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The world-building is great. More curious to know the journey and secrets of the Gala. Will she be able to return back to the human world? I could even imagine the fantasy land in my mind while reading the story. Wonderful work. Hoping to see more chapters soon. Good work author!!
This story is quite different from most of the other fantasy books out there. It feels warm and homely. The female lead is endearing and it almost makes you care for her right from the first chapter. If I'm being honest, there's one tiny improvement that I'd like to suggest. The characters can use some more physical descriptions so that readers can better visualise them. Overall, this is a heartwarming book, perfect for relaxation. The world feels enchanting and lively, and the female lead fits in perfectly.
I love the intro to the story and the names used in the story by the author 🧚♀️🧚♀️🧚♀️😻😻😻 cant wait to read the entire story💗💗💗💗
I like how you create your story. I like how you weave your words. You're one of the writers who can make me visualize the world the characters are living in. Hopefully you'll continue writing on, you have the talent for it. There will be challenges but with talents like yours, you'll be able to overcome them. ☺️
I think that overall this book was really good. Even though I think the author must have spent a lot of time coming up with most of these names😅
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Your English is really good that it's easily understandable! Your words of choices are creative too, making it more interesting. The story is interesting, keep it up! ≧∇≦
You deserve a five star for this wonderful book you've written. I actually saw this on webnovel page and I decided to try out as it was advertised by one of your readers. I'm not disappointed. The synopsis alone got me hooked. No disturbance please... Reading here.
This story was actually recommended to me by my author friend KavMan. I didnt really think much of it but now that i've read it even though just a few chapters, i agree with Kavman. This story is a killer, totally recommended
5 stars! It is an excellent read. Superb writing, the plot and the MC. What's not to love and like? 😉 This one is a promising read. I don't know about you, but I could only tell one thing: Read
Hmm, this story is one of the best fantasy books i've read. The world building, character development, grammar...basically everything about it is unique. In four words, this book is a masterpiece.
I find your plot really good, especially since I like to highlight a heroine. Overall, the writing is impeccable and quite light it's interesting. I will continue to read, I like this style of writing😸
love this book. One of the best fantasy books I have read. I hope it gets more and more views. one thing I like about it is the title. GALATEA
You are very good at writing you just show up your talent, All of these you can conquer all your dreams that you are dreaming of. And I am so happy for you. Thanks
Although there was a lot of reputations to the main characters name that could be less often, the story is well thought out and good grammar which is a plus for me. I look forward to seeing where the story goes as I read more. Good job author.
The fantasy setting of this masterpiece is very amazing on its own. I can sense no major flaw in it. Hopefully you will gain experience in the future to make this book even better. The characters are brilliantly built, and as an author I can see the hard work you put into it. Well Done, and Nice Job!
This is a perfect book. English is proper with no grammatical mistakes. I absolutely liked how the author described the magical elements in this book.
This book is interesting and really nice. I enjoyed every chapter I read. you did a great job author, I recommend this book . you won't be disappointed ✌️
I love fantasy books. The cover of the book is attractive. The synopsis is superb and so is the introduction. I look forward to reading the book.
Wow... Simply put, this story is amazing. Well written with good grammar, every paragraph is understandable. Description is vivid and world design is superb. I already knew from the start that Gala was a special girl and I can't wait to see what she is and her impacts. Kudos to you, author. Highly recommended.
It's quite interesting. I haven't read any fantasy and romance novel. Honestly speaking, syn opsis made me unable to judge whether story will be good or not and at the same time, I want to know what the whisperer is. So I decided to read it once. I loved this concept and it's very enjoyable. Don't drop this novel half-way author. Keep it up !
This is a great fantasy novel. The writer did a great job in the description and from the very first chapter I'm already intrigued. The plot development is beautiful 😍 This novel is a must read 🥰
The author put a lot of effort in the world set and at the characters. I felt mystical and amaze as I read. Definitely one of the fantasy novels you'll fall in love!
I like the story, great piece author keep wrting and inspired others you deserve all of the ratings what you get I reallylovebthe plot i thin this is my favorite now
I think the book cover you made is excellent, and I also think the story's intriguing title and well-written chapters make the book appealing overall. I hope you'll continue writing novels. Enjoy your amazing day!
First, I like the cover. It's cute and neat. The synopsis is interesting because I love the genre, fantasy plus romance. I like the work and will add it to my RL. I am hoping for updates.
I'm in love with this fantasy piece. It is the perfect piece of work for someone who needs to relax their minds after a busy day. Go author, waiting for more updates from you. Good luck.
I really like this story. for me this story is very interesting, a new fantasy story for me. I love the character development and the plot of your story. I'm really looking forward to the conflict from your story. I hope your story doesn't stop halfway
Great book! The plot itself is unique enough to carry the whole story. Characters are distinct. And I could imagine clearly the environment that the book is trying to set. You did great there, author!
this story is fascinating and so easy to read! the pacing is just right, making one immersed in the story. Gala is so charming, too! Can't wait how she could help Aelfrey return to its previous glorious state! great job, author! keep it up! 😍❤️😘
I LOVE IT!😍😍😍 It's really rare to read this kind of fantasy genre and honestly, I really enjoyed reading it so much. I was so excited that my finger automatically added this novel in my library🤭 what a brilliant!
A very interesting story,the characters good, I'm very impressed with the plot and the style of the story, keep it up author, kudos to you,am waiting for the next chapter
This is a good start to a fantasy epic. The premise is interesting and I am looking forward to the plot opening up. If I must be critical, the text could be put through light proofreading. Otherwise it is fabulous and a good read.
