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A world of chaos.
A world where the stronger is the boss.
A world where the stronger eats the weaks one...
In that world ... A creature was born that has never lost a fight ... A creature that is later known as the strongest one... This creature goes by the name of Asura.
I don't own Bleach or any of its characters as they belong to their respective creators although the main character is mine.
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I'm going to be shameless and rate myself with 5 stars again... to say this: First ... The titles of the chapters are like that because the chapters are separated into parts. Since each one Is more than 4000 words. Second ... My story is slow paced. I describe everything that happens: the moments of the secondary characters, the growth of my protagonist and the other characters and finally the world in which the story unfolds. Thank you for reading :)
Being honest ... Your writing and your story seems like a good start. I was very surprised. You look like a professional translator and congratulations ... even when your first language is not English. I do not understand how you do not rise in ranking. Thanks for writing :) I am from France and I understand everything up to translator. More chapters and you have my support!
you're sick ... And you make a big fanfiction. You have my respect and my support. Good luck in what you do.-------------------------------------------------------☺
I made an account just for this. A good story so far ... Thanks. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Amazong Story! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE.
Great story too bad there are not enough chapters keep this up and you will definitely be a good author. Word count:anwdwadwadwadwadwadadad
I couldn’t really get that far because of the grammar. I mean I don’t know that much about the story but the grammar is really off putting. If the author put a little time into editing and polishing his work, then maybe more people would read it. Unfortunately, as it stands, it is a little unpalatable.
The chapter titles makes me lost interest hahaha. All fights2x hahaha. Im kind of hesitating on reading this😂😂😂😂 I'll just wait for more chaps first before reading xD 😎😎
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More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters!
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Hmm ... I'll just say this! You will like the story and it is refreshing for me. Why? There are many stories in high ranking with poor grammar. that only because they fulfill their wishes of the readers but without understanding how the mc achieved it ... Having so much power or so many women.
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interesting ... but need more cap to give an opinion...........................................................................................................
1) the story isn't bad and I like the idea of a hollow who will become the strongest in hueco mundo 2) your perspective of writing is terrible it's like you want to be third person,second, and first all at the same time which makes the story less understandable 3)if you're gonna write a ff use the original name of the place because last I remember it's not world of hollow it's called hueco mundo and it's not a world it's just in a different dimension 4) the words you use during the story just don't mix well with making it just terrible wording 5)do more research on the manga/anime you wanna write a ff of cuase it makes it easier to understand like you barely have any world background information like not everyone has watched bleach
Ah shit it got dropped and here I was looking for a good bleach fanfic but it's a nice read while it lasted.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊👊✊✊✊✊✊✊👊👊
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Well ... I'm almost always in the hospital. So I will always try to make daily chapters, but if it is accepted well, I will try many. I am new and I would like to know your opinion. Thank you :)