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Synopsis
Adrian Shepard was a young man cursed with the ill fate of having every woman he ran into turn out to be a psycho in some way or another.
A “Yandere” if you would.
And one day, instead of waking up in his bed he found himself in what could only be described as a therapist's office. The only person around being, Makima? And a "Processor" is here as well? Reincarnation? DxD?
Oh boy.
Advance Chapters: p*treon/Accel14
(Story is a combination of High School DxD and Testament of Sister New Devil. Other elements may be added at my discretion.)
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It's shaping up to be a very interesting story. Of course, it is still too early for a proper review but from reading the first chapter I can tell it has potential. Ayanokoji vs Makima.
Ok the novel is good and all with all the character emotions and interactions, It is a very good read for a few people, but not for me because: 1. You have made a setting that Devils can't grow stronger if they train e.g. MC can't increase his total amount of power than he already has he can only learn techniques to better use that power or increase lethality 2. I can not vibe with MC, not understand and stand by his goals and all that and that is breaking my immersion
I'm wondering if the main character will only attract girls who are already yandere from the start, or if he has the ability to turn normal girls into yanderes.
Too early to say much but Ayanokoji vs Makima ……the potential… it’s overwhelming ,,,, also is there going to be yuri in harem ?
Since its a DxD. I will ask the obvious Question. Is it Harem or No Harem. And if there is No reply. I will consider Author is trying to ignore this Question since he is Going for the No Harem. and doesn't want to upset the Harem seekers early. Since any reader reading a Dxd fic, will go on thr assumption that it is Harem. BTW. I like this book, be it Harem or no Harem.
What will be the update time of story and how many chapter will be updated
not the best but it is good, no doubt... it's just a certain part of this destroyed and wiped out all the interest I have... DROPPING... I don't believe in perfection, but a glaring imperfections/imbalance is a no no no no no
Yandere girls without harem tag? I know you was a weirdo from you past work, but you are real freak. Disgusting.
I don't know the story, even if he didn't get involved with many girls, don't you know that girls are stronger than men in both of these animes? I don't know why he goes to the house of a potential fiancée and hires a boy as a bishop. The story is good.
Overall, this has been an enjoyable read so far. The characters are well done, and you have clearly gone in your own direction that strays far off from canon, which is fine as long as you keep yourself grounded. The fact that it is a mish mash of worlds is fine, but it would be nice if you grounded them a bit more to the main storyline, as they feel somewhat loosely tied to the story as of now. But it is still looking promising. The writing quality is superb, nothing really to complain on that front. The characters come across as unique, and each have a distinct voice, so well done on that front. Though I am a bitt iffy if they are meant to be similar to their 'canon' counterparts in their verse, as not all of them align to that. The updates are a bit spiritic, but I can see that you are planning to post on Patreon, so it is understandable. Overall, I am very satisfied, and am looking forwards to new updates. So good luck, and I wish you the best!
is it just me or this FF is unnecessarily dark ? it might be because makima and the MC are both a bit "crazy" ? dont get the wrong idea it's really a great FF but i think it's just too serious for a DxD ff ? if it was an original novel i would clearly love it more but there is something off with the tone i think ? dont know how to say it clearly sry ... maybe that's just me, it's a great read nonetheless good job author !
If possible release daily chapters or at least 4-5 chapters at a week. Keep it up. It has great potential .
I find the story amazing and well written, and I see improvement with each chapter. All I would improve is the updates of the story, but I can see it going to the 100+ chapters, so guess where my power stones are going 😉
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Only 16 chapters but so far the quality doesn't disappoint. The only thing i have to say and that is more correlated to my personal taste is that I can't stop myself from thinking mc is getting too soft on makima and I really want him to punch her in the face at times. The story is good and elements of the various series are magnificently united. The only problem is that I can't understand why author took of the aspect of demon getting more demonic energy as they grow old as that is their root cause of laziness and arrogance (also make training seems useless to become strong as if you aren't born lucky you are doomed for life unless you get opportunities like mc) and if author fear it might make adaloth traits seems less appealing that's not gonna happen cause the increase from training and aging is not nearly as op as that.
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could be better than your other book but I can't tell yet.