Adeniran_Charles

Adeniran_Charles

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Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_Charles
10 days ago
Posted

Never binged a novel so fast. I can see the makings of a good novel here, buts it's a bit too fast paced and the power progression doesn't look so planned out to me. The fight scenes also need a bit of refinement. it feels like you breezed through a lot of things. you were telling and not showing. I'm giving it 5 stars because personally I'm a huge fan of "elemental" Manipulation abilities. you can do a lot better though.

Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_Charles
10 days ago
Replied to ZeRo

author deleted the novel sadly

Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_Charles
13 days ago
Commented

missed opportunity to say "cheesecake"

Jiggling cake that was perfectly cut in the middle, vanilla flavour.

Demon Slayer : The Silent Journey

Demon Slayer : The Silent Journey

Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn

Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_Charles
15 days ago
Replied to Emmanuel_Capricorn

delete? no I don't. I think it's a webnovek glitch

Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_Charles
15 days ago
Posted

Now this. This is quality. A serial reincarnator who makes full use of his experience and takes no bullshit. And I love the kind of episodic feel the chapters have. I look forward to more of this

Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_Charles
16 days ago
Posted

came here after reading your demon slayer fanfic and man. you are prolific author fr. it's a shame your longest fic isn't the style of story I enjoy reading, and it's sad you dropped this one and your sasuke fic. but have a review anyway Man.

Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_Charles
16 days ago
Commented

haven't loved a fanfic this much since MHA: Royal Gambit. i wish started reading it later fr so i could read more

Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_Charles
16 days ago
Posted

Best demon slayer fanfic on the site. This is so good whaaaatt??? so descriptive! so detailed! i could view the scenes in my head vividly! I hope this goes on for a long time

Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_Charles
1 months ago
Commented

men i really don't like nerfs. but it seems to be for a purpose so let's see how it goes

Adeniran_Charles