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cryzsalix
male LV 4I just enjoy putting my ideas into stories, seeing my characters come to life is very satisfying, and it's even more satisfying when people enjoy what I write. English is not my native language.
2018-10-29 Joint Mexico
yeah the justice league hasn't even formed yet and bruce could already kill them all and keep the world safe by himself with machines and guns... when you think about it it really makes all the other characters irrelevant.
'That boy is more dangerous than I originally believed. I thought that his appearance after one of the oracles made the prophecy of a man killing a god was just a coincidence, but it seems that destiny truly doesn't make mistakes... I doubt I can stop him from leaving after this, but I still need to somehow make sure that he doesn't perceive the Amazons as a threat to him. We can take on the men's world if worse comes to worst but a war against him and his... Machine army will cost us more than we can afford. Even I cannot fathom how much more dangerous and powerful he will grow with time.' She contemplated with a frown on her face. 'I need to make sure that he will never be a danger to Amazons... but how?'
DC: I am Bruce Wayne
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
Ok, I've already vented my negativity and dislike for this arc in other comments, now, I just want them to give Bruce something cool but not OP.
You do realize that's just your ego talking right? Oh no, they diverted your vacation trip to prevent the world from being destroyed and the female population reduced to sexual slavery, you need to get revenge so you don't feel weak and manipulable.
'I have been focusing too much on small-time criminals. I need to prepare against every possible scenario if I want to be truly invincible including gods, demons, and everything in between. I need to grow so strong that no god or goddess ever dares to make use of me in any way, no matter how noble of a purpose it is.' I thought to myself with determination.
DC: I am Bruce Wayne
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
Sure, absorbing what is essentially a divine, eternal, indestructible soul and mind... because you're batman... dude, are you serious? He's going to kill Darkside tomorrow and I don't even know what a challenge that is supposed to be for him anymore.
"Don't worry, the pain shouldn't last too long. Soon, you will be one of us. We required psionic energy to resist this parasite invading this mindscape and the... divine psychic energy that you are composed of, should be just enough to fortify this place and make sure that we are powerful enough to not just completely evict this unwanted bug out of here but also be what we are truly meant to be... Agents meant to protect this place and eradicate anyone threatening our creator's mind." The voice explained with pure confidence and disgust audible in his voice, his disgust directed at not just the psychic remnant of Ares but even the Titan itself.
DC: I am Bruce Wayne
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
While I enjoy this fanfic in general, I really hated this arc for doing the thing I hate most when people do it with Batman, which is give him a bunch of ridiculous stuff and plot armor and let him go kill gods. In your case, you did it literally.
Poquito pesado en el drama, pero feliz de ver una representación positiva de Xavier que realmente hable de su vinculo paternal con muchos de los X-Men. Pregunta, el Mc puede ver el fenix y simplemente copiarlo?
The resolution of the Bucky problem was a bit rushed, but it's also true that they were told all the right things. I kind of pity Zola, who tried to screw everyone over but only ended up giving away a bunch of top secret information and then got screwed.
Ugh, and how could I forget how they praise their food above all others. Or when they talk about how horrible American porous skin is or how other races stink and aren't attractive because they're not Chinese or don't use Chinese products. God, I didn't remember how traumatized Chinese novels left me, and we're not even talking about how they turned everything into a Xianxia/Wuxia cultivation novel.
Hey just because 99.99% of Chinese FFs are horrible doesn't give you the right to say how horrible they are, with their cynical racism, sexism that they even boast about and their contempt for other cultures. You just forgot to talk about the thousands of good ideas that died horribly because of having the classic Chinese Mc and his ridiculousness of being the celestial emperor or some similar weird shit. Jokes aside, if that's the angle you're going to take, I think I'm pretty interested in reading more, after all I really like a good old fashioned hero story, not the dark stories full of sadism and sexual abuse that seem to plague Marvel and DC FFs.
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original PATH OF THE STAR HUNTER
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Forced to face how vast and dangerous the universe really is, Desmond decides to seize the opportunity to gain the power he needs to protect what he loves, for his own world is far from safe. Traveling through various worlds, Desmond gathers treasures and powers, gradually discovering the dark secrets that lie behind the false tranquility. If you like this novel, don't forget to comment, donate Power Stones, and write a review. I'm currently working on another novel called "Divine Madness", Take a look around and see if it's to your liking; all support is welcome.712 Chs 3.2k Collections
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Divine Madness
After ten thousand years in a cage in a forgotten place in the depths of hell, Azmodiel feels an irresistible call only to meet his destiny. Now inexplicably chained, Azmodiel finds himself tied to a human girl named Alice, whom he cannot harm or corrupt. Being bound to the girl's magical grimoire, Azmodiel must now guide her, hoping the girl will gain control over the grimoire's power and release him. But will Azmodiel achieve his mission before the influence of this human girl reminds him of the being he once was, or will the girl succumb to the vortex of insanity that is this demon that came to her aid? Author's note: I am currently working on reviewing and editing all previously uploaded content. You can expect minor changes, a big improvement in the quality of the content as well as an expansion of the content. The chapters will carry the "Edited" label as they are updated, during the process there will be a discrepancy between the already edited content and the one still to be updated, I apologize in advance.17 Chs 21 Collections
It's a pretty entertaining story. Some of the harem parts are a bit forced, but that goes for almost the entire genre, especially in fanfics set in worlds where polygamy isn't widely accepted. It's interesting to see the character growth, and all the cool armor, etc. It has some slow story arcs, but it doesn't affect the reading pace too much other than in the beginning. My only real problem with it comes very late in the story because of how ridiculously OP the MC starts to get and he does it at a very fast pace. At some point he just feels like an overly powerful protagonist who simply chooses to call himself Batman, rather than feeling like Batman. For those who like OP protagonists, that may be fine, but to me it feels like there's no challenge or danger that would really make him push himself unless he chooses not to pull out the OP stuff he keeps in his back pocket, which makes it feel artificial and pointless.
DC: I am Bruce Wayne
Anime & Comics · God_Doom