Webnovel Author: Godfather_Gambler - Novel&Fanfic Collection

He can notice tiny details around him, like the size and shape of things, and even feel life forces and electricity. What makes him special is that his senses mix together – sounds turn into colors, electrical hums have textures. It's like all senses working together to form an image of what he cannot see. This helps him understand the world in a really cool way, and his sixth sense.

He considered the best option was to follow the sun. "In this direction," he said, pointing toward the sun. His eyes met hers briefly, and a hint of a smile softened his stern expression.

Douluo: The Blind One

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Godfather_Gambler

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Douluo: The Blind One

Anime & Comics · Godfather_Gambler

Godfather_Gambler

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Douluo: The Blind One

Anime & Comics · Godfather_Gambler

Godfather_Gambler

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Replied to Jayasavage

Observation is the process of focusing on something or someone to gather information for critical evaluation. It is more than just passively seeing

ch 67 Chapter 67 Bo Zhi The white haird women

Douluo: The Blind One

Anime & Comics · Godfather_Gambler

Godfather_Gambler

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Replied to Jayasavage

Why do you think it is cured🤔

ch 67 Chapter 67 Bo Zhi The white haird women

Douluo: The Blind One

Anime & Comics · Godfather_Gambler

Godfather_Gambler

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Replied to HornyPatrol

Well, who knows? it's a fantasy world, maybe it took the cub more than one year to come into existence.

In this way, she was raised until she was seven years old!

Duo Po: My Daughter Descended, Boasting of me as the Dou Di

Anime & Comics · Godfather_Gambler

Godfather_Gambler

5mth

Commented

She Long is the one who stopped Mr. Sword Douluo, I'll edit it after getting some sleep.

But before he could act, a figure materialized before him, obstructing his path.

Douluo: The Blind One

Anime & Comics · Godfather_Gambler

Godfather_Gambler

7mth

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I am giving this review based on my liking, and everyone has different preferences. Also, as an author, here are the things I would suggest:-Hermes woke up from his slumber. I think 'slumber' is not the correct word; describing how he opened his eyes would be smoother.-The advice I give to every author is that breaking the long paragraph into shorter ones can enhance readability, especially during transitions or changes in the character's thoughts.-The transition from the physical sensations to the character's memories of the previous night is a bit abrupt.-"Too bad I don't have any cell service right now. Or else, I would have been able to call 911, let alone expose some alien murals..." could be clearer if separated into two sentences for better readability.-Using "He was filled with fear, knowing that he might never see his family again," might sound much better than "may." -And avoid using 'Hermes couldn't help but' multiple times in a single Chapter, as it was used three times, and in the starting line at that.

The Cosmic Throne

Fantasy · FrozenOverTheMoon

Godfather_Gambler

7mth

Replied to Godfather_Gambler

*it is

Douluo: The Blind One

Anime & Comics · Godfather_Gambler

Godfather_Gambler

7mth

Replied to Abayomi_Atoyegbe

her charm skill relies on her opponent's senses, not their sight. When she activates her charm skill, she creates an illusion that is powerful enough that it can even deceive blind characters.

Bibi Dong's expression twisted into one of disgust as she realized the truth. This technique not only concealed spirit ring age but also limited spirit ring usage and hid the true quality of the martial spirit. As she was taking the Rakshasa God test, her innate disdain for holy attribute martial spirits intensified, In the midst of the intense battle, the atmosphere grew more tense as Bibi Dong's eyes gleamed with a mix of excitement and malice. She eagerly awaited the outcome of the fight, ready to seize the opportunity and potentially manipulate Hun Yu's situation for her own benefit.

Douluo: The Blind One

Anime & Comics · Godfather_Gambler

Godfather_Gambler

7mth

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I don't know myself. 💀 My mind is always changing, but currently, I am a single heroine.

Douluo: The Blind One

Anime & Comics · Godfather_Gambler

Godfather_Gambler

7mth

Replied to XAZVAPB0OTH

It indicates change in pov, like shift in the camera from the hero to the villain

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Douluo: The Blind One

Anime & Comics · Godfather_Gambler

Godfather_Gambler

9mth

Replied to Mystical_Z

same 💀

My master then asked me to fight it, and I nodded in agreement. I approached the soul beast directly, as Master Yun said that sneak attacks were used by those who didn't have confidence in their strength and were also used by cowards. The Holy Flame Eagle was on high alert as I released my martial soul and my spirit ring, Peacock Precision.

Douluo: The Blind One

Anime & Comics · Godfather_Gambler

Godfather_Gambler

9mth

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My master then asked me to fight it, and I nodded in agreement. I approached the soul beast directly, as Master Yun said that sneak attacks were used by those who didn't have confidence in their strength and were also used by cowards. The Holy Flame Eagle was on high alert as I released my martial soul and my spirit ring, Peacock Precision.