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The story is decent, and it blends the modern world with Pokemon, okayish. the grammer isn't the best or maybe it's the translation itself not sure. there is a tag for adventure, and while it does contain adventure, so far it's more a Slice of Life novel focused more on training and "Discovery" than actually adventuring around the world.
Dropped as soon as author started acting your typical chinese way and making random mob chat talks betwen themselves. That means no common sense and no logic. The story is very fast phased and it's like author forgets to publish the information in his notes which he can't manage properly. The naming of countries, their dislocation and other stuff makes you realize that it's someone of low writing quality without any experience and the desire to get some and improve along
por los ultimos capitulos que estan re cortos y no entretienen para mi gusto me gustaria que volviera los caps que mas completos. si no es posible entonces no me queda que dejar de leer y si vuelve ala escritura anterior entonces volvere encantado
I am using google translator. You have a great story, I hope you continue writing. I will consider subscribing to the patreon because I really like it.
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dropping the story until this dumb paragraph posting is done.also, your story struggles because you can't write a scene. 150 chapters in and I still have no clue picture of what geography we are in: it's impossible to immerse yourself in a story if you don't know what your surroundings look like
Not gonna lie this type of fanfic is completely but the author has been writing is simply perfection . From the flow of the story to the characters and their development to the writing quality is simply amazing . Update has been stable for a few weeks . I don't know about before But I hope the update stability doesn't drop. Thank you to the author forthe fanfic
Great 685381Pokédex entries Haxorus, the Axe Jaw Pokémon and Axew's final evolved form. Haxorus is normally considered friendly. Its body is covered with a tough armor, and its tusks cannot be broken.
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It is great I recommend reading this ...............................................................................................................
Absolutely stunning story ..............................................................................................................................
Really good fanfic absoultute incredible so good more please yes ...........................................................................................................................................
I'm truly bamboozled and stunned that a amazing story like this that is better has more world building and potential than most stories does not have more traction that I count entirely as bad luck on the authors note not only is his story good the author himself is talented willing to watch recommended shows and gain knowledge to make his story better this will be a masterpiece ill bet everything on it
Quality is good in terms of writing. Update is good, let's see how the pace continues. The story moves very quickly, leaving gaps. Just too basic characters have traits that make them different. The development of the world if you think about the details is too much and the only reason it works is because of the script. (Can be modified in the future) but good and ideas but poorly executed.
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Honestly, this is okay, but the dialogues are a little too cringe for my taste. Don't know why, maybe it's just me
An interesting story, but everything moves too quickly and there is still no general image of the entire world, there are also too many characters to be able to follow well.
This is an excellent story. I will rated five stars. It is fun. The characters are good. But where the story shines is the AU. The premise is fantastic. I hope anyone who is this review read the story.
Best pokemon fanfic ever! I love it, it’s so detailed and your grammar is impeccable.
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Aunque la idea es muy buena te olvidaste que existen pokemón legendarios que se encargan de mantener el orden y la ecología de la naturaleza, Imagínate cómo van a reaccionar los Pokemones legendarios como Rayquaza y aquellos que tengan mal genio, es decir cuando se involucren si ellos quieren, es posible y fácilmente extinguir a los humanos
Esperaba demasiado de una historia inspirada en fanfiction de Pokémon y poca información sobre otros juegos de la serie, el protagonista es agradable pero se ve opacado por otros personajes, muchos capítulos son sobre las conspiraciones de sus enemigos u algunos conocidos. No me molesta que no sea el más poderoso, pero quedó relegado al papel de un personaje secundario, no tiene iniciativa propia, si hace algo es porque alguien más planteo un problema, no quiere destacar y eso es especialmente molesto, es solo un buen subordinado que puede dar buenas ideas y espera que otros se las arreglen para aprender cosas que él ya sabe. Su objetivo fue dado por sistema, no encontré pensiones sobre sus propias aspiraciones, también me parece tonto que todo su sistema solo funcione con Pokémon relacionados con el tipo Dragón. Estuvo a punto de morir varias veces a manos de humanos, solo salvándose por suerte, me parece extraño como se salvó de tantos disparos de ametralladoras y cohetes, lo peor es que luego el autor agregó un tipo que podía ver el futuro y sinceramente mí entusiasmo empezó a perderse por completo.
