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Synopsis
this is a story about a man who achieved his dream and died for it. And then he gets reincarnated as you do into the world of MHA.
I am a new writer so, please give me feedback so I can correct mistakes and be better in the future
there will probably be no romance in this. there is then there will be no Harem.
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Écrire un avistry writing more dialogue in your story as its just the character narrating the things that happened and the time skip was too much and the details are too little the character development is to forced you should add some conflict so that the story is not just another op character story or if it is an op character story add more interaction between the mc and the other character in the story.
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Please More This Book Is Doing Good So Far so I will Give power Stones Please don't stop this is such a unique idea oh a new idea you should is add some of the moves of Baki in there if you run out of ideas