Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

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Frowfy

Author here. This is my first attempt at writing, I'm open to constructive critics. I couldn't find a good and long fanfic about S.U, so I decided to create one. This is the result of my consistent hard work. I will improve everyday. I apologize any inconsistence or grammar mistake, I hope you can enjoy this and remember about the good times of Steven Universe again.

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TheDarkReader

I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it I'm a LGBT hater and I'm proud of it

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Binge_Reader69

finally a steven universe fic, will there be romance and if so please tell me its lapis

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chief321

5 stars because of steven universe fic pls don't drop I like it so far keep up the good work ..........................................................

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Zyanid_Warfare

Awesome fic, I love the idea and the MC is so interesting… I love the way it’s going and I’m hyped for more, absolutely no complaints… Just please don’t drop it… even if you only updated once every other week, doesn’t matter how fast or slow the updates come as long as it keeps going cuz I’ll see the end eventually as long as it doesn’t stop

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cryzsalix

I came looking for copper and found gems, joke intended. Aside from the fact that the tone of the fanfic is darker than I expected, I have nothing negative to say. The pace is slow, but that is clearly the intention and it is not to the detriment of the fanfic, on the contrary, I would say it is a strong point. The author manages to create a description of the characters' inner emotions and thoughts that really makes you feel immersed in them. It is a great read and I genuinely don't understand where the author got the legendary lost ability to combine multiple points of view into a coherent and engaging narrative.

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SomeRandomReader_

Its honestly one of the best fics i’ve read in a while and well on the way to best if it only had more chapters

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MapleHinataSyrup

Cute cute cute the disguise is tooooo cuteeeeeeeee.... .................. ................. .................. ......... .................. ..................

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SalveYing

I've already read 13 chapters, and I have to say, I love it. Great writing! I look forward to seeing more of your work, keep it up! 👌..........

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Vitor_Ribeiro

Firstly, good morning, good afternoon and good night Writer and Readers. I would like to talk about this work, as the title itself says it is a Steven Universe fanfic, I know how there are many haters of this cartoon, but I suggest giving it a chance if you just want to enjoy a different fanfic from this very interesting Rebecca Sugar universe. About the work, it starts as a common cliché of reincarnation, even more so as technically a gender bender since the gens have a feminine appearance even though they don't technically have genders, but that doesn't matter, what matters is that this work works well with the characters secondary characters and with the construction of the world, while maintaining a fun side which is the mistake that the other characters have in relation to the protagonist because they do not understand the truth about the MC's past, but this at the same time develops a connection in a sublime way. true between this MC who is a poor fellow with the other characters in the work, and thank you very much for the cuteness of some moments in the work, this heart of a Badboy thanks you PS: I was very happy to see some words in Brazilian Portuguese in the work, it was a very pleasant surprise

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Kyran_Ambrosius

Love it. Theres struggle and growth. And the characters don't feeel 2 dimensional , i also like that its kinda slow pace.

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Random_Entity

This is pretty good, love to see where this is headed.

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SpookierSapling

Perfection. This is a great really amazing story. The writing style of the author has me invested and I read up to the latest chaptee already and now I want more. 100% anybody seeing this, give this story a read.

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Law_of_Self_doubt

Good morning/afternoon/night/whatever time you are in all I can say about this book is that ia can't find the words to express how much I love it or how good is the writing style of the author very creative and make the reader feel all the colourful emotions in it thank you very much for allowing me to read and enjoy such a book and I hope you continue the super good writing and never stop i truly enjoy reading it

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Lucia_Garcia_8026

Thank you for writing this, there's so few SU fics. I hope you can continue (make sure to not burn yourself put tho (taking breaks can help in the long run))

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Zinkoro

As a die-hard fan of this wonderful work of Fan-Fiction. I give it 5 stars. Seriously speaking, I love stories that take the trouble to give details of the interactions between the characters, how they think and that. It is ESSENCE.

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BigBud

Good. , ? ! ‘ - / : ; ( ) $ & @ “ _ \ | ~ < > € £ ¥ •

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Lechuzape

well, it's very interesting........ pls more!!!!!........................................................................................................

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MapleHinataSyrup

Ok first review haven't read it yet but let me tell you that a title says a lot of things so depending on your answer to my question I might or might not read so my question is like the title is the gem gonna stay broken for a long time cause if not the title makes me think a bit that the will