Mercenary (Asoiaf)

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Mahruf_Hassan

It's very poorly written, the idea is good writing quality is horabel💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

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executionner

....................................................... Seeing the house name was enough for me to quit the story, well done hahahahhahah great success. İts hard to achive this author ........................................................

LV 4

KingK9

automatic 1 star for the word filler chapter. plus there's a bunch of time skips in the first and third chapter, you would be doing yourself a favor by skipping this book.

LV 4

lordhokage

Mc with his mothers death and having no close family joins the rose mercenary group with the goal of eventually becoming a big merchant/mercenary and getting revenge on his mothers family for killing his mother.....(2 year timeskip) ...... Mc is a close friend of Martells wants to be the greatest uncle to the kids and is willing to die for them.atleast mention he met the Martells before or something the entire character of the Mc changed instantly if you're using time skip atleast just give a rough summary of what he was doing

LV 4

Ash_D_Born

Keeping the tradition of giving myself 5 stars👊🏿

LV 3

Ghalib_Ali_5133

Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Kavindu_Ruwanara

Well, it is interesting and enjoyable. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 3

Little_El

Not the best.too many plot holes , a lot of forced relationships , I hated the fact that he chose Snowstark , it's so stupid, it makes me want to cringe every time I read it , these children are not going to thank him for this name, it only reminds us that his house is a bastard house, watched the Targaryens and Baratheons , people almost forget it was a Targaryen bastard who trained him , it lacks originality in short I loved the fact that he made a name for himself before becoming lord

LV 15

Patrick_hell123

love your stories they keep me interested

LV 14

Ninewive

good story so far. but why are you monologuing? the norm is "speaking" 'monologuing'

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DaoistGa76Np

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LV 4

Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 4

TheGeekWhoLived

Very fast paced but I like it this way. Not the best in writing quality, but the story is intriguing. Hoping the author doesn't drop this work.

LV 14

Monarch_freereader

For the tradition give you five stars Well the story is definitely great i hope it persists till its reached its completion. May the author be blessed with inspiration to keep on wrinting this novel

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Oleg_Nikitin

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LV 4

Azmodan_TheLesser

Originally, I didn't plan on reading this book, but so far, it's bloody brilliant. It's well written good progression. Well done, and keep at it.

LV 4

Alberto_Aguilar_4637

"Goku, eta vaina e sería", es lo que pensé al ver la historia

LV 2

Alfonso21

Muy buena historia sigue Hasi, que los malos comentarios no te detengan de hacer lo te gusta y termina está historia con grandeza y un final épico

LV 14

Victor_7740

This is actually a good novel. Just work on ur dialogue a lil bit, and make it less confusing

LV 15

JayFireblood

I love the story so far, but it has a few problems. Which are mostly some poor grammer problems and using ' ' for speak which is off putting. WQ: 3 SD:4 CD:4 US:4 WB:3