I Wish I Could Love You

LV 4

zowji

The characters are well-developed, and the world-building is commendable. The pacing of the narrative is effective, striking a balance between maintaining a good flow and allowing for intricate details to unfold. One notable strength is the portrayal of romance in the story. The author has successfully navigated the romantic elements without falling into the trap of clichéd or cheesy tropes. Instead, they have crafted a genuine and meaningful connection between the characters. It's refreshing to see a focus on romance and plot rather than relying on explicit scenes, avoiding the potential pitfalls of such content that can often come off as gratuitous. While the pace might have seemed a bit slow for some readers, it appears that the deliberate pacing contributes positively to the overall narrative. It allows for a thorough exploration of the story's intricacies, making the slower pace feel justified and integral to the storytelling. The emphasis on meaningful romance, coupled with a well-paced narrative, makes it a standout in its genre. I appreciate the careful consideration given to character depth and plot development, making it an enjoyable and worthwhile literary experience.

LV 1

redlady

I like vampire stories ...guess this goes straight in my library ...hahah....The writing style is just awesome ! The plot is intrigue , so I am waiting more more ! Keep up author ! Love the story so far !

LV 3

Cripys

good! t was nice and chill to read to be honest

LV 13

chris_tine_7938

Wow! I love this book. It is very well written. What a great discovery! I'm looking forward to more of Zack and Nia. And yes, I love the book cover. Perfect for the two. 😍😍🔥🔥🔥

LV 1

Annran

Just what to say about this novel...I just don't have words. The plot,characters development and all the things needed in a novel are all here. Huhu...so nice. Excellent I promote you all to read it. ^^*TT. Loved it.

LV 3

Reveries_

the picture is so unique and I love it.I really loved your story.Outstanding novel with good character development.

I love the story the character and the world itself is good I love the pacing of the story and the cliche yet no cheesy romance between the characters. For me the pace was a bit slow but at the same time it doesn't matter since it goes really well in the story itself. Overall, this is a novel that worth to read!

LV 2

EEJ

I love myself a good, well written romantic story. Kudos! you've captured my attention on this one 😁... Thought I was going to struggle through the first chapters as is usually the case when I read most romantic novels but no, I did not, on the contrary it looks like catch up with the author's update schedule in a day or two & that goes to say how fun and engaging the story is 😎✌️

LV 3

ProPug

This work has a lot of potential, and is a little bit rough around the edges, but surely if you work on your grammar and some more active voicing, this book will soar to great heights! I also loved the way Zach was brought into the modern world, I've added this into my library and will continue reading as it updates :D

LV 2

Eiffel_Olympus

I love the story the character and the world itself is good I love the pacing of the story and the cliche yet no cheesy romance between the characters. For me the pace was a bit slow but at the same time it doesn't matter since it goes really well in the story itself. Overall, this is a novel that worth to read!

LV 2

luwanipixie

Loveee this!! This book is absolutely intriguing Even seeing the book cover just made me fall in love with this beautiful work of art. Keep this up!

LV 4

Goosey_Goo

Oh wow. I've had this book on my to-read list for a while now. I can't believe how much it had grown in such a short amount of time! I'm only on chapter 2, but am already invested.

LV 3

kamal_victorian

I really liked this novel. Author really focused on romance and plot, rather than bed seens. bed seens were getting too popular in romance genres, which alot of times end up looking trashy. Characters were a little pitiful, which made me wanna sympathize with them. I think this is a pretty good novel read. with good amount of romance.

LV 1

Hartika_Sharma

I like vampire and time travel stores. I love the characters of your book. You have described everything so well. It caught my attention. 💓💓💓

LV 2

Mystic_Chronicler

I've read this book, and it's a unique blend of fantasy and modern elements. The characters' interactions and the twists in the story keep you engaged. If you're into supernatural romance with a touch of mystery, give it a try.

LV 1

WritingInShadow

Though I am not a big fan of romantic stories this one might be exempted. Also, this is not only just about romance. Both Zachary and Sonia really complement each other. The addition of humor to the story is great as well. Both of them not knowing how to really behave around each other is funny to read. I'll be reading some more of this. My only suggestion that might be of help is to use simple words since I believe that the simpler it is the better. Using simple words can be helpful since some readers are not using English as their primary language so they may find it difficult to understand some. At least that is my opinion. I hope that can help.

LV 1

Leo2410

That's really a good one. I enjoyed reading it. Can't read to read more. Even i write if you like you can check it out. Do you have a editor as you wrote it very well. Can't wait to see more developement in the story

LV 1

AthensAwaitsMe

Some of the grammar is a little off here and there, but the story overall has great potential. Zach is a complex character that seems much more human than some other characters that I've read about. I loved how he was also brought to the modern world. Great job, author!

LV 2

Rara_Jasmin

It's a compelling story, author. I'm absolutely loving it. I've delved into seven chapters already, and I'm intrigued by the mystery of the male lead's background. The character development and design are exceptionally well done, which enhances my reading experience.

LV 1

GalacticSlime

For someone thats not really into romance, this actually got my attention pretty fast after the first chapter. Zachary seems like a troubled yet complex character, and Sonia feels like the perfect complement to him.....looking forward to seeing how this turns out.