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Nano-Machine (DC X INVINCIBLE)
4.8 (21 audimat)
Synopsis
Watch the journey, as a boy wakes up in another universe, with Nano-Machines...
{Be warned, this is mostly a action yet slow-paced fic. Mc is not ruthless either, so don't expect him to be. He will kill if needed and will not be afraid to.}
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Good story so far, I like how he has adapted to Gotham, hopefully you don’t have him become one of Bruce’s minions 👍🏾👍🏾
I would personally change the name he chose for the fight just because it is kinda overused(thanks to oversaturation of edgelord MCs) maybe something more unique to him and his situation would be good. Other than that the explanation the pacing and everything points toward a great novel in the works..... Will update this chapter after more chapter( though i don't think it will deviate much from my current one).
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Very slow but very progressive keep it up don’t spoil the flow in later chapters keep it up and also don’t increase the pace it is good 👍 👍👍👍
So is the Mc going to continue dating amber/ eventually marry her or going to break up soon. I would personally like a solo story with the interaction dc, and invincible character. Just my opinion.
I'm still trying to figure out how invincible adds into this but overall I love this.
Nano machine is it for the novel if so then i hope you don't disappear and don't mess up the fic like nano machine has so much potential i don't know why other author's don't use it.
Pacing is pretty stable and the mc actually feels like a real person which is for once. Though I'm wondering how the smooth the crossover is going to be cause I know those types of fics are pretty hard so good luck and I hope I see more chaps.
The premise is interesting and would have made for a great read if it was not for the use of ai in it's creation, the horribly described scenes with illogical words has turned me from this story. The use of ai has degraded the writting so much so that I couldn't finish a single chapter, author please use your brain and select the appropriate words for each description, avoid describing the tone/ feelings of the charactors and show what they are feeling through action, don't overdescribe, use telling to denote long stretches of time that would have been boring for the reader, only use ai to correct your grammar, otherwise the story will end up feeling like it was written by an idiot with no idea how to use the english language to write a story.
Definitely should be more popular then it is. Definitely top 2 DC ff on here I actually like this more then the other one but doesn’t have enough chapters yet to cement itself as the best for but story wise it’s way better.
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I usually don t bother with reviews, but I really think this fanfic deserves one. I really like the pace and well the numbers beings shown, and who dislikes to see clear progression in the statistics every other chapter.
Really well written story and an interesting premise, I would have love to continue reading, but *SPOILER* I’m not that into power hoarding fics, although it’s a cool concept the idea of him running around stealing people’s powers doesn’t interest me much. It’s still a really good story and I’d recommend it to anyone.
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I think its really good until now the grammar is good and the system is cool as well i reallllly like it................................................
good enough so far good grammar, interesting development and long enough word count per chapter, need more simplified stat don't know how to do it tho😆 but good enough with the comparison. hope it's a 100+ chapter and keep up the interesting development even if it's a slow pace one.
A great story so far. The pacing is pretty ok, sometimes it's fast but most of the time it takes its time. There are some grammar mistakes here and there, but they aren't much of a problem for any typical reader of web novels. The main character is pretty chill. He doesn't take stupid risks from what I can tell, even though he makes mistakes sometimes. He's quite cool, on another hand, his design is simple. The main character is powerful as well, and a hard worker who trains efficiently with his friend ECHO. He gains powers, but not willy-nilly either. He chooses from those he wants from now, not like he was at the beginning of the series... He isn't grossly powerful, but he is a force to be reckoned with. In a sense, he's just extremely strong Next, the world background seems decent so far, It isn't the best, but it is growing from what I can tell, so props to the author for that. The characters don't seem forced when they speak. It's pretty believable in fact, so double props. Chapters are quite long, averaging about 2-3k words per chapter, so content takes a while to run out of. Overall the story is pretty good to read, and if you like slow-mid pace fics with decent power progression and storytelling. For now, it seems like the story might be developing, but who knows, definitely not me[img=Smitten][img=proud]