The world-building is great. More curious to know the journey and secrets of the Gala. Will she be able to return back to the human world? I could even imagine the fantasy land in my mind while reading the story. Wonderful work. Hoping to see more chapters soon. Good work author!!
This story is quite different from most of the other fantasy books out there. It feels warm and homely. The female lead is endearing and it almost makes you care for her right from the first chapter. If I'm being honest, there's one tiny improvement that I'd like to suggest. The characters can use some more physical descriptions so that readers can better visualise them. Overall, this is a heartwarming book, perfect for relaxation. The world feels enchanting and lively, and the female lead fits in perfectly.
I love the intro to the story and the names used in the story by the author 🧚♀️🧚♀️🧚♀️😻😻😻 cant wait to read the entire story💗💗💗💗
I like how you create your story. I like how you weave your words. You're one of the writers who can make me visualize the world the characters are living in. Hopefully you'll continue writing on, you have the talent for it. There will be challenges but with talents like yours, you'll be able to overcome them. ☺️
I think that overall this book was really good. Even though I think the author must have spent a lot of time coming up with most of these names😅
Spoiler de révélation Your English is really good that it's easily understandable! Your words of choices are creative too, making it more interesting. The story is interesting, keep it up! ≧∇≦
You deserve a five star for this wonderful book you've written. I actually saw this on webnovel page and I decided to try out as it was advertised by one of your readers. I'm not disappointed. The synopsis alone got me hooked. No disturbance please... Reading here.
This story was actually recommended to me by my author friend KavMan. I didnt really think much of it but now that i've read it even though just a few chapters, i agree with Kavman. This story is a killer, totally recommended
5 stars! It is an excellent read. Superb writing, the plot and the MC. What's not to love and like? 😉 This one is a promising read. I don't know about you, but I could only tell one thing: Read
Hmm, this story is one of the best fantasy books i've read. The world building, character development, grammar...basically everything about it is unique. In four words, this book is a masterpiece.
I find your plot really good, especially since I like to highlight a heroine. Overall, the writing is impeccable and quite light it's interesting. I will continue to read, I like this style of writing😸
love this book. One of the best fantasy books I have read. I hope it gets more and more views. one thing I like about it is the title. GALATEA
You are very good at writing you just show up your talent, All of these you can conquer all your dreams that you are dreaming of. And I am so happy for you. Thanks
Although there was a lot of reputations to the main characters name that could be less often, the story is well thought out and good grammar which is a plus for me. I look forward to seeing where the story goes as I read more. Good job author.
The fantasy setting of this masterpiece is very amazing on its own. I can sense no major flaw in it. Hopefully you will gain experience in the future to make this book even better. The characters are brilliantly built, and as an author I can see the hard work you put into it. Well Done, and Nice Job!
This is a perfect book. English is proper with no grammatical mistakes. I absolutely liked how the author described the magical elements in this book.
This book is interesting and really nice. I enjoyed every chapter I read. you did a great job author, I recommend this book . you won't be disappointed ✌️
I love fantasy books. The cover of the book is attractive. The synopsis is superb and so is the introduction. I look forward to reading the book.
Wow... Simply put, this story is amazing. Well written with good grammar, every paragraph is understandable. Description is vivid and world design is superb. I already knew from the start that Gala was a special girl and I can't wait to see what she is and her impacts. Kudos to you, author. Highly recommended.
It's quite interesting. I haven't read any fantasy and romance novel. Honestly speaking, syn opsis made me unable to judge whether story will be good or not and at the same time, I want to know what the whisperer is. So I decided to read it once. I loved this concept and it's very enjoyable. Don't drop this novel half-way author. Keep it up !
This is a great fantasy novel. The writer did a great job in the description and from the very first chapter I'm already intrigued. The plot development is beautiful 😍 This novel is a must read 🥰
The author put a lot of effort in the world set and at the characters. I felt mystical and amaze as I read. Definitely one of the fantasy novels you'll fall in love!
I like the story, great piece author keep wrting and inspired others you deserve all of the ratings what you get I reallylovebthe plot i thin this is my favorite now
I think the book cover you made is excellent, and I also think the story's intriguing title and well-written chapters make the book appealing overall. I hope you'll continue writing novels. Enjoy your amazing day!
First, I like the cover. It's cute and neat. The synopsis is interesting because I love the genre, fantasy plus romance. I like the work and will add it to my RL. I am hoping for updates.
I'm in love with this fantasy piece. It is the perfect piece of work for someone who needs to relax their minds after a busy day. Go author, waiting for more updates from you. Good luck.
I really like this story. for me this story is very interesting, a new fantasy story for me. I love the character development and the plot of your story. I'm really looking forward to the conflict from your story. I hope your story doesn't stop halfway
Great book! The plot itself is unique enough to carry the whole story. Characters are distinct. And I could imagine clearly the environment that the book is trying to set. You did great there, author!
this story is fascinating and so easy to read! the pacing is just right, making one immersed in the story. Gala is so charming, too! Can't wait how she could help Aelfrey return to its previous glorious state! great job, author! keep it up! 😍❤️😘
I LOVE IT!😍😍😍 It's really rare to read this kind of fantasy genre and honestly, I really enjoyed reading it so much. I was so excited that my finger automatically added this novel in my library🤭 what a brilliant!
A very interesting story,the characters good, I'm very impressed with the plot and the style of the story, keep it up author, kudos to you,am waiting for the next chapter
This is a good start to a fantasy epic. The premise is interesting and I am looking forward to the plot opening up. If I must be critical, the text could be put through light proofreading. Otherwise it is fabulous and a good read.