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"What is this? cancer . I've seen more readable translations than this..............................................................................

good start, story is intresting . but you realy dont need to explain a ability in such detail.. twice ,bro we onderstand .............................

Is this a repost? I definitely feel like I’ve read this before.................................................................................

That alone shows that you don’t know anything about Bleach. But the simple answer is yes: one full-blown Cero from an Espada in released form can destroy the entirety of Las Noches. And yes, Las Noches is quite large; according to Nell, it would take about six full days to run around it. as not fighting for days ,when ichigo invaded hueco mundo he fought for 5 days straight. Compare that to Luffy’s fights; most of them are over within 30 minutes or less. And no, just because he fights the same opponent multiple times doesn’t prolong the fights

And yes, almost all of them are afraid of death. Brother, do you consider what percentage of people have Haki or other abilities? It’s quite small. Most people are slaves in some way or another.

True, but first, you’re saying it as if everyone has that ability. Second, how many people actually have it at a level that would make a significant impact?

It's a fun concept, but the power scaling is ridiculous. Comparing 10% of Ulquiorra's strength to a 10 million bounty pirate is off the mark. You do understand that even weaker Vasto Lordes could destroy a town with a weak Cero. Besides that, a normal human couldn't even stand in the presence of a normal Hollow. Ten percent of Ulquiorra’s strength, as a Vasto Lorde, scales way higher. For example, let's take the current Luffy. If you take 10% of his strength and pit him against a 10 million bounty pirate, Luffy would easily stomp the guy to death. In other words, whether it's a 10 million bounty pirate or not, they are still normal people. They shouldn't be able to even withstand that level of Reiryoku or be in the presence of a Vasto Lorde. I understand that you’re trying to balance the story somewhat, but you really should reconsider this aspect.

noting much to say this fic is just other copy off the same concept. i feel like i read this fic multiple times . noting personal to the author you wrichting is good but there are 101 fics thats tell the same storie. all naruto fics feel the same on this site. reincarnation -- reborn in konoha -- having some kind off cheat ---training arc --war arc . like i sad most authors dont even try anymore . naruto world is so big why .why do the mc always stay in konoha why dont they never leaf and explore a bit . anyway sorry for ranting my shit out .

good concept but at its core the fic is so boring .good enough if you have noting els to read.......................................................................................................