The story is decent, and it blends the modern world with Pokemon, okayish. the grammer isn't the best or maybe it's the translation itself not sure. there is a tag for adventure, and while it does contain adventure, so far it's more a Slice of Life novel focused more on training and "Discovery" than actually adventuring around the world.
Dropped as soon as author started acting your typical chinese way and making random mob chat talks betwen themselves. That means no common sense and no logic. The story is very fast phased and it's like author forgets to publish the information in his notes which he can't manage properly. The naming of countries, their dislocation and other stuff makes you realize that it's someone of low writing quality without any experience and the desire to get some and improve along
por los ultimos capitulos que estan re cortos y no entretienen para mi gusto me gustaria que volviera los caps que mas completos. si no es posible entonces no me queda que dejar de leer y si vuelve ala escritura anterior entonces volvere encantado
I am using google translator. You have a great story, I hope you continue writing. I will consider subscribing to the patreon because I really like it.
Spoiler de révélation dropping the story until this dumb paragraph posting is done.also, your story struggles because you can't write a scene. 150 chapters in and I still have no clue picture of what geography we are in: it's impossible to immerse yourself in a story if you don't know what your surroundings look like
Not gonna lie this type of fanfic is completely but the author has been writing is simply perfection . From the flow of the story to the characters and their development to the writing quality is simply amazing . Update has been stable for a few weeks . I don't know about before But I hope the update stability doesn't drop. Thank you to the author forthe fanfic
Great 685381Pokédex entries Haxorus, the Axe Jaw Pokémon and Axew's final evolved form. Haxorus is normally considered friendly. Its body is covered with a tough armor, and its tusks cannot be broken.
A budding author thats going to be truly great exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
It is great I recommend reading this ...............................................................................................................
Absolutely stunning story ..............................................................................................................................
Really good fanfic absoultute incredible so good more please yes ...........................................................................................................................................
I'm truly bamboozled and stunned that a amazing story like this that is better has more world building and potential than most stories does not have more traction that I count entirely as bad luck on the authors note not only is his story good the author himself is talented willing to watch recommended shows and gain knowledge to make his story better this will be a masterpiece ill bet everything on it
Quality is good in terms of writing. Update is good, let's see how the pace continues. The story moves very quickly, leaving gaps. Just too basic characters have traits that make them different. The development of the world if you think about the details is too much and the only reason it works is because of the script. (Can be modified in the future) but good and ideas but poorly executed.
Spoiler de révélation Honestly, this is okay, but the dialogues are a little too cringe for my taste. Don't know why, maybe it's just me
An interesting story, but everything moves too quickly and there is still no general image of the entire world, there are also too many characters to be able to follow well.
This is an excellent story. I will rated five stars. It is fun. The characters are good. But where the story shines is the AU. The premise is fantastic. I hope anyone who is this review read the story.
Best pokemon fanfic ever! I love it, it’s so detailed and your grammar is impeccable.
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Aunque la idea es muy buena te olvidaste que existen pokemón legendarios que se encargan de mantener el orden y la ecología de la naturaleza, Imagínate cómo van a reaccionar los Pokemones legendarios como Rayquaza y aquellos que tengan mal genio, es decir cuando se involucren si ellos quieren, es posible y fácilmente extinguir a los humanos
Esperaba demasiado de una historia inspirada en fanfiction de Pokémon y poca información sobre otros juegos de la serie, el protagonista es agradable pero se ve opacado por otros personajes, muchos capítulos son sobre las conspiraciones de sus enemigos u algunos conocidos. No me molesta que no sea el más poderoso, pero quedó relegado al papel de un personaje secundario, no tiene iniciativa propia, si hace algo es porque alguien más planteo un problema, no quiere destacar y eso es especialmente molesto, es solo un buen subordinado que puede dar buenas ideas y espera que otros se las arreglen para aprender cosas que él ya sabe. Su objetivo fue dado por sistema, no encontré pensiones sobre sus propias aspiraciones, también me parece tonto que todo su sistema solo funcione con Pokémon relacionados con el tipo Dragón. Estuvo a punto de morir varias veces a manos de humanos, solo salvándose por suerte, me parece extraño como se salvó de tantos disparos de ametralladoras y cohetes, lo peor es que luego el autor agregó un tipo que podía ver el futuro y sinceramente mí entusiasmo empezó a perderse por completo.