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not great, it's a blur in the earlier years. he goes on an adventure seemingly from ten to twenty where he goes to a few places to learn some stuff. really not comparing well to the real batman. a lot of skills that batman apparently learned, were not learned by this guy. simply the martial arts stuff. bad writing. the way that he tries to avenge his parents' death, who he goes after, how he handles it, is just badly done. and his first foray out as batman has a lot of problems with shifting viewpoints. so that you don't really know who's talking. switching from first to third, back and forth.
Dear Author, will you add Marvel Netflix shows in the story ? Also will Batman form a Justice League International after the Civil War ? And please update this story.
always been more of a marvel fan but favorite superhero is batman followed by spiderman so loving this hope it covers spiderverse saga Gwen vs Gwen and the batfamily and the spider people swinging around new York together
Dear Author, will there be another team after the Civil War that Batman will form like Justice League International or Guardians of the Globe or something like that?
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters
general rule for writing in English is that only one character can speak per paragraph. If a new character talks, start a new paragraph. That one has been annoying me for the whole time.
Batman is useless for anything except his mind. Because he's only at peak human in every category but his intelligence he is even more useless in marvel. Where its even crazier than in DC. Captain America, Hulk, Ironman, Black widow, Thor, Vision, Scarlet Witch, Dr. Strange, All powerful people with abilities but there's one name that's not there that is very much like Batman. Hawkeye. How useful was Hawkeye in infinite war or anything else really. He was a joke. And even then Hawkeye had one thing going for him that Batman doesn't. He kills enemies. So Batman is more useless then even Hawkeye.
The first part of the story was originale he leaves But he keeps doing stupid things, looking for the hand for maybe 5-6 years but when he gets There he sudenly remeber that they brainwash people (dude come on not thinking about things a single time for 5 years. Moving forward to when he is back in new York he does What Batman does execpt that he does not prepare for the future. So when marvel starts he is just standing by and the plot is just following the movies, no differents so he might as well be a bystander
Good story. Hope that it will good in future too. I have a request for the author that Try to make chapters long above 1K words................
It started with promise, it was good. The original story of the past of MC was like a 3.5/5 but when the author intricated the MCU timeline he ducked up. It was just him copying the script as it is- like ther was no deterrence from the original events due to the presence of batman- I proclaim my Batman fic superior to this one
dommage que batman n est pas un grand impact sur l histoire, juste une copie du mcu avec des éléments batman, dommage car cela pourrai être plus intéressant un vrai mcu alternatif où notre mc modifie l histoire
I feel like I'm reading the scripts from the movies, but Batman is inserted into it some times.
So far I'm okay with the current Batman story. It's just that the writer doesn't show the growth in Batman's strength which I think is just like that and also for the villains whose appearances are too fast not to be made per arc so that the development of Batman's sidekick character can be developed again. Please don't forget other superhero characters like Spiderman. That is all and thank you!
Очень интересно, много бэт моментов которые вызывают смех от уровня пафоса. Есть моменты когда с нетерпением ждёшь фразу: Я Бэтмен. Немного правдо непривычно что Бэтмен убивает.
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So far, this story has shown to be a great pastime for me, not a perfect story by any means, it's pacing is a bit too fast and the grammar and dialogue do lack a little, not to mention that the MCU part of the story is just a copy paste of the original movies with batman and the bat family added in to minimize collateral damage in their large scale fights and add some extra dialogue and more interactions with original characters which isn't all that bad to be honest, because I've seen worse, but the idea of this universe's batman is very great and the batman origins, the green goblin, the red room and Nightwing sagas were all great in their own ways, it helps with world building and introducing new characters to the fold. Overall a great story. I give it four stars.👍
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It’s so good, only thing bad is how long it takes to update, though the author probably has life stuff getting in the way.
the mc acts like batman from Walmart he doesn't have his own personality he tries to imitate batman in every way, reading this is a waste of time and I wouldn't recommend reading this.
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin type suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP. Thanks- Reader!
this story is like you are just trying to put dc batman in marvel examples Talia al ghul dated batman while he was training you are doing the same for elektra George Stacy and commissioner Gordon and you want his daughter to be the batgirl like Barbra from there I just dropped
I liked it a first but the longer I read the more stuff was just forced on me especially with the whole Nightwing and Orphan arc like the fact she revealed who she was while indirectly outing the mc was stupid it was same with the forced Batwoman I'm just disappointed and feel like it could have been better
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malo extremadamente malo en un inicio fue interesante pero comforme los capítulos avanzan parece que ya no es el MCU y solo es Batman y nada mas no una mescla si no SOLO BATMAN no un renacido que conoce la historia de batman si no solo BATMAN
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not great, it's a blur in the earlier years. he goes on an adventure seemingly from ten to twenty where he goes to a few places to learn some stuff. really not comparing well to the real batman. a lot of skills that batman apparently learned, were not learned by this guy. simply the martial arts stuff. bad writing. the way that he tries to avenge his parents' death, who he goes after, how he handles it, is just badly done. and his first foray out as batman has a lot of problems with shifting viewpoints. so that you don't really know who's talking. switching from first to third, back and forth.
