Great job. Even I'm frightened with how you cooked with this chapter.
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
don't mess with those keyboard warriors. Keeping with the theme....they'll make you cough blood. 😆
As someone who had once debated countless opponents online in his past life, Chen Ming had mastered the art of verbal sparring, becoming a skilled provocateur. Though he hadn't practiced in years, his sharp tongue quickly had Yu Tianheng's veins bulging in fury.
Douluo: Emerald Poison Emperor
Anime & Comics · AbsoluteCode
Hey,Author. At least on my side, the lack of comments is unintentional. Love your work. TFTC.
TFTC
I've read the og, and I can only say I bow before your wisdom
How's the story going so far? I won't lie, it's not exactly the best work so far, as the best ones I have written are after the World Cup and when the Premier League starts, as I started writing more original chapters. Also, for anyone that reads that Chinese story knows that that MC goes to Manchester United for some weird ass, I plan on rewriting that to another team and just making that story mine at that point. But that's not set in stone yet; we'll see how that goes.
England's Greatest
Celebrities · Sinbad_12
Great work so far. I've read the original, and I can say that the quality of your translation, as well as the adjustments you've made, have worked out really well. Looking at the MC, I appreciated the lack of Beckham glazing in comparison to the original. Let's be honest. Besides those important moments in Beckham's career, there have to be so many great and historical midfielders to choose from. I'm not gonna lie. I skipped a lot of the glazing. In response to one of your earlier chapter comments on the female lead, I would suggest something along the lines of hitting it off due to mutual interest from both and interactions over some time from things like messages and work together before leading into a relationship(seems the natural thing). TBH, anything you come up with would be better than the original nonexistent relationship timeline. The original was ridiculous as you didn't see her for what felt like 20 or 30 chapters between each interaction. Anyway, keep up the good work by far one of my favorite sports translations, and with the work you've put in, I would say that it's not far from #1.
Mentioned it a previous comment. By the scale of the story, it's not necessarily unique. David Silva would have been playing a similar role at Man City by this point. MC would probably still be among the pioneering players for tgisbsor of role.
[I don't even know if this is true, I was busy filling out some forms when I was working on this chapter, so I didn't even research it like I have been doing for this story, so my bad if this is some bs.]Â
England's Greatest
Celebrities · Sinbad_12
David/ Bernardo Silva role. Midfielder with ability to play on the wings as well as organize.
This tactic, where a midfielder drifts wide instead of relying on pure speed, represented a forward-thinking evolution in football tactics. By positioning a player with exceptional ball control and vision on the flank, the team gained versatility. Tristan could deliver precise crosses into the box, switch play effectively, or recycle possession back to central areas, keeping Arsenal's defense guessing.
England's Greatest
Celebrities · Sinbad_12
I love the concept. Hopefully, you don't drop it like so many others. Take my power stones for such good work. 😆
Star Wars: Merek Skywalker
Movies · Utopian_Stories