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Bro did you drop this if not then when are you going to upload new chapters
it okay just seems thier is no progress in his strength and i dont like that hes not getting stronger and has to use the death power to barely do anything.
Love this fanfic ❤️ I fr can't wait for more updates 🙏🏽 Author thanks for this ff it's really good ❤️
Not big into Naruto-verse or fanfics, but I didn't mind this one. MC is op, but author keeps it fresh enough that it is not a drag. The only real downside I see is I can't read more already (which is not a bad thing).
Интересная история у этого фанфика. Читал довольно много фанфиков по миру Наруто и могу сказать что это хороший фанфик!!! Главный герой прописан и поставлен хорошо, история движется и есть интрига в этой истории...
This is a very stupid and implausible fanfic. I wasted my time on this (the dialogue... and the way the author wants to build the relationship between MC and Mikoto... is just disgusting).
Good fanfic I enjoy it, like that it's starts differently than other fanfics from naruto verse, above all story is good for me but everyone has there own opinions. Author ,Thanks for the fanfic is really enjoyable can't wait for more updates since I'm all caught up 😁 Good job ur doing great so far 👍🏽
When Mc says we have time and can take it slow. It's where I loose my interest in any novel/fanfiction
this is just a bad wish fulfilment fic, i don't mind stuff like this usually but this is just bad, the MC is just another super virgin harem collector, and why is mikoto so dumbed down?? she obviously knew that the village and clan was in odds with each other, and most of not all scenes feel very forced, just not my kinda novel, if you like it gl ig
Is this a wish fulfilment type FF, because if not then is this alternate Naruto world because many things don't line up. Don't expect a good story, as for 🍋 I don't care about them so I didn't read those hence I can't say if they were good or not.
The story overall is just forced nonsense. the grammar is cool but but by chapter 3 you can tell exactly where the story is headed. he'll be catching all the rogue women or ones at odds with their ninja villages. The way he snags em isn't so unbelievable but the way he keeps em is. and Mikoto seemed like such an idiot. I wouldn't ever believe that was the mom of itachi. too much nonsense to make this story work for me. So ill pass, not braindead enough at the moment.
the mc simps over every girl he sees.........maybe it's just coz i haven't read enough but not my cup of tea........though the grammar is superb
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This is really bad. Objectively the grammar and syntax us fine and plenty readable, bit the character make absolutely no sense. He revives mikoto and 10 minutes later after seeing her dead husband's body, he suddenly remembers after lusting after her unconscious body that her husband is dead. She asks how he revived her amd he answers by answering a totally different question and she just accepts it? She doesn't push she doesn't demand it's like his non answer to a very very important and godlike ability is no big deal. Hard limits are imposed on certain abilities and immediately contradicted on the same chapter. This is one of the worst naruto fanfics I have ever read.
This fanfic is next level! The author is killing it—can't wait for next chapter. 🚀🚀
Bro did you drop this if not then when are you going to upload new chapters
it okay just seems thier is no progress in his strength and i dont like that hes not getting stronger and has to use the death power to barely do anything.
Love this fanfic ❤️ I fr can't wait for more updates 🙏🏽 Author thanks for this ff it's really good ❤️
Not big into Naruto-verse or fanfics, but I didn't mind this one. MC is op, but author keeps it fresh enough that it is not a drag. The only real downside I see is I can't read more already (which is not a bad thing).
Интересная история у этого фанфика. Читал довольно много фанфиков по миру Наруто и могу сказать что это хороший фанфик!!! Главный герой прописан и поставлен хорошо, история движется и есть интрига в этой истории...
This is a very stupid and implausible fanfic. I wasted my time on this (the dialogue... and the way the author wants to build the relationship between MC and Mikoto... is just disgusting).
Good fanfic I enjoy it, like that it's starts differently than other fanfics from naruto verse, above all story is good for me but everyone has there own opinions. Author ,Thanks for the fanfic is really enjoyable can't wait for more updates since I'm all caught up 😁 Good job ur doing great so far 👍🏽
When Mc says we have time and can take it slow. It's where I loose my interest in any novel/fanfiction
this is just a bad wish fulfilment fic, i don't mind stuff like this usually but this is just bad, the MC is just another super virgin harem collector, and why is mikoto so dumbed down?? she obviously knew that the village and clan was in odds with each other, and most of not all scenes feel very forced, just not my kinda novel, if you like it gl ig
Is this a wish fulfilment type FF, because if not then is this alternate Naruto world because many things don't line up. Don't expect a good story, as for 🍋 I don't care about them so I didn't read those hence I can't say if they were good or not.
The story overall is just forced nonsense. the grammar is cool but but by chapter 3 you can tell exactly where the story is headed. he'll be catching all the rogue women or ones at odds with their ninja villages. The way he snags em isn't so unbelievable but the way he keeps em is. and Mikoto seemed like such an idiot. I wouldn't ever believe that was the mom of itachi. too much nonsense to make this story work for me. So ill pass, not braindead enough at the moment.
the mc simps over every girl he sees.........maybe it's just coz i haven't read enough but not my cup of tea........though the grammar is superb
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This is really bad. Objectively the grammar and syntax us fine and plenty readable, bit the character make absolutely no sense. He revives mikoto and 10 minutes later after seeing her dead husband's body, he suddenly remembers after lusting after her unconscious body that her husband is dead. She asks how he revived her amd he answers by answering a totally different question and she just accepts it? She doesn't push she doesn't demand it's like his non answer to a very very important and godlike ability is no big deal. Hard limits are imposed on certain abilities and immediately contradicted on the same chapter. This is one of the worst naruto fanfics I have ever read.
This fanfic is next level! The author is killing it—can't wait for next chapter. 🚀🚀