Webnovel Author: UnKnownEntity001 - Novel Collection

Tag your story properly please author. You didn’t tag it as an academy story even though it seems school life is now going to be a major part of the story. Anyways I’m gonna have to drop, I have no interest in school drama and reading about young children. Best of luck on your story though.

Although I doubt you’re gonna go the route of making a business of becoming a merchant. Even though with his power that is the most logical path to go down. And with how “dangerous” this world is, there would still be a decent amount of action.

Yep my prediction is seeming more likely. Author if you ever decide to do another version of this story I suggest making the mc an adult, or at least late teens. No one is gonna take some 10 year old serious if he does try doing business deals.

The dialogue is really awkward. It’s probably the worst part of the story so far. Also some plot holes: a few chapters ago you said the village was founded a “few hundred years ago” then she says it’s one of the oldest in the world. I really hope the mc doesn’t stay with them, they said they kids get to choose if they stay or go but he’s being pretty forceful about the mc joining their family. Also if she’s the romantic inerest st that is a horrible decision to have the romantic interest show up so early and at such a young age. Anyways I like the premise but mainly because I thought it would involve crafting and business deals. I personally have no interest in childish drama and I get the feeling there is gonna be tons of it. Just from what I’ve read I’m now expecting the main group to be a bunch of ten year old kids who are gonna “take on the world” or some nonsense. I guess we’ll see though, but unless you have a major time skip to a reasonable age I’m probably gonna drop.

What would be the point? Just for fun?

With the rank Vulcan is at this guy wouldnt last more then a minute or 2.

When’s the next chapter?

So he lost 1000 tier 1 golems, just imagine if he had launched 200 over the walls and had them explode, it would’ve leveled most of the fort and killed most of the defenders. Vulcan needs to realize that these lower tier golems are expendable.

Does he realize that he can just launch some golems over the walls and have them explode, causing panic and chaos from the inside.

It won’t let me select the paragraph on mobile but you answered your own question of if you can use alloys. Steel is an alloy. There’s really 2 types of steel, carbon steel which is just iron and carbon (it’s still considered an alloy). Or Alloy Steel (horrible name considering both types are alloys lol) which is iron, carbon and other elements such as magnesium.

Not sure how I feel about this whole “becoming an adventurer” idea. I’m enjoying the story but I really hope we see more kingdom building soon, and of course an enormous mechanical army.