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Died and strangled in the world of superpowers. How will Ray live his life when knowing that the world is destined to doom sooner or later?
What can he do about it anyway? He doesn't have any power.
Well, what he thought before the world gave him the means to save.

Now, will he be the Hero who will save the world ? Or he will go PLUS ULTRA

My Hero Academy doesn't belong to me, this story is just for fun and all that shit. Don't sue me please.

Upload on :- Sunday to Friday.

Bonus Chapter on Monday and Sunday.


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patreon.com/Kamidemond

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I'm planning on keeping a stockpile of at least 20 chapters there.


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*The Cover is not mine, tell me if you want me to remove it, just don't sue me!!!

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LittleLionofJudah

This is probably the best MHA fanfic I have ever read! I'm constantly following up and even if the power system isn't very structured (but in all honesty in MHA you could get away with it) the story line is wonderful! The interactions between the characters and our MC felt really Canon. Also I loved how Yuta isn't completely sure about what happens either so he still doesn't really understand what he is doing and how that affects the story. This is also my first time writing a review because I never felt the need to do that before but I couldn't stop my self from doing so for this book. MORE PEOPLE NEED TO READ THIS! Me and my siblings love MHA and we've never liked the same kind of fanfics if we liked them at all but we all agreed that this one is amazing 👏. Please if anyone has any fanfics that are remotely similar to this one please tell me!

9mth
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PokemonJoker

Honestly pretty boring. Grammar and Spelling are not the best. Multiple errors every chapter. The copy system idea is way to played out especially with the time limit. I read until chapter 13. The OC is boring and one dimensional. It’s way too similar to other fics. If I was told this was copied and pasted from something else and the names and some elements were changed I would not be surprised. Nothing new here if you have read an MHA fic you have read this one. Wish it was better

10mth
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_DEKIM_

Another novel where the protagonist is just a slave to the system.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

10mth
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Z_Ril
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tbh i'm not quite sure about the whole system thingy.In my opinion, It would be better if he just has a quirk that allows him to copy only 1 person quirk permanently. so instead of 1 OFA user, we have 2. That would seem more natural and makes more sense at least to me.

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10mth
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R0B
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This fic is very average, nothing interesting hapened as of yet. Mc doesn't control time, his system gives mc quirks and abilities instead. His first quirk is OFA... And he was quirckless, now there are two "quirkless" teenagers with OFA, sigh... Mc follows the storyline and is pretty much pathetic.

10mth
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Mr_mysterio

Apart from the fact that I followed the usual clichés, I have potential, but this story only gets worse with time, the system is absurd, the personality is between emo and an infant and the worst thing is that the protagonist is nothing more than a dog that moves the queue to the system

9mth
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Full_superior123

you know it’s weird the Mc have to choose hero or villain and his choices hero why his he thinking beating up heroes & his getting more powers from different anime’s which are not quirks honestly he should have been a villain and got all for one or monoma quirk

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10mth
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Haise_Sasaki1

Annoying to read, and the author not improving the story at all form the numerous comments (that he likes mind you) he just swipes under the rug. The chapters sometimes just begin totally forgetting where the last chapter left out for no reason. And the author uses A.I, which wouldn't be that bad if he just tried fixing his grammar a instead of just typing in the worse english possible and letting the A.I do all the work.

9mth
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Prince_Arsalan

dissatisfied with the hero costume ... too many forced plot

10mth
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Kennchan

its stupid.......like whats the point of giving him a Quirk if the system will give him a Quest: "Dont use your Quirk in this Fight" This is just one of those story where the Author make their MC OP too much then nerf him with this dumb restrictions Let's not forget that the MC also behaves like a perverted Virgin.....I dunno if this is the author's way to be funny but there's nothing funny about it

7mth
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IDB
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was hooked by the first chapter and now Im impatiently waiting for more on ch7, character isn't edgy or scared to change the plot love those kind of mc's. keep up the good work author 👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿

11mth
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Winter_Whisperer

I reviewed this when it was around f 3 chapters long, I previously gave it five stars thinking it had an interesting concept. But reading it now it is just a carbon copy of the original just with some minor changes that aren't relevant. There are some plotholes as well. Bit disappointed, expected a lot from this fic and the author. Maybe a rewrite could fix it but with the way it is, I don't recommend anyone to read this. Just watch the original, it is better.

8mth
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Tevin_Persinger

Don't expect anything different from canon. I'm 84 chapters in and the plot is the same beat-for-beat as the original story. MC has an over powered ability yet the story remains unchanged.

6mth
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Story development is slow. World background is only academy. He (Mc) has a stupid hero complex. Mc is He is a child physically and mentally, I would say that mentally he is an 11-year-old European child. In short, if someone likes stupid, suicidal heroes, slaves to a system and submissive to the original protagonists; This is your poison.

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10mth
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LoserOfLife

Brooo, why did u delete this fanfic? I only read up to chapter 10 and it was so good too.

1yr
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012345678910

so, a nurf deku huh, great... .

8mth
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Elvenerable

Damn I love everything from the JJK arc but I still want you to clarify what the hell with Touhru's relationship with the mc that you didn't even know how to move forward in a damn kiss or normal date

2mth
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HeikyZX

It had everything to flow nicely in the first chapters but the author chapter after chapter ruined that potential. The MC got OP too fast and too easy, to the point that for the events/fights to last more than a handful of paragraphs, the author used and abused the system's quests to force the MC to do things without his Quirk (wow, how fun, yay). The author also shows absolutely ZERO interest in writing anything that isn't the MC acquiring new and random powers, how great/smart the MC is as he can defeat others without his Quirk, and... that is, I guess. Talks between the characters are rare, as the MC is VERY antisocial and apathetic to everything that isn't himself and his quests (yeah, he values them more than his own life, duh). Then there's the obvious plot armor as the MC will always win or clean the quest even if handicapped or acting without plans. Conclusion: the author wanted to write an MHA fic with an OP and MC that knows no failure, and it is that.

5mth
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Jabed_0998

the novel is pretty good but without multiversal travel

6mth
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