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Automaton Magi-Replica : In the new world with a robot creation system

Fantasy 69 Chapitres 844.2K Affichage
Auteur: Chronicle27

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Synopsis

Henry an intelligent and former professional fighter was left abandoned and betrayed to die. He awakens in his next life with a unique power in this world of magical nature. Will he be beaten down by this world and its residents or will it be him who they will come to fear.

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Hi everyone, thank you for taking time out of your busy day and reading my story. I began writing because I simply couldn't find stories similar to what I wrote and for those that are written, I have already read them. Or they go on indefinite Hiatus and then I feel empty inside.

What to expect?

-Strong Mc to even more OP MC
-MC is Cold and Cunning / If he does something out of good will, it is because it will benefit him.
-MC is Non-Human
-Side characters that each serve their purpose / and aren't just forgotten.
-Slow paced build up and a few time skips but small jump skips.
-Decent World building is a must
-No Harem/ but some small romance
-Kingdom building
-System/ but won't focus too much on crunching numbers. It will be kept at reasonable numbers.
-1 chapter a day keeps the reader at bay.
-Each chapter is 1,300 to 1,700 words.


Hope you guys enjoy my story, honestly any feedback would be nice so I may improve the story. I'm flying blind here so far. Have a nice day! :D

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    Stone -- Power stone

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    Sparky20049

    I Like, but democracy doesn’t [img=angry]

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    9mth
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    WEBUniverse

    The genre says overpowered but there has not been any showcase of the mc having such. Boring as I was looking specifically towards op genre books.

    8mth
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    Toast_supreme

    The book is excellent. It gives a good background for our Mc and his passion for things. The story being in a fantasy world makes it more appealing to others and O can confidently say any readers interested in sc-fi fantasy will enjoy this book

    9mth
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    Daniel_R

    I really like this story and hope it continues, instead of seeing it end abruptly. The plot is great, the world building is excellent, all around a good read.

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    ORIGINofALL

    character development is good and the writing style of author is also interesting well now just waiting for author to update the novel hopefully he does

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    dead_daoist

    author could not even write some average character development. its like he was living in some kind of twisted world . it a meh novel at best. not recommended.

    7mth
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    acdc2113

    this book is very good and you can tell that author has spent a lot of time writing each chapter, they have a well thought out plan for the book Direction and they have spent time developing each character, this is one of my favourite books and has made me want to start writing again, I would like to thank the author for that.

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    Sordahon

    Reading this book counts as treason and will result in arrest, relocation or termination. Chronicle27 was already taken into costody. Ministry of Truth.

    7mth
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    chickenugget

    This is a solid novel to read if you like robots and magic.

    8mth
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    Hans_Peter_2443

    this book is really good i can't stop to read it.

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    Kaishepard28

    This is my opinion. quality is definitely here. I gave it 4 stars because i am picky. It flows great to ME it just has some places where there's a missing letter or such. Story is great i like the premise of the mc becoming a robot cybernetic. great weapon choices plus him going for the long game. Definitely check this out i sure am glad i found this and hope the Author keeps it going and gives us a great ending after many many more chapters.

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    PinkRa
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    Hear me out on this one, this is one of those gems that i've found althroughout reading and this is amazing!!! and also HEART. STEEL. WE. KILL. UNTO. DAWN. IRON. WILL. UNTO DAWN. CYBERSTAN. CAN'T KEEP HER DOWN. WE COUNT DOWN. UNTO WAR. Also author, give em a marching cadence song like from the automatons of helldivers 2 from which I just used.

    9mth
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    Goodorbad

    Okay i got to say that this novel really surprises me the novel is good the background is good to some extent but not bad the main character is really good there isn’t any mistakes I think but this got me hooked will there still only 14 chapters so this is only from what I got I still don’t know what the main character will do in this life I was thinking of kingdom building or whatever the author thinks about but I’m okay with it theirs no harem or many others characters that are useless and the power system the mc has is cool there isn’t much of the system but it’s okay.

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    10mth
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    UnwantedTraveler

    Great story that sadly seems to have been abandoned by the author.

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    Chibaku_Monster

    I've seen a book like this before based on Ultron in a magical world. MC basically spawns near a castle the the dwarves abandoned because Monsters over ran it and MC made it into his factory since it was rich in minerals. and so and so on. and the writer of such a novel was a teacher. Am I right author??

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    Kqro
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    I really like the story and how the mc is smart, at the beginning i was dissapointed about the cultivation elements but after reading some more i understood that the power system was more on the magic type, i recommend this work! I hope mc will make a more human looking Sentinel, so he will not need to be big and cover his face, Good luck!

    9mth
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    sergioh1t

    I really enjoyed this book, especially for those who like themes involving cultivation/robot mix. They'll have fun reading it because there aren't many like this out there. I just hope the author doesn't give up on the book. (Spoiler alert: I just hope the main character doesn't have hero syndrome—I don't like that. Apparently, he's already being influenced by Jess.) Keep up the good work, Author." (GOOGLE TRANSLATE)

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    John_Guinnrss

    I quite enjoy the story. it's really hard to find stories like this or the main character is a robot or is in a fantasy world and can produce robots. so I would like to know when you intend on continuing this wonderful story we need more!!!!!!

    2mth
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    UnKnownEntity001

    It’s a gem among pile of trash. I had my personal issues with it, like wanting more kingdom building and less random adventuring. But the author seems to be interconnecting them pretty well, so the adventuring may seem random, yet it actual is part of a larger plan(maybe?). Anyways a great start, can’t wait to read more. Do you have a patreon author?

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    LegolasGreenleaf

    I figured I would write a review since I’m caught up which is currently chapter 58. The main character has a good amount of depth explaining his actions or goals he has set. Side characters aren’t as in depth maybe a few but as of now I don’t think it is a bad thing with this kind of story. I’m terrible at explaining but some stories where every character has a lot of depth works well while some focusing on just the mc and a few side characters every so often works just as good, just depends on the kind of story that is being written. For the world it is done well using the classic model of one region we know about but also aware of a more advanced one. I can also see it won’t be stagnant in one place at least at the start as to me the beginning areas act like a tutorial where we learn about the world in a natural way while the mc learns and prepares for bigger things. Story has a lot of potential with how the mc plans to expand his army/power in the world he is in with hints of plans to expand into space or other worlds someday. Also interesting to see how the author plans on improving the main character since it is a robot and how much he stays completely high tech or integrates magic to make magi tech. TLDR : I found the story interesting and an enjoyable read with the new events and pacing just right to draw you in. Also was refreshing for me as it has been a bit since reading any high tech focused story with a mix a magic. I recommend to give it a try and it has enough free chapters to come to your own conclusions.

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