Dear Author, will you add Marvel Netflix shows in the story ? Also will Batman form a Justice League International after the Civil War ? And please update this story.
always been more of a marvel fan but favorite superhero is batman followed by spiderman so loving this hope it covers spiderverse saga Gwen vs Gwen and the batfamily and the spider people swinging around new York together
Dear Author, will there be another team after the Civil War that Batman will form like Justice League International or Guardians of the Globe or something like that?
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters
general rule for writing in English is that only one character can speak per paragraph. If a new character talks, start a new paragraph. That one has been annoying me for the whole time.
Batman is useless for anything except his mind. Because he's only at peak human in every category but his intelligence he is even more useless in marvel. Where its even crazier than in DC. Captain America, Hulk, Ironman, Black widow, Thor, Vision, Scarlet Witch, Dr. Strange, All powerful people with abilities but there's one name that's not there that is very much like Batman. Hawkeye. How useful was Hawkeye in infinite war or anything else really. He was a joke. And even then Hawkeye had one thing going for him that Batman doesn't. He kills enemies. So Batman is more useless then even Hawkeye.
The first part of the story was originale he leaves But he keeps doing stupid things, looking for the hand for maybe 5-6 years but when he gets There he sudenly remeber that they brainwash people (dude come on not thinking about things a single time for 5 years. Moving forward to when he is back in new York he does What Batman does execpt that he does not prepare for the future. So when marvel starts he is just standing by and the plot is just following the movies, no differents so he might as well be a bystander
Good story. Hope that it will good in future too. I have a request for the author that Try to make chapters long above 1K words................
It started with promise, it was good. The original story of the past of MC was like a 3.5/5 but when the author intricated the MCU timeline he ducked up. It was just him copying the script as it is- like ther was no deterrence from the original events due to the presence of batman- I proclaim my Batman fic superior to this one
dommage que batman n est pas un grand impact sur l histoire, juste une copie du mcu avec des éléments batman, dommage car cela pourrai être plus intéressant un vrai mcu alternatif où notre mc modifie l histoire
I feel like I'm reading the scripts from the movies, but Batman is inserted into it some times.
So far I'm okay with the current Batman story. It's just that the writer doesn't show the growth in Batman's strength which I think is just like that and also for the villains whose appearances are too fast not to be made per arc so that the development of Batman's sidekick character can be developed again. Please don't forget other superhero characters like Spiderman. That is all and thank you!
Очень интересно, много бэт моментов которые вызывают смех от уровня пафоса. Есть моменты когда с нетерпением ждёшь фразу: Я Бэтмен. Немного правдо непривычно что Бэтмен убивает.
You should make batman beyond appear with a terry mcginnis random teenager cameo keep up the good work Vĥjnñhgghhbbvvvvvvvvgvvfffkhssdfhjjkkkfffgbjtdqqq4tj4fcqwthbffddfgvgvew34tttyghe2ghg1wnytgy1388iiy6oygvjwjw1ĥç
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So far, this story has shown to be a great pastime for me, not a perfect story by any means, it's pacing is a bit too fast and the grammar and dialogue do lack a little, not to mention that the MCU part of the story is just a copy paste of the original movies with batman and the bat family added in to minimize collateral damage in their large scale fights and add some extra dialogue and more interactions with original characters which isn't all that bad to be honest, because I've seen worse, but the idea of this universe's batman is very great and the batman origins, the green goblin, the red room and Nightwing sagas were all great in their own ways, it helps with world building and introducing new characters to the fold. Overall a great story. I give it four stars.👍
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It’s so good, only thing bad is how long it takes to update, though the author probably has life stuff getting in the way.
the mc acts like batman from Walmart he doesn't have his own personality he tries to imitate batman in every way, reading this is a waste of time and I wouldn't recommend reading this.
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin type suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP. Thanks- Reader!
this story is like you are just trying to put dc batman in marvel examples Talia al ghul dated batman while he was training you are doing the same for elektra George Stacy and commissioner Gordon and you want his daughter to be the batgirl like Barbra from there I just dropped
I liked it a first but the longer I read the more stuff was just forced on me especially with the whole Nightwing and Orphan arc like the fact she revealed who she was while indirectly outing the mc was stupid it was same with the forced Batwoman I'm just disappointed and feel like it could have been better
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malo extremadamente malo en un inicio fue interesante pero comforme los capítulos avanzan parece que ya no es el MCU y solo es Batman y nada mas no una mescla si no SOLO BATMAN no un renacido que conoce la historia de batman si no solo BATMAN