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Synopsis
Transmigrated as a human on an extremely dangerous and alien planet, Ryu struggles to survive in this world infested by dozens of monsters and beasts hundreds of times stronger than him with nothing but a strange artificial intelligence that seems to allow him to grow stronger.
Ki? Magic? Beings that can destroy planets pretty easily with one flick of their fingers? This new place seems to have all that and even more. Will he be able to survive to this and what's to come? Probably, otherwise, I wouldn't be writing this.
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The story will probably have the usual system with quests, shop, and status- I'm just doing this because I felt like it, so don't expect such an overly complicated story.
Also, because I don't want to get sued, dragon ball and its characters are not mine, nor it's the world, the only thing I own is my Mc and probably secondary characters that didn't appear in the anime... probably. So please don't sue me, I'm already poor enough.
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Hard to judge how the story will develop. language wise its rather well written. The concept is good and his starting point is rather new. only negative points currently are the rather less likable mc and the system in a way. especially the bad luck debuff. Its a negative plot armor. good for story progression with less of a challenge for something new to happen. but since its always negative well...(fate bends against you)
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I've read all the chapters so far and enjoyed them. i just hope you dont drop this this. thanks for the read................................ also is he ever going to get his arm back
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looks good for now. Hopefully you will get him meet some people because just training and fighting monster will get boring soon. Other than that good job
DBZ at its finest simple story with clear rules, an ever increasing threat, fight after fight, flashbacks, and of course cliffhangers at each episode. A good read thank you.
It's really good. I like the main character. He seems like an actual real person who has been kidnapped and sent to a dangerous place like Dragon Ball.
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Honestly, it's to early to make a good review so I'm gonna keep it to the bare minimum. I'm liking it so far and I'm looking forward to future chapters of this book.
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.