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An interesting book l'd say... No much info dumps and easy yet good grammar usage iguess I've got to be patient with the author. Just keep a steady update time and try your best… I highly recommend this book to otherreaders.
So far I'm 7 chapters in and I'm loving this story. The transition from the regular an entirely different fantasy world truly felt like I was entering a whole new place. Your descriptions of the characters and environments form a picture of each one. I feel concern and stress for the main character Gala, and I want to see her succeed at returning to her normal. There are only small parts of the story that could use a little proofreading, but they were almost unnoticeable and didn't take away from the experience. Overall I love this story!
Starting chapters are good. Story pace is slow but it just make the reading more enjoyable. author manage to build good characters. Good job! Keep it up!
I usually don't have much interest on Alice in Wonderland type of fantasy. However this is truly an interesting piece of work. Up to chapter 6, the story flowed making me not bored, even though it has a slow beginning. As I could predict that there would be romance and secret heritage trope, I do want to continue reading this story.
I stop reading at chapter 5 to write a review. This story is well written. I love how this writer describe the scene and situation. I usually stop reading fantasy novel at chapter 1 or 2 at most because I'm not quite a fan but yes, this one is good!
I love the beginning and everything, it was written so perfectly well. Can't wait for more update. Good luck author ☺🙂☺🙂☺🙂☺🙂☺🙂☺🙂(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
The start is really intriguing and I must say I love the FL slot, I was so captivated that I didn't realize I was done with reading 9 chaps already, and in a matter of seconds I started craving for more, Thank you author, for sharing your idea with the world ♥️
It’s such a charming story . I like how the author introduces the lead. You get the feeling that she is well liked yet know she is something beyond what is seen.
This is an amazing book. I like the plot and the characters. The writing skills are impeccable and I would love to read more if this story. Keep up good work.
As a fantasy nerd, I love this novel. The narrative accompanied by amazing constructions of characters can surely become immersed readers to the story. Not to mention the imagery of this novel is on point. The plot is nice and I am looking forward for more chapters! I will add this to my library. Great work author.!
Waaaw, it's a really good story. Everything is well-plotted and it's just a few chapters and I am already hooked up by this book. I added it to my list, hope will get more interesting things to read.
Oh my gosh!!! This story is giving me the vibes!!!! I love it! Totally recommend to anyone who is a fan of fantasy supernaturals ! Waiting for more updates
wow!!! what a novel. The blurb, It's really interesting, and I would love to read more. The plot is just amazing. clap for your author. keep up the good work. I would keep reading.
A charming work in progress reminiscent of Winx club, down to the name Alfea. Simply enchanted by the possibilities. Can't wait to find out what happens to Gala next.
The book, is not like others as it's unique in its own way. I like stuffs about it like it's synopsis, it's formation and more. I will love to read more
I'm not much of a fan of romance genres but it is unique.The premise of the story is pretty interesting. This book is simple, paced and engaging.
This novel really is interesting 😃🤔 plus it's different from the others because it's a female lead. I've only read the first two chapters & I'm already love it. I have so many questions I want to ask like why is Gala the only one to see fairies? what happens to her after that Mystical force? why was her parents reacted like that when she mentioned her 18 birthday etc. but I'll most definitely be continuing this.
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This book has interesting plot. Simply written yet intriguing enough. I loved how short the synopsis too is. The book is not fast paced and that makes it enjoyable. Since it has few chapters, I look forward to reading more. Keep it up writer, you have an interesting book!
Wow, this is very nice story, unique, amazing Author. Really love this, i am so curious for the next chapters. Great work 👍👍🧡🧡, keep writing. [img=recommend]
The story was well characterized and edifice to the understanding of the readers. The writing credibility is superb. the story flows naturally beautifully.
I confess that this is the first time I start reading a romance novel, and this one has a female protagonist. The presentation of the characters is beautiful, especially that of Gala. It also happens with the environment of her humble home and how is the coexistence with her family. You handle the words very well, because it feels so natural to read that it grabs the reader. I like the novel. Other readers should give it a chance, as it has all the credentials to deserve it. congratulations!❤
Hmmm..This is a very sweet and likeable tale.. simply but powerful at the same time. You'll simply keeping scrolling through Without knowing that it's almost over! What a nicely written piece with likeable character. and don't get me started on the fairytale vibe
The writing was simple yet unique.. Just 2 chaps and its already interesting! Definitely something ill be looking forward too .. keep it up! !
The writing style is simple, and the environment is well described, evoking a sense of quaintness. The main character, Gala, seems very sweet and likable so far. I'm not sure what the story world is like yet since it's just two chapters in, but I think this is a good start.
This book is actually amazing. The first chapters are dope! It has a kinda interesting characters.Although the Author should make the characters to look more real. The Author really did a great job. Kudos!
