why are you writing two stories in the same chapter?
ph god please no, she's like a mother to him
damn, sounds like one of them realized their mistake just before dying
Can you edit it to make sure you're using the correct pronouns? he/him/his = male she/her/hers = female
she
-Hey Rudy...I love you- he said looking me in the eyes
Anime & Comics · Brian17Greyrath
how does he know it's going to be a boy?
-Congratulations on your new son Rudeus- he told me
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why is he lying to them? it makes no sense. the lie was only supposed to he for the public. I feel like this is just a cheap set up to cheap drama later on.
last part is weird
He married one of my aunts and in an unexpected event he begged my grandfather to lend him help to carry out a coup in his kingdom, my poor grandfather was deceived by Pax and accepted and he even lent him Randolf so that commit her request
Anime & Comics · Brian17Greyrath
Isn't lara a girl?
The truth is that he arrived at an unfortunate time, but it's his fault! He didn't announce his visit in advance so I can't postpone my schedule.
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gross
From the sidelines, Rudeus and Roxy stared in shock. Roy's transformation was almost comical—his petite frame now sported muscles so exaggerated that it looked like a child had been swapped with a miniature bodybuilder.
Mushoku Tensei: The Fool Magician
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