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Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler
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Leon was an average high school student, who love to watch anime and read novels.
However, when Leon was about to cross the street, a truck greeted him straight in the face and killed him.
He got reincarnated as an Uchiha, and dead again because Itachi killed him.
Leon got reincarnated once again as the grandson of the recovery girl.
He got kidnapped and tortured by All For One.
After his third death, he got reincarnated as the son of Bibi Dong.
In this fourth life, he wants to change his fate to become the strongest.
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One of the best Douluo Dalu fanfic I have ever read. Would be best, if I only count fics on Douluo Dalu 1. A very big advantage this fic has, that MC is a member of Spirit Hall... I haven't seen an author who did something like this while reading fics on Douluo Dalu so for me this is a very big plus. Rarely you see MC standing with "Villain" organization and developing it even more... glad to see something like this and I hope this novel will continue
5 star because the cover is Lamy also because of the tags , Konlamy!!! (ignore after this) komlamy desu. Yukihana Lamy Konnene! Momosuzu Nene desu!! Purupuru~ ganbair~ Risu! Moon Moon Moanafic da yo! o o o! Obisa no Iofi! Atashi ne Mori Callipe desu Kikiriki, Takanashi Kiara~! Yappa watashitachi futari setto ni naru n desu ~ Urusai kusotori! damare! Saa minna de issho ni!
More harem ++Liu Erlong++Ah Yin ++Hu Liena+++Zhu Zhuyun++Shui Bing Er++Shui Yue Er++Huo Wu++ Xie Lingling+++Bai Chenxiang++Xue Ke++Tang Yuehua+++Meng Yiran++Wang Qiu'er++Tang Wutong++++Xian Xia+Zi Ji+ Bi Ji+ Xiao Wu+ Ning Rongrong+ Zhu Zhuqing+ Bibi Dong+ Duyu Yan+ Qian Renxue+ Gu Yuena ++milf please.++++++++
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This is a pretty good read in comparison to other fan frictions but gets very slow and boring after first 45-50 chapters. Especially with the same oversmart and all knowing mc who use 'huh' every 3 dialogues. Story is pretty much the same as the original with just some changes and added extra characters (including mc ofc). Also author has a maid fetish...don't get me wrong it's good & all and who doesn't need maids but - with every single FL being a maid? that's just weird imo and as I said, an author's fetish maybe. Grammar is okayish, there are alot of mistakes here and there but bearable. And this novel only has 5 star reviews so maybe this is going to be deleted too.
5/5 so far in my honest opinion. Read upto chapter 21 so far and it is an amazing novel. I like the system aswell as the additional attributes/skills etc
one word describes this novel.."awesome" the background,the story telling is spot on. my only hitch would be that he gets too overpowered.
It was a five star ff till he didn't told them that they are fictional characters. Telling them about his past life is fine but I don't get the reason to tell them they are fictional characters only for him to convince them later that they are real to him. I mean if you know that you have to convince them later that they are real people not some fiction, just shut your mouth and save them from some existential crisis. Sometimes ignorance is a bliss you know.
very nice the story is good I'm still at ch 11 so I don't know if the system gives a punishment for not completing a quest...but for me this is a very good ff good job and keep up the good work👍👍
I’m loving it so far great start and interesting too I think I’ve only seen this done once or twice before in some highly underrated novels either way I hope this continues its very good
although I don't really like fanfics, but this one is an exception. Author please add R-18 and smut for future events. exp. exp. exp exp exp
I've always believed that system fanfiction doesn't deserve the top rating, I still do, but you did so well in everything else that I'll forget my 2 star policy to system fanfics xD The story have some minor problems, like you didn't change anything that could have been altered, like for example Renxue's mission, a bigger foolishness now with the presence of a genius like the MC that will certainly put the world at her feet. Also I think you write a lot of unnecessary fight scenes, that's not a problem for me, but you could spend your energy on progressing the plot. Thanks for the chapters
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The fanfiction has great start and is interesting to read. Also don't follow tang san it better if you eliminate him to see which skills or abilities you get from him.
~I like it more than the original soul land~ ....................................................................................... .........
F* Those haters that put 1 star on this fantastic novel Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
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author i have a nice suggestion. i think that don't add more than 10 girls on his harem because you know it's difficult to handle a lot of girls at the same time. Btw hope you won't drop this fanfic and thanks for the hard work on making this fanfic.
I find the story interesting. The plot are good. But there is big disadvantage in my humble opinion. To much 'sweet home alabama'. This side is to overly intrusive (disgusting). I can understand 'deep' feelings to half-blood sister. He is surrounded by few beautiful young maids with feelings to him, but his relationships with mother are really deranged. Also author forcefully pushes excessive amount of older women into MC harem. I started to think that author has a mental problem with Oedipus complex. 'Mother of my maid wants to join my harem? I've only worried about my ability to protect them. Age? My feelings? What are all those?'. I try to simply skip such text and pretend it didn't exist.
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I'm coming close to the latest chapters and I can't handle the anxiety T-T I'm coming close to the latest chapters and I can't handle the anxiety T-T
Who would say that in my nights of boredom I would find this hidden gem, I must say that I came with little hope but ended up in disbelief at the story, it is certainly worth taking the time to read and I promise you that it will not leave almost everyone unsatisfied. Grammar with one or another defect but almost difficult to notice so it does not influence anything, the story is constantly developing that does not let the reader get bored and without a doubt it is something pleasant, I just have to congratulate the author and although I am happy to having discovered this fanfic I must say that I am also a little sad for having done this much earlier, now we can only wait for more chapters :c