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The first chapter had an interesting start. It was quite sad too, I can really feel the sadness. And the best part, you start it with showing and don't tell. I don't really mind the cliches because each novel starts with a sad story. Keep on writing, it's good and praiseworthy. Great Job!
Instantly sucked in. The fantasy genre has always been intimidating for me to write. It takes a vivid imagination to build a world that is robust and original, and I believe that this is very much on point. Looking forward to more from this author!
for a first novel, author surely outdid it. this goes beyond a masterpiece, I enjoyed every bit of it, especially the fact that it a concise novel. well done author
Excellent, the story and characters very good, could have been more and more story for all characters, but still very good lines
Well I was tot surprise , I loved it, usually I don’t read these of books, but this so different, so now I have read it everyday for week now, very romantic , engaging and can’t wait to see what happens next. So now I’m going to read the next book. I hope it is as catchy. dally
It's quite good. The updates are stable, the world is interesting, and how the story develops, even if romance isn't my genre, it's good. I just wish it fleshes it's characters more. It's good, check it out.
Wow... This story is doing great. Starting from the character development to the story line everything is just amazing. Highly recommended this book to all the readers out there.😊
Rounds after rounds of applause for this beautiful story conjured up by an obviously amazing writer. Very much worth reading. So read it and love it. Cause you will. Who doesn’t love reading about a ruthless lead finding love anyway?
This is brilliant. I can't wait to see more of this. The description is well written. I love good romance book and I am falling in love with this. Add this to your library and keep reading, you will get hooked in it.
So I obviously can't give you a five star review, but when I first read the synopsis I was intrigued..his sisters maid..😳😳 then as I continued I got absolved into it...you got a good book going there
The book has a well detailed start, and only a few chapters, I and hopefully more readers will look forward to more, I see where this romance, fantasy takes off.
The opening chapter catches the readers attention with a classic story, it's heartbreaking and at the same time intriguing. The idea of arranged marriages for royalty is common, but for an entire people! Crazy! it's interesting and it will be interesting to see how this plays out in the larger sense.
It is so nice to read books that are very descriptive, that and the fact that the book has an intriguing start and a nice flourish all through. A MUST READ ❤️
Its funny to see how fate can mold someone else's life before you are even born. It's very touching and filled with a lot of crazy, wonderful settings that can make one laugh, cry, get angry and all. Looking forward to more.
Ugh why did I like this so much? honestly I don't have any issues. Even though this was a romance novel it had me on my toes the entire time I read it. Stories with such interesting sub plots are the ones that I live the most. Again I'm not someone who usually reads Female lead romance stories but this is has become in if my fav novels on WB. Keep up the great work.
What a refreshing read through! All the characters are well written. Each have their own voice, with thoughts and feelings that you get to see put into play rather then just narrated. The writing quality is excellent and lets you just sit back, relax and engross yourself in the mystery unfolding before you. Very well done!
I love any a novel that has to do with royalty and magic....and this book is definitely the ONE 😂😂💯. I recommend this book to any who loves romance (especially me😂😂).
First of all, the writing quality of the author is amazing. They have an incredible grasp over what they want and you can see that from the smooth flow of the chapters. I really like how the characters have been portrayed, their relationships and chemistry with others and how they react to unfavourable situations. It feels like the story is set in a living, breathing world. Though personally, I am not a fan of sad stories, and there seem to be red flags all the way from chapter one. I feel that this will still be quite an enjoyable read. Worth checking out!
The story is well deserve the design of the story and the plot so far in the prologue leave to the imagination of the MC. I like the way the author deliver the mystery and dark tone of the mother.
Puts a smile on my face. This is my kind of novel. However, Author, please, consider removing the indentions. anyway, I am looking forward to when this book become popular.
Character design and story development are flawless, especially when it's mixed with the author's writing style means that you could easily get pulled in by the story.
Reading the first chapter and I'm already hooked! Just wow. There is fluency and interesting storyline with this. There are no grammatical errors and it is easy to understand. I look forward for more updates!
I should say that normally I don't like female romance stories. But this novel is a pure diamond, absolutely perfect. The pace of the story with progression and character development is just right for me.
