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Not really a 40k fic, Slaanesh is just a skin. it's a decent read, but it's too slow to update. 3 months, and a single fight sequence is still not finished.
turned mc not just a kid physically but also mentally. the power fantasy part is fine. but meh, what use is all that power if its just another xmen reboot
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I'm going to give my honest review, I hope the author doesn't feel offended or demotivated by it. Firstly, the name of the book is extremely misleading. Author, being completely frank and honest with you, she is not Slaneesh, nor has she been reincarnated as her. She was just reincarnated as a demon-looking mutant, that's all. I was quite disappointed at first, as I thought I would see a Chaos God in Marvel causing confusion and terror, not a girl born as a mutant with the appearance of a demon, it's better to change the name of the book to 'Marvel: I Reincarnated as a Demon' to be honest. That said, my advice is to change the name of the book, because as I said, it is extremely misleading. Secondly, it has two systems, the gacha/template one I understand, but the class one is completely useless so far to be honest. Other than that, it's a good read.
Pour l'instant je trouve ce fanfic super et j'espère que l'auteur continuera ainsi, j'ai hâte de découvrir les futurs chapitres et bonne continuation auteur.
I don’t really like how she going the hero route but I get it I guess. I feel it would be a more interesting story if she was a anti-hero, not good or not evil. I want her to struggle and go through character development. From the first chapter till now everything was just handed to her and she’s just going with the flow, I want her to make more decisions for herself and build more depth as a character. But author I can see how it’s still the beginning of the story so I might have to wait a while for more depth to the story then. But overall the story hasn’t hooked me yet, like it doesn’t have me actively waiting for the next chapter.
I like this ....................................................................................
at first, I thought this fanfic would become a lame story because how lame her wish was, but with how I read further into the story, the story became more fun with how cute mc act (at least in my mind) and how her relative from her mother side not make her difficult to her like her father, what I hope in the future for this fanfic are make mc more interact with her mother and ignore her like most of the story I have ever read and also the interaction between characters need to be improved because it feels short chit chat than long conversation. tldr, wholesome and no drama equal good.
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I haven't read it yet but I'm surprised that a fanfic starring slaanesh or similar doesn't carry the obscene label, he is literally the god of everything disturbing in terms of fetishes that you can imagine, in fact you can imagine the worst thing to make someone suffer and he has already done it, since normal pleasure no longer pleases him, I can't imagine a non-repulsive fanfic about Slaanesh, unless it's pure comedy
It's not a bad novel, but it's nothing like Slaanesh. If you think about what Slaanesh stands for, it's like a prankster saying ‘I'm evil’. It's more like the Marvel version of the manga I was born a space monster.
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Brave, brave… I mean considering the reverence, with which fans sometimes treat Warhammer and “power scales” in general… I would be wary of just taking something more mundane from there, let alone the whole chaos god. Good luck in your journey)))
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Keep up the good work looking forward to the next chapter[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Not really a 40k fic, Slaanesh is just a skin. it's a decent read, but it's too slow to update. 3 months, and a single fight sequence is still not finished.
turned mc not just a kid physically but also mentally. the power fantasy part is fine. but meh, what use is all that power if its just another xmen reboot
first 14 chapters really good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I'm going to give my honest review, I hope the author doesn't feel offended or demotivated by it. Firstly, the name of the book is extremely misleading. Author, being completely frank and honest with you, she is not Slaneesh, nor has she been reincarnated as her. She was just reincarnated as a demon-looking mutant, that's all. I was quite disappointed at first, as I thought I would see a Chaos God in Marvel causing confusion and terror, not a girl born as a mutant with the appearance of a demon, it's better to change the name of the book to 'Marvel: I Reincarnated as a Demon' to be honest. That said, my advice is to change the name of the book, because as I said, it is extremely misleading. Secondly, it has two systems, the gacha/template one I understand, but the class one is completely useless so far to be honest. Other than that, it's a good read.
Pour l'instant je trouve ce fanfic super et j'espère que l'auteur continuera ainsi, j'ai hâte de découvrir les futurs chapitres et bonne continuation auteur.
I don’t really like how she going the hero route but I get it I guess. I feel it would be a more interesting story if she was a anti-hero, not good or not evil. I want her to struggle and go through character development. From the first chapter till now everything was just handed to her and she’s just going with the flow, I want her to make more decisions for herself and build more depth as a character. But author I can see how it’s still the beginning of the story so I might have to wait a while for more depth to the story then. But overall the story hasn’t hooked me yet, like it doesn’t have me actively waiting for the next chapter.
I like this ....................................................................................
at first, I thought this fanfic would become a lame story because how lame her wish was, but with how I read further into the story, the story became more fun with how cute mc act (at least in my mind) and how her relative from her mother side not make her difficult to her like her father, what I hope in the future for this fanfic are make mc more interact with her mother and ignore her like most of the story I have ever read and also the interaction between characters need to be improved because it feels short chit chat than long conversation. tldr, wholesome and no drama equal good.
Mmmmmm mmmmm mmmmm mmmmmm mmmmm mmmmm mmmmmm mmmmm mmmmmm mmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmm mmmmmm mmmmm mmmmmm mmmmm mmmmmm mmmmm mmmmmm mmmmm mmmmmm
I haven't read it yet but I'm surprised that a fanfic starring slaanesh or similar doesn't carry the obscene label, he is literally the god of everything disturbing in terms of fetishes that you can imagine, in fact you can imagine the worst thing to make someone suffer and he has already done it, since normal pleasure no longer pleases him, I can't imagine a non-repulsive fanfic about Slaanesh, unless it's pure comedy
It's not a bad novel, but it's nothing like Slaanesh. If you think about what Slaanesh stands for, it's like a prankster saying ‘I'm evil’. It's more like the Marvel version of the manga I was born a space monster.
🫡^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^^_^
Brave, brave… I mean considering the reverence, with which fans sometimes treat Warhammer and “power scales” in general… I would be wary of just taking something more mundane from there, let alone the whole chaos god. Good luck in your journey)))
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.................... Определенно интересное начало. Будем посмотреть что ждёт нас дальше............ ............ ............ .........................
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Keep up the good work looking forward to the next chapter[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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