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a novel that could have been more first if the problems iIhave with it the MC is lazy, empathetic and can't help but care about people and cares about life.also i feel like the world revolves around the MC that is not a good thing it shows like if planning.good things noneall on all a waste of time,but it's expected on webnovel if you want to read to something good read my mostly true villain list.
Seems interesting, I’ve honestly just read the first 20 chapters but don’t want to invest time reading if it’s going to be dropped, is the author going to keep writing? if that’s the case I’ll read the rest and do a proper review.
Great novel! Interesting set-up, not annoying or overpowered system, intriguing plot. Definitely recommend
Thanks for your efforts. I would very much like to read how the story will be improved. Next review is coming soon.
really author.. after keeping kinetic on hiatus, another novel? this doesn't lemme much credence to your stability you know
I know many of you will see this story and think "Really? Another system story?". I implore you to give this story a chance regardless of that. The system in this story is not a source of power, but rather, it's a representation of it. I garuntee you will not be disappointed if you read this story. I have a lot prepared for you all.
the book has potential but 20 chapters is way to short for reader to get a good feel about the story chp20 just end right in a middle of a conflicts that not how you sell a book because there be people like Mt that font want to invest as we didn't get enough time to feel the book out.
a novel that could have been more first if the problems iIhave with it the MC is lazy, empathetic and can't help but care about people and cares about life.also i feel like the world revolves around the MC that is not a good thing it shows like if planning.good things noneall on all a waste of time,but it's expected on webnovel if you want to read to something good read my mostly true villain list.
Seems interesting, I’ve honestly just read the first 20 chapters but don’t want to invest time reading if it’s going to be dropped, is the author going to keep writing? if that’s the case I’ll read the rest and do a proper review.
Great novel! Interesting set-up, not annoying or overpowered system, intriguing plot. Definitely recommend
Thanks for your efforts. I would very much like to read how the story will be improved. Next review is coming soon.
really author.. after keeping kinetic on hiatus, another novel? this doesn't lemme much credence to your stability you know
I know many of you will see this story and think "Really? Another system story?". I implore you to give this story a chance regardless of that. The system in this story is not a source of power, but rather, it's a representation of it. I garuntee you will not be disappointed if you read this story. I have a lot prepared for you all.
the book has potential but 20 chapters is way to short for reader to get a good feel about the story chp20 just end right in a middle of a conflicts that not how you sell a book because there be people like Mt that font want to invest as we didn't get enough time to feel the book out.