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I liked the setting of the story, with a very specific description of the traditions of the land where it all takes place. The style of writing is beautiful and let me picture the story very well. I loved the idea of the unusual dreams that the main character sees every time she falls asleep, full of mystery and secrets. Lendon is an interesting character, modest (the way she dressed), very kind (the way she was ready to sacrifice her life for her friend), smart (how she got through the maze) and strong willed (not to give up in any difficult situation). I enjoy reading your story and can't wait to see what happens next! P.s. Great cover!
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I guess its becoming a pattern for me. Yes, It's me again, the shameless author, heheheehe. 2 reviews for each book. One at the beginning and the second after a few chapters have been uploaded. I know you agree that I should give myself 5stars right? Of course! Because the book is that good. You can try to contend it after you read but I'm sure you'll agree ;)
Interesting plot, with multiple characters being introduced at the start of the story along with multiple questions keeping me to read on. My only gripe is that it's hard to to get a feel for the story development when multiple actions, events, and characters are introduced. This is especially important in the first chapters when readers are looking for pace and structure to feel involved in the story. Overall, an interesting premise with great potential! Can't wait to read more!
A good story and I loved what I have read so far. The author has done a great job in building the world background and character design. I'll recommend this story to those who want to read a good romance book.
Interesting write up from the beginning. The world background set up by the author is well established which is rarely seen in the introductory chapter. This book will be great. Good Work. Congratulations.
The writing quality is amazing. There are no spelling or grammar errors and it all flows smoothly. The world background so far is really interesting, it's the first time I've seen a world like this and I think that it's really amazing. A great read!
Very good writing! I really enjoyed the first few chapters, this novel seems very promising to me, i totally recommend this if you like the love genre!
Author, I really love your creativity. from the first chapter, the feeling of love between a mother (on the verge of death) and her daughter, you could feel the bond the mother has for her beloved daughter. Please do not drop this, I'm definitely a fan of this novel
Writing quality is extremely and the story hooks the reader on the very first chapter with mystery and questions and the pulling of heart strings. It is a very good book and I would suggest it to anyone who likes the romance genre! Well done author 👏
The first chapter is really well written. You can easily feel the sentiments. Author has done a good job there. The theme of the novel is quite unique but easy to understand. Not too fast paced but not lagging. A very good read.
I liked the setting of the story, with a very specific description of the traditions of the land where it all takes place. The style of writing is beautiful and let me picture the story very well. I loved the idea of the unusual dreams that the main character sees every time she falls asleep, full of mystery and secrets. Lendon is an interesting character, modest (the way she dressed), very kind (the way she was ready to sacrifice her life for her friend), smart (how she got through the maze) and strong willed (not to give up in any difficult situation). I enjoy reading your story and can't wait to see what happens next! P.s. Great cover!
Spoiler de révélation I guess its becoming a pattern for me. Yes, It's me again, the shameless author, heheheehe. 2 reviews for each book. One at the beginning and the second after a few chapters have been uploaded. I know you agree that I should give myself 5stars right? Of course! Because the book is that good. You can try to contend it after you read but I'm sure you'll agree ;)
Interesting plot, with multiple characters being introduced at the start of the story along with multiple questions keeping me to read on. My only gripe is that it's hard to to get a feel for the story development when multiple actions, events, and characters are introduced. This is especially important in the first chapters when readers are looking for pace and structure to feel involved in the story. Overall, an interesting premise with great potential! Can't wait to read more!
A good story and I loved what I have read so far. The author has done a great job in building the world background and character design. I'll recommend this story to those who want to read a good romance book.
Interesting write up from the beginning. The world background set up by the author is well established which is rarely seen in the introductory chapter. This book will be great. Good Work. Congratulations.
The writing quality is amazing. There are no spelling or grammar errors and it all flows smoothly. The world background so far is really interesting, it's the first time I've seen a world like this and I think that it's really amazing. A great read!
Very good writing! I really enjoyed the first few chapters, this novel seems very promising to me, i totally recommend this if you like the love genre!
Author, I really love your creativity. from the first chapter, the feeling of love between a mother (on the verge of death) and her daughter, you could feel the bond the mother has for her beloved daughter. Please do not drop this, I'm definitely a fan of this novel
Writing quality is extremely and the story hooks the reader on the very first chapter with mystery and questions and the pulling of heart strings. It is a very good book and I would suggest it to anyone who likes the romance genre! Well done author 👏
The first chapter is really well written. You can easily feel the sentiments. Author has done a good job there. The theme of the novel is quite unique but easy to understand. Not too fast paced but not lagging. A very good read.