This level of description is fine with me.
Author Note: Do y'all want this kind of chapter in the future where I explain the carnage? Or do yall want a more PG version where I tone down the description.
TV · Ninja_King_3834
This is such a beautiful scene. Thanks for sharing this chapter!
All in all, not a bad way to end the night.
TV · elfon
Wow, this is becoming a great read like you Jon Artica story. I am intrigued how Jon would deal with Bloodraven. I just hope you don't make this story a repeatition of your Artica story, I want to see this go in a different direction.
That was an awesome fight scene. Loved the chapter.
I liked the maturity Daenerys showed in this chapter and how you built it so she could reach there. I'm really interested in her character arc and what she would become in a few years.
I began working on Daenerys' maturity, as she starts to develop. The girl thinks a lot about the dreams she had and didn't dislike anything she saw.
Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague
Well-written, timely updates, humorous, lemony and all I want in one fic................................................................................
Make Alicent. If you choose Elia, make sure that the decision is something pre-discussed with Alicent.
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TV · Ninja_King_3834
Dude, If any story deserves a 5 star rating from it's own author, it is this fic. So proudly upgrade the rating you gave to 5.
A very well written HP fic on Webnovel after a very long time. Even though the story followed the regular HP&tPS plot mostly till now, I never felt bored. The changes made are well planned, didn't feel forced. Its sad to hear that there would be no updates for this story till Jan but fine. Ace your exams and get back to give us more awesome stuff.
Your attempt was impressive!
I wanted to try creating an atmosphere of what a city in Yi-Ti would be like. I hope I didn't fail at that...
Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague