KnuckledBehemoth

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KnuckledBehemoth
KnuckledBehemoth
4 hours ago
Posted

Probably the most perfect start to any starwars or 40k fanfic I've read (and I've read a bunch) great job sticking to the characters attitudes instead of having them bend to the new place they are at. I also love how you have 3 different astartes perspectives that all differ even if slightly. Can't wait for more chapters. Do you have a Patreon with advanced chapters?

KnuckledBehemoth
KnuckledBehemoth
7 days ago
Replied to DonGuirit

in a previous note this world was the Prototype world it was changed to this

KnuckledBehemoth
KnuckledBehemoth
7 days ago
Commented

fruitless imo. if you do give him a fruit maybe the vampire fruit.

KnuckledBehemoth
KnuckledBehemoth
12 days ago
Replied to Gh0st00

probably auto-translate

"Shit!" I shout angrily, as the second zombie is coming, and with my gun broken, the distance advantage no longer works. I involuntarily start to move away, but end up trapped against the wall.

After the Last Dawn - TWD

After the Last Dawn - TWD

TV · Keiou_Owlo

KnuckledBehemoth
KnuckledBehemoth
14 days ago
Commented

missed a chance to say Alabasta instead of Sahara because he wouldn't know about the Sahara

Nearby, a merman who shared Ace's cell was watching enviously. "Hey, Brother Ace, let me have a sip, too! My mouth's drier than the Sahara!"

One Piece: Heaven-Defying Talent

One Piece: Heaven-Defying Talent

Anime & Comics · GodOfReader

KnuckledBehemoth
KnuckledBehemoth
29 days ago
Commented

Having a wind jutsu that changes air pressure to damage/destroy ear drums. And maybe a jutsu that he uses to put a bit of air in his enemy's blood that can be super fatal and sounds like something that would be efficient enough for his mindset.

KnuckledBehemoth
KnuckledBehemoth
1 months ago
Posted

Fantastic so far. Unique take on Naruto reincarnation and i love how you're showing his growth and even though you keep it within a small group of people he interacts with the story already feels broad. keep up the great work! 👍

KnuckledBehemoth
KnuckledBehemoth
1 months ago
Replied to _D_OMNINOMAD

same!

Of course, it was—I wasn't the type to fail when I put my mind to something. But still, standing outside the Yamanaka Clan's library, I couldn't help but feel a flicker of disappointment. 

Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius

Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius

Anime & Comics · DreamSomeday

KnuckledBehemoth
KnuckledBehemoth
1 months ago
Posted

So far so great! One of the few good Star wars fan fics so far. Need more chapters.

KnuckledBehemoth
KnuckledBehemoth
1 months ago
Replied to XXDarkKingXX

love scarlet architect