I have been a big fan of good romance book since kid 😂😂. And this one really got me into the hook of one of the good romance story dated bck in 10s. The story is so far interesting and can't wait to read more of the upcoming chapters.
Writing Quality. Love the long chaps... Definitely any greedy reader would love. Also the way the author described everything is so smooth. Love also the quotes at the beginning of the chaps. Story Development and Character Design. The Story development keeps you immerse as you read. The characters are also written well with their own stories and intriguing circumstances. Updating Stability. Updates might slow but quality over quantity is also a good thing. World Background. Detailed. Overall, the story has it's own uniqueness and potential that will keep you hook when reading. Added this to my colls. Great work, author!
It's an interesting story to begin with. The synopsis got me already and I'm really looking forward to this story. The author did a good job in making the story hooking.Do continue to update author. Fighting!!!
There's not much for me to say. Overall, this novel is a fantastic piece, and it is evident that the author put a lot of effort into it. The author's description is superb, probably one of the best I've seen. The interaction between the different characters is on another level entirely, and not bland like so many other novels. This novel has a specific uniqueness that intrigues the reader and makes them crave for more. But I think the only flaw it has is the update rate. If only the author could update this book regularly, it would definitely rise through the ranks in no time.
Really loved reading this book and I need more author more please lol , I will highly recommend this book ,people need to read this ...[img=recommend]
There are only eight chapters as of now, but the writing style is easy. I liked the first chapter in particular. Poor mama. Anyways, this is a lovely book I recommend.
Spoiler de révélation
Loving the plot so far. interesting to see the story from different characters perspective i feel like this one's gonna be a really good romance novel. the writing quality is actually good, the author knows what's she's writing. Highly Recommended
Shameless author here giving myself a 5 Star review 😉😘😅. Its my very first original novel and I am totally giving myself a pat on the back for a good work done. I mean, why not? The story unfolds nicely, there will be enough suspense to keep you here once you start and the characters here are awesome!!!!. I encourage you to read and leave your thoughts here as well🥰
The first chapter had an interesting start. It was quite sad too, I can really feel the sadness. And the best part, you start it with showing and don't tell. I don't really mind the cliches because each novel starts with a sad story. Keep on writing, it's good and praiseworthy. Great Job!
Instantly sucked in. The fantasy genre has always been intimidating for me to write. It takes a vivid imagination to build a world that is robust and original, and I believe that this is very much on point. Looking forward to more from this author!
for a first novel, author surely outdid it. this goes beyond a masterpiece, I enjoyed every bit of it, especially the fact that it a concise novel. well done author
Excellent, the story and characters very good, could have been more and more story for all characters, but still very good lines
Well I was tot surprise , I loved it, usually I don’t read these of books, but this so different, so now I have read it everyday for week now, very romantic , engaging and can’t wait to see what happens next. So now I’m going to read the next book. I hope it is as catchy. dally
It's quite good. The updates are stable, the world is interesting, and how the story develops, even if romance isn't my genre, it's good. I just wish it fleshes it's characters more. It's good, check it out.
Wow... This story is doing great. Starting from the character development to the story line everything is just amazing. Highly recommended this book to all the readers out there.😊
Rounds after rounds of applause for this beautiful story conjured up by an obviously amazing writer. Very much worth reading. So read it and love it. Cause you will. Who doesn’t love reading about a ruthless lead finding love anyway?
This is brilliant. I can't wait to see more of this. The description is well written. I love good romance book and I am falling in love with this. Add this to your library and keep reading, you will get hooked in it.
So I obviously can't give you a five star review, but when I first read the synopsis I was intrigued..his sisters maid..😳😳 then as I continued I got absolved into it...you got a good book going there
The book has a well detailed start, and only a few chapters, I and hopefully more readers will look forward to more, I see where this romance, fantasy takes off.
The opening chapter catches the readers attention with a classic story, it's heartbreaking and at the same time intriguing. The idea of arranged marriages for royalty is common, but for an entire people! Crazy! it's interesting and it will be interesting to see how this plays out in the larger sense.
