Just one thing that bothers me and I wanted to say, the MC calling M'gann 'My Love' all the time. Honestly, it's VERY cheesy and weird, they are teenagers who have been dating for less than a month, not an old couple in their 70s. This isn't constructive criticism or anything, or me asking the author to change this, it's just something that has been bothering me and wanted to say. Other than that, great story.
"It's alright my love, it's alright, let it all out" Gwen softly whispered, bringing her close as J'onn continued.
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I guess I will make one
I agree.
I already have an Overlord fic, it's called Overlord: Guild Wars
Anyway, I don't know if I'm going to write another book for now.
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and you are absolutely right, i just didint think i needed to change Rimuru and Clayman clash
You can, I'm home already
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I WANNA SEE THEIR ROMANCE ALREADY AAAARGG
I do, but he will probably comment again
"...Mommy?" Milim said with a shaky voice, tears forming under her eyes.
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Nope. i can delete his comments, but he will probably comment again.
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I see. A suggestion, if you'd like. Just use the MC lover's names normally in general contexts, and in moments of lemon and romance use whatever terms of endearment you want to use. Like, they're with their team? She call her M'gann or Miss Mars. They are alone in MC's room? She calls her love, babe, etc. The thing is, there is no problem with the MC calling M'gann love, babe, etc, but it's weird when it's used all the time.
"It's alright my love, it's alright, let it all out" Gwen softly whispered, bringing her close as J'onn continued.
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