ai] on that front, with a lack of human proof-reading. Made obvious with the types of repeated mistakes. Such mistakes happen during pokemon relates topics, such as moves, types and evolution, as well as the MC phrasing stuff in a way where he is the trainer and not the pokemon. Such as mentioning Treecko or a Pikachu instead of himself when referring to his evolution. ____________________ It doesn't seem like the author reads comments to know this or they just couldn't be bothered to fix these mistakes. Looking at their profile and their 10 so called "original" fanfic novels, started 4 months ago or less with each already being at 50+ to 100+ chapters already, it's easy to see why their isn't much quality control and likely preferential treatment. I will say this however, it's one of the better AI made fanfics I've read so far.

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thesacredmenace

It's boring, it just feels like reading a Pokemon play-through rather than an actual story with a reincarnated MC. early in the story, humans get much more dialogue than the actual MC & Pokemon. I have gained no joy from this story

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D_Class_42

It's an alright story just to much move and Pokémon explaining and not enough story for me.. also the introduction of working with a trainer ruined it for me..

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XERNOBOKA_OFFICIAL

I love the style of this fanfic, i wanted to see the mc Iv's and ev's so i can calculate how rare He is. I don't know if mutations exist in this novel/fanfic. Well I'm going to read the Author's history

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Xanok_Malakai

Mc is dead by chapter 87 (against Gyrados) idiot author had Mc jump full body into a pool of water and be fully submerged. The tail fire is gone, and MC died. That's just how it is and I'm dropping it here even if it says otherwise. There have been already a few other plot holes like the completely new regions which are clearly Kanto but not Kanto, like that somehow makes a difference. It's kinda pretentious since making the region offered no actual changes to the story that couldn't be done in default regions. hp = stamina. mc is dumb regarding how he spends his points in beginning but it works out somehow. it's not a bad story but just turning off brain cells to understand Chinese authors is not enough. you may need to invert your brain cells or something to get negative iq at this point. I have no issue with the translator, they did well enough that the story is readable but they were dealt a bad hand to choose for their profession eith this book

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DaoistdsLBzk

Скучно сюжет ужасный не чем не отличается от других пападанцев в мир пакимонов почитала где-то 20 глав дальше не смогла гг скучный и его спутница тоже скучнее

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Stephen_Minson_

Enjoying it so far… I hope author doesn’t drop.

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Breckie_Smith

Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent—your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare

1mth
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CDude
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Awesome sauce :D [img=recommend]! Its cool to see an mc be a pokemon, and he is overpowered with balanced progression. Also his dynamic with his trainer is not annoying, and she herself is also not annoying.

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NeMsIS
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a good story to read. will look forward for more chaps

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XAZVAPB0OTH

No começo era ruim, mas melhorou. agora o protagonista é uma esperto e ate aprendeu uns movimentos novos, ta lutando bastante. O autor tambem posta diariamente, ja faz parte do meu dia.

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Yaya_Gaduk

I love when about the Pokemon is the main character

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