Should extend the [U] in Sakura, instead of the [K], and the [A] in chan, not the [N]. Just wouldn't sound right.
Rock Lee paused spotting beautiful pink hair and vibrant emerald-like eyes, the prettiest he had ever seen, even prettier than his bodysuit! "SAKKKKKKKKKKKURAAAAAAAAA-CHANNNNNNNNN!" His voice echoed out as he disappeared from the floor appearing across the entire hallway. Behind him, at the same exact time, twin sighs echoed out, even as noises of confusion echoed out from the other teams.
Anime & Comics · BalancedSelfInsert
Canonically, Frieza already explained it as him choosing that color while creating that transformation. So gold isn't a default preset for that transformation. All Cooler did was copy Frieza for HIS golden form as well.
"There... There is something we can do..." Lila said suddenly, looking over towards Cooler. "You need to go Golden."
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Lol, again, my first response to you, saying that it would be overlooked if you don't explain your reasoning which would inevitably need to be brought up if it WERE a "casual conversation" anyways. Otherwise, adding your input is pointless. Don't care how causal your being. Then you go making $*it up, a needles argument about guesses and opinions due to you misinterpreting like always and told you numerous times to drop it and why, but you didn't. And yes, petty AND stupid, because you can't read. But yes, yes I did bring this upon myself... But how was I supposed to know you were this stupid?
"Now I summon him again." I tell her.
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
My GOD! Do you not know how to READ!? For someone who said I "can't understand simple text interpretation," (which is untrue) you sure do create a lot of misunderstandings on your part, not actually reading and understanding what is there, and instead putting words in the others mouth. So for the last F'n time! I am not arguing with you on what is or is not guesses or opinions! Nor have I made any such claims! That is self-fabricated nonsense on your side! Just how many times do I have to say "I didn't say" something!? Read the last sentence of my third response to you. I am well aware that what my argument is, is guess work, not an opinion, but is in the form of a theory because it actually has supportive arguments to go off of. Not an opinion because I am well aware there are unknown variables. Yours was that the dragon has infinite energy because it was made using divine ki with no supportive arguments. Doesn't matter if it was a guess or not, especially with no valid supportive arguments, doesn't change the fact that it sounded stupid. What I do care about is how half-@zzed that guess is. My point is, don't waste peoples time with that nonsense. And I'm done here, because that's all you did, waste my time with all your misunderstandings because your an idiot who can't read! And yes, your theory at the end there is stupid. And I didn't say invalid, but would be overlooked.
"Now I summon him again." I tell her.
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Congratulations 👏, that's the first smart thing towards a supportive argument you've made. Regardless, the how is still up in the air and It can't be denied that is would still depend on the wishes that were made previously and the time frame between uses, however small. So not infinite.
"Now I summon him again." I tell her.
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Except Toriyama did...through the story... At least as much was necessary through the dragon clan. Porunga was much more capable despite the creator being much more physically weaker than Kami at the time, only held back by some rules placed on him. and Dende, not being a fighter who can be beaten by Kami, improved Shenron. Like I said, variables, not focused on ki. And I didn't say the author has to, just that the way they did it doesn't make sense. Also, the "guessing" nonsense on your part was talked about in the other post, or did you over look it? Nor have I denied that any of this is guess work, just actually backed up with supportive arguments on my part.
"Now I summon him again." I tell her.
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Yet we all clearly know from the source material that just because someone has divine energy, doesn't mean they have infinite energy. The same would obviously apply to the dragon. We also know that magical energy is different from ki, something that the namekian's dragon clan has. So a higher ki does not necessarily mean creating stronger magical capabilities for the dragon, though I'm sure there are variables and depends on the author in this case.
"Now I summon him again." I tell her.
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
*wouldn't
Goku stepped through the portal, and he began sprinting down Snake Way, a small bag of Sensu beans at his side so he would starve along the way. As he set off on his journey across Snake Way, I watched him go with a sense of pride and hope. The training he would receive from King Kai, I could only hope it would make him stronger than those Saiyans.
Anime & Comics · Iros
Your mixing first and third person. Noticed earlier when you used "he" instead of "I" as well.
As I opened his eyes, he saw Goku approaching with Gohan, one of them looked curious and the other was eager to join the training. I motioned for Goku to come closer. "Goku, I have made arrangements for you to train with King Kai," I explained. "As I have already taught you everything, I know it is time for you to get taught by a new teacher. You must be ready to leave soon."
