Tyftc, very good. So he won’t be able to cultivate his dark element unless he uses cruel practices? Interesting
Interesting. Darkness and fire are used in so many stories though. How about darkness and water :). Anyways, good job so far author, one thing i do hope is that the fights are strategic, this gives me warlock of the Magus world vibe, and the fights in that novel were a bit bland. Keep pumping them chapters bro!
No way, I thought this story had plenty of potential!
Been following this novel for a while. The characters are good, the plot is solid and the world building so far is good too. I like the fact that the author also comes up with poems and interesting lines of dialogue, even if they are inspired on what others have said before. I think the story has a lot of potential, and you could easily turn this into a great 2k plus chapters novel like shadow slave. Don’t listen to the fools that just want action all the time and develop the story at your own pace, i truly don’t understand how anyone can rate this 1 star, when there are novels in this app that are literal steaming piles of garbage with 4 or 5 star reviews, it’s truly baffling. Giving you 5 stars so you stay motivated to write, keep it up author.
In the blink of an eye, seven years had passed since Adam came across the founder's journal.
Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe
Fantasy · Esenel
I rated 4.2 because it’s still to early to give a higher rating. So far the story is good, the main character is compelling, and the power system is quite interesting. Hope we can get more world building when he gets out of that place. Keep pumping chapters author, honestly, one of the most important factors in determining the success of web novels is update stability, your story has potential. Keep it up!
That’s actually quite deep and clever, I hadn’t heard that one before. Did you come up with that phrase yourself author?
The grass is greener where you water it.
Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe
Fantasy · Esenel
Hope he keeps practicing and using the astral tyrant style, it’s really cool.
Enchanted scribe*
Sylas tapped into Enchanted Scholar and began to scan the runes before him. He suddenly found something interesting and latched onto it. He solidified the rune with his telekinesis, and then he poured Aether into it.
Genetic Ascension
Fantasy · Awespec
This is a cool story so far. As for constructive criticism, I hope he fights strategically in the future and not just overpowering everyone, that’s kind of lame, and I hope the system he has is maybe toned down a bit? I mean that’s just too ridiculously overpowered, who’s gonna be able to pose a challenge to the mc then? Anyways tyftc, pretty entertaining story so far.
The Empyreal Gem Master
Fantasy · Adui