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I love it already I just wish there were more chapters. I believe in you author stay strong and please don't stop (don't drop the book). Extremely interestingly written, fun to read, great perspective, I hope for more chapters.
Bloody great start! You have no idea how hard it is to find a decent Mandalorian fic. Most I could find were garbage on ao3 and were jango x obi wan. Thank Mandalore the ultimate for a good fic!
Could you please maybe decrease the force usage? You have a really nice story here that you have been writing. It would really suck if you potentially ruin it to keep up with all the force bullshit of the main character. you are making him to overpowered for like no reason at all. Maybe change it to a mutation of increased awareness and faster healing? Otherwise keep up the good work.
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So far so great! One of the few good Star wars fan fics so far. Need more chapters.
I like the story so far, and I don't see a lot of mandalorian fan fiction so keep up the good work
This is really good so far, nice development and it's nice having another mandolorian story out that looks well done so far
I haven't even read yet. Sending this 5 🌟 in hopes that the author doesn't drop. Have been missing some Star Wars fics. Haven't read one about a Mando that hasn't been dropped.
I love it already I just wish there were more chapters. I believe in you author stay strong and please don't stop (don't drop the book). Extremely interestingly written, fun to read, great perspective, I hope for more chapters.
Bloody great start! You have no idea how hard it is to find a decent Mandalorian fic. Most I could find were garbage on ao3 and were jango x obi wan. Thank Mandalore the ultimate for a good fic!
Could you please maybe decrease the force usage? You have a really nice story here that you have been writing. It would really suck if you potentially ruin it to keep up with all the force bullshit of the main character. you are making him to overpowered for like no reason at all. Maybe change it to a mutation of increased awareness and faster healing? Otherwise keep up the good work.
Spoiler de révélation So far so great! One of the few good Star wars fan fics so far. Need more chapters.
I like the story so far, and I don't see a lot of mandalorian fan fiction so keep up the good work
This is really good so far, nice development and it's nice having another mandolorian story out that looks well done so far
I haven't even read yet. Sending this 5 🌟 in hopes that the author doesn't drop. Have been missing some Star Wars fics. Haven't read one about a Mando that hasn't been dropped.