Naruto : Dragon Jinchuriki

Overall it was pretty good, but with a few issues. #1 Sometimes character behavior doesn't quite make sense. Like an Anbu squad trying to kill the MC whose an 8 year old child with no reputation out of nowhere. Or Hiruzen attacking him right after after claiming to want to recruit him which isn't Hiruzen behavior. #2 The whole 4 souls thing is bullshit it's clearly 2 souls, you got the MC who reincarnated/transmigrated multiple times then the Dragon. It's not even split personality like the author claims they are both their own distinct individuals. The part where the MC simply watched in horror has Koku slaughtered the miners and did nothing also didn't make sense. If he was so horrified by it why didn't he take back control? And lastly #3 The story needs a bit of editing, theres missed capitalizations, spacing, and grammar issues that would be fixed. Fix these and it'll be 5 stars or at least close to 5 stars.

I loved the story even with some of its inconsistencies but around the 20th chapter the character personality just kind flip flops alot, goes from not slaughtering innocents to indifferent slaughter of innocents, goes mature seasoned fighter who can fight and survive S-rank rogue ninja to a immature child struggling against a few anbu and mist ninja swordsmen, which honestly completely ruined my interest in continuing to read, like the bro is pretty much a world class swordsman and even if he hasn't returned to his peak, he shouldn't be struggling against to fake ninja swordsmen (only way i can think of calling the mist ninja swordsmen)

mc character is all over the place.....................................................................................................................