It is so nice to read books that are very descriptive, that and the fact that the book has an intriguing start and a nice flourish all through. A MUST READ ❤️
Its funny to see how fate can mold someone else's life before you are even born. It's very touching and filled with a lot of crazy, wonderful settings that can make one laugh, cry, get angry and all. Looking forward to more.
Ugh why did I like this so much? honestly I don't have any issues. Even though this was a romance novel it had me on my toes the entire time I read it. Stories with such interesting sub plots are the ones that I live the most. Again I'm not someone who usually reads Female lead romance stories but this is has become in if my fav novels on WB. Keep up the great work.
What a refreshing read through! All the characters are well written. Each have their own voice, with thoughts and feelings that you get to see put into play rather then just narrated. The writing quality is excellent and lets you just sit back, relax and engross yourself in the mystery unfolding before you. Very well done!
I love any a novel that has to do with royalty and magic....and this book is definitely the ONE 😂😂💯. I recommend this book to any who loves romance (especially me😂😂).
First of all, the writing quality of the author is amazing. They have an incredible grasp over what they want and you can see that from the smooth flow of the chapters. I really like how the characters have been portrayed, their relationships and chemistry with others and how they react to unfavourable situations. It feels like the story is set in a living, breathing world. Though personally, I am not a fan of sad stories, and there seem to be red flags all the way from chapter one. I feel that this will still be quite an enjoyable read. Worth checking out!
The story is well deserve the design of the story and the plot so far in the prologue leave to the imagination of the MC. I like the way the author deliver the mystery and dark tone of the mother.
Puts a smile on my face. This is my kind of novel. However, Author, please, consider removing the indentions. anyway, I am looking forward to when this book become popular.
Character design and story development are flawless, especially when it's mixed with the author's writing style means that you could easily get pulled in by the story.
Reading the first chapter and I'm already hooked! Just wow. There is fluency and interesting storyline with this. There are no grammatical errors and it is easy to understand. I look forward for more updates!
I should say that normally I don't like female romance stories. But this novel is a pure diamond, absolutely perfect. The pace of the story with progression and character development is just right for me.
I have been a big fan of good romance book since kid 😂😂. And this one really got me into the hook of one of the good romance story dated bck in 10s. The story is so far interesting and can't wait to read more of the upcoming chapters.
Writing Quality. Love the long chaps... Definitely any greedy reader would love. Also the way the author described everything is so smooth. Love also the quotes at the beginning of the chaps. Story Development and Character Design. The Story development keeps you immerse as you read. The characters are also written well with their own stories and intriguing circumstances. Updating Stability. Updates might slow but quality over quantity is also a good thing. World Background. Detailed. Overall, the story has it's own uniqueness and potential that will keep you hook when reading. Added this to my colls. Great work, author!
It's an interesting story to begin with. The synopsis got me already and I'm really looking forward to this story. The author did a good job in making the story hooking.Do continue to update author. Fighting!!!
There's not much for me to say. Overall, this novel is a fantastic piece, and it is evident that the author put a lot of effort into it. The author's description is superb, probably one of the best I've seen. The interaction between the different characters is on another level entirely, and not bland like so many other novels. This novel has a specific uniqueness that intrigues the reader and makes them crave for more. But I think the only flaw it has is the update rate. If only the author could update this book regularly, it would definitely rise through the ranks in no time.
Really loved reading this book and I need more author more please lol , I will highly recommend this book ,people need to read this ...[img=recommend]
There are only eight chapters as of now, but the writing style is easy. I liked the first chapter in particular. Poor mama. Anyways, this is a lovely book I recommend.
Spoiler de révélation Loving the plot so far. interesting to see the story from different characters perspective i feel like this one's gonna be a really good romance novel. the writing quality is actually good, the author knows what's she's writing. Highly Recommended
Shameless author here giving myself a 5 Star review 😉😘😅. Its my very first original novel and I am totally giving myself a pat on the back for a good work done. I mean, why not? The story unfolds nicely, there will be enough suspense to keep you here once you start and the characters here are awesome!!!!. I encourage you to read and leave your thoughts here as well🥰