Keren loh ceritanya, aku gak pernah terpikirkan ide tentang jelly yang ngebuat sakit gitu. Good job author, aku harap tetap update terus dan cepat dapat kontrak!
Aku suka cerita awalnya yang ngebuat karakter utamanya jadi lebih kuat, terus penulisannya juga bagus, untuk kata pertaman pakai huruf kapital semua di awal paragraf mungkin ciri khas dari penulis kali ya, tapi secara keseluruhan ini sangat bagus. Semangat!
I read your two chapters, I think they are quite interesting and have the potential to be a good story. taoi if I may comment, your writing still has some errors, I hope that in the future it can be improved again
Good story, I really like the length of your story makes me satisfied in reading. the characters and plots that you present also make me curious
Very interesting story if i'm still a bit confused with some of the characters but overall it kept me interested. the plot you find is very unique to me. author spirit!
The main character looks very sad but made me interested in the development of the character. Overall I think it's good but there are still things that can be improved in the future
after I read a few chapters, I really like the main character of your story. the plot that you present is also interesting and makes me curious. great story, keep it up!
I like how you started your story, with a curious question. I think the characters and plot that you present are very interesting, it makes me addicted to continue reading your story
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original CLOSE YOUR EYES
4.86
Magenta Savili, a blind girl who can do anything she closes her eyes, she can be said to be perfect but unfortunately she always fails in her love relationship. She is investigating about her powers to escape the restraints of her mother who used her. Rion Stevano, CEO of the country's largest coal company. He recruits Magenta as his employee because he is attracted to its powers and uses Magenta to his advantage. Some scenes in the story: Magenta smiled at them as she raised one hand and then uttered her signature line before starting the show. "Close your eyes, " --- "Find out who the girl is, as soon as possible," - said Rion giving orders to his secretary.18 Chs 33 Collections
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Irisbow: A World Of Witches
4.78
"Hopefully we will meet again, Nesa. That's my request, " Nesa Zemora's life changes after meeting a strange man in her dream. Starting from when he found his father's wand, which is similar to the wand belonging to the man in his dream, he was thrown into a world very foreign to him, Irisbow, the world of color wizards. "Your birth was a mistake, DIE!" Nightmares started coming to him after Nesa came to Irisbow, but he was determined not to give up. He will unravel riddles about himself. . . . This book is participating in a win-win competition, please support and cooperate so that we can get a bonus together.154 Chs 278 Collections
Kayaknya ceritanya berkiblat ke daerah India gitu ya, jadi bagi yang suka India sih keknya bakal suka sama cerita ini. Alurnya bakal menarik sih. Semoga terus lanjut ya
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