Hey author, could we get an update on the next chapter. Just want to hear how it’s coming along since it’s taking a little longer than normal.
To start off with the first twenty five ish chapters have terrible writing quality, if you can’t make it past that I totally get it, but there are some redeeming points. The plot and MC of the fanfic are pretty good. The new 10 shadows are interesting and the writing quality is excellent after the shitty portion. There’s also realistic responses to MC instead of him having no real effect on the world before he starts changing the story. The author handles the absent father part well whilst giving the MC a reason to leave even if it’s not the best. In summary, it’s a good fic once you get to the point where the writing quality increases. Hope the author updates it more often.
He started using GPT to correct his grammar half-way through, but the start was terrible. Stuck with it just for the plot.
Well Ichiro has 9 different and powerful shikigami with wide variety of abilities. Assuming each one uses up one life, Ichiro can get Ergo down 10 lives if he’s quick. Since white tiger and Garuda both have secondary abilities he can get an additional two lives off. The struggle will be the last life since it’s a rage mode Ergo with 12 immunities. Finally, each successive attempt at conquering Ergo’s 13 lives will become harder as Ergo becomes stronger and more experienced whilst Ichiro grows more tired.
A/N to those who are confused the bigger ring represent the 12 lives of ergo, the second one represent how many live ergo loss by pointing at a new number, say if it points to number 4 it means that ergo has lost 3 of his lives, as for the smaller ring it represents the timer it will revolve around the ring at exactly 30 minutes
I got reborn as megumi's older brother
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This is pretty damn broken, so anyone thinking this is a worse Mahoraga should think again. The physically strongest Shadow in the collection so likely above Toji level, probably one of the fastest too. He has positive energy manipulation which is deadly to curses. Skilled at combat includign swords. It can heal itself. And you have to have the power to kill it 13 different ways as he gains immunity to previece method. Gojo doesn’t even have 6 ways, Sukuna’s bag of tricks might not be big enough. This guy’s only problem is the Jumping Kaisen culture.
Ergo - amongst the strongest shikigami based on strength and abilities it is also capable of using reverse cursed energy as and it's main weapon is a great sword it is also adept in hand to hand fighting, he's ability is capable of damaging he's enemy while ignoring everything in the way, in shorts hes attacks will only hurts his target, but in order to do this he must die 12 time in different ways as he can't be killed the same way and there is a time limit meaning if he died once the timer start for 30 minutes and if you Can't kill him 12 times in under 30 minutes he will regain his previous life back but if you manage to kill him 12 times in under 30 minutes he will reach supreme evolution and in this state he gains immunity to everything that kills it along with an attack that can't be blocked ergo is the most powerful adversary ichiro will face in the near future
I got reborn as megumi's older brother
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Aren’t these two the son’s of Fenrir. I know they start Ragnarok and I’m 90% sure they’re related to Fenrir. Loki’s his dad, so they gotta be Fenrir’s kids right?
Skoll and hati - they are the opposite of each other as skoll can use reverse cursed technique and hati can use cursed energy, skoll can heal almost anyone be it curse spirit or even sorcerer and non sorcerer meanwhile hati can manifest small version of him made out of cursed energy to attack it's enemy
I got reborn as megumi's older brother
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You’re* Conjugate it to fit better
guess your right," he agreed quietly, before turning to leave the room in search of sustenance for his small family."
I got reborn as megumi's older brother
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You think a god would use steel buzz saws?! Those are made straight from pale ore (Hollow knight super metal).
It’s in his patreon, if you like to actually read a story for free find something else. There’s maybe 30 chapters with half being polls before just spam. if you like the author then go to his patreon just don’t waste your time here.
THEY’VE RETURNED
DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil
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