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DC:The Strongest Survive
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Synopsis
This story was rewritten many times but this is a while new story all together I hope you all like this version and give it a chance
Detective Daniel Murphy with the last bit of breath still in his body cursed the world and those that brought him to his death and when everything went black he woke up in the arms of a woman in a world unfamiliar to him now he struggles with all his willpower to stay alive and survive all obstacles thrown at him no matter the cost.
This story is not a harem
Is an AU of the DC Universe
I do not own anything related to DC but the OC (I mean seriously wouldn’t it already be obvious that I don’t own anything if I did why would I be even writing this)
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You should do harem if its made good because the harem are better than love story the problem with a lot of harem is that they are made wrong like the harem should have a limit sometimes of 5-10 girls and not 1000 because the story go just around the girls without a continuity and i have seen the comments of a lot that hate harem i don't understand their problem they love romantic single love story go read one not always say no harem in a fucking harem story and the like for harem it's because its a fictional story Although they maybe are in a modern day its not means you can't have more women and harem sometimes add more content i have read a good novel that is ruined because the mc is fallen in love with a girl and she have ruined the story and after a tot of time became boring the idea of this story its good there are just a few story about dc gods in dc continue with it
First i would like to start out by saying this review will Criticise a lot of things you hqve writen but i would also like to say please dont get angry over the fact i have critisised your work please actually try and take into account what im saying as a lot of writers get angry and dont take into account the criticism that is givin to them. Okay into the review forst i would like to start out with the good stuff your story and plot are really really unique and i have never seen a male amazonian in a story and the plot can actually go in a lot of diffrent directions and i would also like to commend you on not just sticking to the trope of a person get recarnated and immediatly gets the most op power of all time you actually have your charecter go through a stage of growth where the grow and become stronger which i would like to comend you on. Now onto the critism your writing could Be alot better if you wrote more in depth and focused in on key details more and your overarching story is good but the finer things could use work. The paceing of your story is way to fast within 2 chapter the charecter has been reincarnated and then almost immediatly its been 8 years and your charecters escaping we dont get to see what the charecters gone through while imprisoned we dont get to see what effect that isolation has had on the MCs psyche we dont get much background it why anything is happening. You just need to develop your writeing style slightly. You also need to gIve more build up to big events and give the story more of a flow as currently its just event 1 event 2 event 3 And theres nothing Between To flesh out the charecters or to give motervation. to fix this i would suggest you give more reasons as to why these events are happening and give your main charecter more of a main goal that is clearly defined. I would also say that your story should get into your charecters head and tell us how your MC came to certain conclusions or came up with ideas and plans. Also please dont do a Harem a harem limits your work as it is impossible to make a charecter aRc of 9 people and the supporting cast at the same time this makes the harem seem lifeless. this also makes a lot of people turn away from your story as a lot of people see the word harem attached and then leave the story. i would say stick to one person so that you can have time to fleSh out the charecter and make sure they actually have a personality.
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If I could downvote it, I would! The worst thing I read in a good while! Just some annoying edgy over the top drama that makes you want to kick someone in the head. Just do yourself a favor and forget about reading this thing. You WILL regret it!
Realistically, the whole premise of the story that is explained in the synopsis makes zero sense. If he is a demigod born from Hippolyta and Zeus, and she hates him because of being the son of Zeus, she should also hate Diana because Diana has the same origins. Also the story is another edge lord power fantasy where MC is the most cringe character in existence and you honestly want to kill him every time he is mentioned.
i dont really get the point of making someone reincarnate into an oc because wonder woman already has a twin brother... and like, hes free real-estate
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Calidad de la escritura (3/5); Actualización de estabilidad (2/5); Desarrollo de la historia (1/5); Diseño de personaje (2/5); Fondo del mundo (1/5).
Novela basura malísima ni historia tiene el autor se salta todo y resume todo lo cual no es malo si el autor tuviera talento para eso no la recomendaría para leer salu2
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It's somewhat bad. Plot progresses fast. The main character is portrayed as a dumb,naive, weeb person. For a minute he was acting tough then suddenly begs for mercy.
Characters are wildly inconsistent. Dialogue is childish. Main character is so cringe that I was hoping he'd die every time he the story focused on him. Another edge lord power fantasy.
its a good book with a interesting story, I like the main characters personality. there is more I could see his character has to him like a deep want for his mothers love but not knowing it, or maybe his mother secretly loves him. I could careless if there is a Harem or not in the end it will always be your story I just hope that in a R-18 scene he can use some contraception magic or something similar. But I do like it a lot, i just hope you continue updating and keep up this quality work.
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I like this story. But please he should kill hippolyta. and why was he taunting? I like this story. But please he should kill hippolyta. and why was he taunting? I like this story. But please he should kill hippolyta. and why was he taunting?
without harem, I don’t know where your idea to make a harem came from, but I hope you don’t continue with that idea, it will end the potential that your fic has, harem is a meaningless thing and using for people who want to satisfy their need for attention and also, we are in the 21st century do you think women will accept this? so I hope you don't follow that.