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Ok, that strange… and because of that quite creepy, wow! Thank you for the work)

Thank you for the translation! And now let chaos begin, because if that complete eradication of Baal. Uh~hu~hu, lets hope, angels will fill shift in their world balance and give their demonic neighbors some additional headaches.

Typical problem with charecters with nearly omnipotent, for their universe, powers. For us, for authors, it is really hard to understand, what to do with mane herous and their nearly omnipotent powers, and continue to plot interesting story. Usually all of us prefer trope of seeking strength, where the rest will follow, but here it can’t be used, and with it problem arising. It is already can be seen in there, like… From where MC policy of none-interference had come from? Lux with power of Allspark all those years was… slaking off all those eons? Why? And why he is so bad at controlling his powers? And it is just surface we’ve yet to understand, because first act of story was action, and not description of current status que.

Don’t surprised, that this work was abandoned, if rumors are true. Honestly, I know that’s just translation, but… Oh, let Wayne die just heroically, because that just… who in their right mind will abandon rift to Diablo world, knowing it’s threat, untouched?! D***, like Gendalf said - “next time through yourself off the cliff and get rid us of this stupidity”. And there is no sigh of even understanding, that MC is at fault here!?

Thank you for the chapter! Arteja would be a fitting name. Cold exterior, white color scheme, machines nickname… Some sort of resemblance to her old name and whole “Ice Queen” vibe. Plus it is interesting to imagine her reaction about being named with proper name from a human directly, what actually can be one of fitting development for her and MC relationship. Best of luck to you in life and with your storys, author)

That was great!👌🙂😏😁

Awesome!