Anime & Comics · Iros
*King Yemma
I turned his gaze towards Goku, who was currently helping Gine settle in and set up what seemed to be a kitchen. "I will speak with King Yama," I decided. "In the meantime, continue guiding the others in their training."
Anime & Comics · Iros
That's a totally different method for specific results, and you know that. We also know that he didn't do anything different besides use god ki. At least try to make your arguments make a bit more sense with an appropriate theory to back it up than a vague what-if. Otherwise it can't actually be debated and will be disregarded.
"Now I summon him again." I tell her.
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Is this AI generated? It's rushed and very monotone. There's no story or character depth to it. And the moment it mentioned Naruto wanting to revive his mother, and just his mother, it became very fishy. And the Sage of Six Paths is alive since when? Serious lack of information. Assuming it is AI generated, don't post until reviewing/editing and cluttering the internet with these nonsensical stories. Seemed interesting, but turned out to be a waste of my time.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: A Cynical Awakening
Others · Aditya_M_6409
Kiri, not Kumo. -A- isn't a jinchuriki.
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Anime & Comics · BalancedSelfInsert
*Zenkai
Fasha nodded in agreement. "We got this, just need some good sparring," she said while looking beat up. Still trying to abuse our Zenki.
Anime & Comics · Iros
Why all the past tense? Is Mansam dead? "Marriage was" [is], "had his moments" [has], "always did have a knack" [had], "was a good partner" [is], "He had a way of keeping me grounded" [has], "made quite the pair" [make], etc.
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Anime & Comics · Iros
Except that planet never had life to begin with...
As much as I pretend to be annoyed at her antics, I'm slowly growing fond of the time we spend here on Celvana.
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
🤦🏻♂️ So it is a reader-insert? Okay, now your confusing me since this contradicts your first response since -You'-POV (2nd person)- is pretty much the reader-insert default standard. You know there's a tag for it, right? It's still an indication if that were the case, so kind of would be. stylistic choice? I just went up to chap4 with a [you] search and found it to not be prevalent. Are you confusing a self-insert for a reader-insert? Then again, no reincarnation/transmigration tag, so [semi self-insert OC] is more likely the case. I found only the following stuff from the beginning of chap2 to be easily misrepresented without reading thoroughly and funnily enough, nothing beyond that point came across as such. ("unlike the Staraptor you'd see in pokemon matches" - "when they attack, you can feel the pressure of every hit on your skin!" - "You need connections or money just to start off." - "After all, a single pokeball costs 200₽. And the cheapest berries will set you back for 15₽.") So yeah, sorry, my bad. The misleading synopsis totally didn't help though. People that don't like reader-inserts will skip because of it.
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Video Games · BenisBoy14
Both. Though I wouldn't say it's confusion in general since I can clearly comprehend what it's read like, but the ratio of it and digging for information on if changes later on. As well as a ranting, obviously. Needed to eventually let it out lol.
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Video Games · BenisBoy14
"Never 'You'-POV"? I'm sorry, if this comes off too rude, and will admit that this fanfic currently still interests me despite not reading it much yet. But it has to be said. Can you not read or remember your own story or what's in front of you for that matter? Ironic considering you're a/the author. Summary > "You are a 14 year old boy-" is not [I] (1st person). That is someone else (author/narrator) telling the reader what they are. Chapter 1, second paragraph > "Everywhere you look-" (author/narrator) telling the reader where they are looking, again, is not 1st person POV, nor can it be described as 3rd person POV. It does get to 1st person POV once it gets to "Swole Solo-POV," but doesn't last since the POV eventually ends and defaults back in chapter 2. That only leaves me to assume how often it is and isn't read like a 1st person or reader-insert. If necessary, third person would be much better, saying the name of the MC instead of [you/you're].
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Video Games · BenisBoy14
Would have liked to see a bit more humanity in her. I find it odd how some authors make their reincarnated saiyan MCs too saiyan-like in a sense. Even in this fic, it was admitted that those personality traits were taught, at least the more extreme version, not the natural instinctive one. As we can tell from the anime, Goku who lost his memories, and Vegeta who changed over time in a different environment, among others, are good counter argument examples. She acts as if her human memories are barely even there to begin with, if that isn't the case. And I guess that depends on their past life too. Also, concerning survival, they had to rely on strength in numbers and that seems like it would be the case for at least a good while. So why not think of helping her to begin with? Why was betrayal even a concern in those circumstances? I think some authors only use the worst examples when it comes to personality.
ch 0 2 Chapter: 2
Dragon Ball: Rise of the Saiyan
Anime & Comics · EchoingDusk