An interesting book l'd say... No much info dumps and easy yet good grammar usage iguess I've got to be patient with the author. Just keep a steady update time and try your best… I highly recommend this book to otherreaders.
So far I'm 7 chapters in and I'm loving this story. The transition from the regular an entirely different fantasy world truly felt like I was entering a whole new place. Your descriptions of the characters and environments form a picture of each one. I feel concern and stress for the main character Gala, and I want to see her succeed at returning to her normal. There are only small parts of the story that could use a little proofreading, but they were almost unnoticeable and didn't take away from the experience. Overall I love this story!
Starting chapters are good. Story pace is slow but it just make the reading more enjoyable. author manage to build good characters. Good job! Keep it up!
I usually don't have much interest on Alice in Wonderland type of fantasy. However this is truly an interesting piece of work. Up to chapter 6, the story flowed making me not bored, even though it has a slow beginning. As I could predict that there would be romance and secret heritage trope, I do want to continue reading this story.
I stop reading at chapter 5 to write a review. This story is well written. I love how this writer describe the scene and situation. I usually stop reading fantasy novel at chapter 1 or 2 at most because I'm not quite a fan but yes, this one is good!
I love the beginning and everything, it was written so perfectly well. Can't wait for more update. Good luck author ☺🙂☺🙂☺🙂☺🙂☺🙂☺🙂(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
The start is really intriguing and I must say I love the FL slot, I was so captivated that I didn't realize I was done with reading 9 chaps already, and in a matter of seconds I started craving for more, Thank you author, for sharing your idea with the world ♥️
It’s such a charming story . I like how the author introduces the lead. You get the feeling that she is well liked yet know she is something beyond what is seen.
This is an amazing book. I like the plot and the characters. The writing skills are impeccable and I would love to read more if this story. Keep up good work.
As a fantasy nerd, I love this novel. The narrative accompanied by amazing constructions of characters can surely become immersed readers to the story. Not to mention the imagery of this novel is on point. The plot is nice and I am looking forward for more chapters! I will add this to my library. Great work author.!
Waaaw, it's a really good story. Everything is well-plotted and it's just a few chapters and I am already hooked up by this book. I added it to my list, hope will get more interesting things to read.
Oh my gosh!!! This story is giving me the vibes!!!! I love it! Totally recommend to anyone who is a fan of fantasy supernaturals ! Waiting for more updates
wow!!! what a novel. The blurb, It's really interesting, and I would love to read more. The plot is just amazing. clap for your author. keep up the good work. I would keep reading.
A charming work in progress reminiscent of Winx club, down to the name Alfea. Simply enchanted by the possibilities. Can't wait to find out what happens to Gala next.
The book, is not like others as it's unique in its own way. I like stuffs about it like it's synopsis, it's formation and more. I will love to read more
I'm not much of a fan of romance genres but it is unique.The premise of the story is pretty interesting. This book is simple, paced and engaging.
This novel really is interesting 😃🤔 plus it's different from the others because it's a female lead. I've only read the first two chapters & I'm already love it. I have so many questions I want to ask like why is Gala the only one to see fairies? what happens to her after that Mystical force? why was her parents reacted like that when she mentioned her 18 birthday etc. but I'll most definitely be continuing this.
Spoiler de révélation This book has interesting plot. Simply written yet intriguing enough. I loved how short the synopsis too is. The book is not fast paced and that makes it enjoyable. Since it has few chapters, I look forward to reading more. Keep it up writer, you have an interesting book!
Wow, this is very nice story, unique, amazing Author. Really love this, i am so curious for the next chapters. Great work 👍👍🧡🧡, keep writing. [img=recommend]
The story was well characterized and edifice to the understanding of the readers. The writing credibility is superb. the story flows naturally beautifully.
I confess that this is the first time I start reading a romance novel, and this one has a female protagonist. The presentation of the characters is beautiful, especially that of Gala. It also happens with the environment of her humble home and how is the coexistence with her family. You handle the words very well, because it feels so natural to read that it grabs the reader. I like the novel. Other readers should give it a chance, as it has all the credentials to deserve it. congratulations!❤
Hmmm..This is a very sweet and likeable tale.. simply but powerful at the same time. You'll simply keeping scrolling through Without knowing that it's almost over! What a nicely written piece with likeable character. and don't get me started on the fairytale vibe
The writing was simple yet unique.. Just 2 chaps and its already interesting! Definitely something ill be looking forward too .. keep it up! !
The writing style is simple, and the environment is well described, evoking a sense of quaintness. The main character, Gala, seems very sweet and likable so far. I'm not sure what the story world is like yet since it's just two chapters in, but I think this is a good start.
This book is actually amazing. The first chapters are dope! It has a kinda interesting characters.Although the Author should make the characters to look more real. The Author really did a great job. Kudos!