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Well..what can I say....MC with 10 years can kill HYDRA agents and survive winter soldier...has a lot of explosives e and a hidden room..everything just appeared from thin air...so yeah I Know with this that this fic is going to be really bad
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everything is great but I've literally seen the MC being wannabe batman (read till chapter 60) he could have done so much and when someone dies he cries and says I should have had more power but MC could literally any day go to Kamar-Taj or get juiced up on serums.
Es buena toma todo el aire de Batman y lo mete en Marvel más al final parece un cómic que un fanfic y te olvidas que es un reencarnado muy rápido pero tiene conocimiento futuro para planear
Its a decent story and a good idea, but the main character is way to fixated on 'Batman' and being Batman. It's one thing to use Batman as an inspiration but it's another to force his every action to be in line with that of Batman, which is what this mc does.
mc looks dumb even he knows some big future event or a villain mastermind but still act like dumb pretend that don't know anything and made mistake over and over
Embora a história esteja entrando no clichê de seguir demais o Canon, principalmente quando considerarmos tudo o que o Batman já fez desde sua estréia (por exemplo, não tem efeito borboleta?), A história é muito boa e empolgante. Eu gostei muito de acompanhar a trajetória do morcegão
No Good Character Development. A Wannabe Batman. Character has no type of Build up or strength like batman would, who is a Human. No Effort into making the world background detailed. OVERALL HOT GARBAGE. It Strays from marvel and character is just a low level criminal which batman never was.
Would you consider doing Grey’s Antomy fanfic. Also love this book.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Alguien conoce algun fanfiction decente o bueno de DC comics ?? creen que me puedan recomendar algunos por fa eh estado buscando algunos pero no son tan buenos
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Chope-le chope-le il le faut batman chope-le il va payer pour tout [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
alguien sabe como leerla en español???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????No sabia con que rellenar espacio xd
I've read through 16 chapters, and this is some pretty bad storytelling. The writing quality is poor at best. POV's are incredibly confusing. Story jumps around with no real proper pacing and there's no character development whatsoever.
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achei legal, pena que nao e diario, mas e legal pena que o MC nao se chama Bruce, mas para uma fanfic e umas das poucas que realmente querem ser mais original do que apenas ir pegando personagens e juntando tudo ao inves de criar seus proprios personagens originais e fazer eles evoluirem junto dos personagens da marvel
Toujours bien écrit ça suit sont MCU tranquille et en s'ennuie jamais la suite la suite [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So , is he going to get power up or not. Where entities so strong that with snap of finger they can erase mc and he is fighting them with bajrang, there are opportunities of getting power up but he is fighting them with suit.........
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It had a good start and the idea of this story was great. But for me it ended when a 10yo was invading and exploding a HIDRA base without superpowers. If you look at the character development he was training for 5-6 years. It means that a child without superpowers just need little training (few years is little) to destroy an enemy base, fight the Winter Soldier and escape (there no information how he escaped). There are other issues, like adults allowing a 10yo leave his home just because he is smart.
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I found this story most enjoyable the way Jeffrey portrays what he thinks Batman is supposed to be is very fun to read haven't seen Spider-Man yet just Peter Parker in passing but Gwen Stacy has a prominent role looking forward to what happens between them and if she gains spider powers????
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Esperaba más de este fic, comenzó bien durante los primeros capítulos y luego *BAM* mata a los padres para darle una especie de fondo trágico... luego se va y vende drogas?? WTF.Es un fic bastante inconsistente, prácticamente es canon marvel, con una mezcla rara de personajes en un intento de reemplazar a los de DC. El autor mantiene a Jeff (MC) como un personaje con habilidades de artes marciales y eso es...(No búsqueda de chi ni ningúna habilidad relacionada a las artes marciales ) Aparece incluso batwoman y nightwing de la nada, supongo que es un posible intento del autor para recrear a la familia bat?? Nose ... muy raro y poco interesante. Prácticamente es la copia de batman en marvel a pesar de no ser la misma persona.
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Well..what can I say....MC with 10 years can kill HYDRA agents and survive winter soldier...has a lot of explosives e and a hidden room..everything just appeared from thin air...so yeah I Know with this that this fic is going to be really bad
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MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
everything is great but I've literally seen the MC being wannabe batman (read till chapter 60) he could have done so much and when someone dies he cries and says I should have had more power but MC could literally any day go to Kamar-Taj or get juiced up on serums.
Es buena toma todo el aire de Batman y lo mete en Marvel más al final parece un cómic que un fanfic y te olvidas que es un reencarnado muy rápido pero tiene conocimiento futuro para planear
Its a decent story and a good idea, but the main character is way to fixated on 'Batman' and being Batman. It's one thing to use Batman as an inspiration but it's another to force his every action to be in line with that of Batman, which is what this mc does.
mc looks dumb even he knows some big future event or a villain mastermind but still act like dumb pretend that don't know anything and made mistake over and over
Embora a história esteja entrando no clichê de seguir demais o Canon, principalmente quando considerarmos tudo o que o Batman já fez desde sua estréia (por exemplo, não tem efeito borboleta?), A história é muito boa e empolgante. Eu gostei muito de acompanhar a trajetória do morcegão
No Good Character Development. A Wannabe Batman. Character has no type of Build up or strength like batman would, who is a Human. No Effort into making the world background detailed. OVERALL HOT GARBAGE. It Strays from marvel and character is just a low level criminal which batman never was.
Would you consider doing Grey’s Antomy fanfic. Also love this book.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Alguien conoce algun fanfiction decente o bueno de DC comics ?? creen que me puedan recomendar algunos por fa eh estado buscando algunos pero no son tan buenos
Like.........,............................Like.........,............................Like.........,............................Like.........,............................
Chope-le chope-le il le faut batman chope-le il va payer pour tout [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
alguien sabe como leerla en español???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????No sabia con que rellenar espacio xd
I've read through 16 chapters, and this is some pretty bad storytelling. The writing quality is poor at best. POV's are incredibly confusing. Story jumps around with no real proper pacing and there's no character development whatsoever.
Whaouuuuuuuuu!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
achei legal, pena que nao e diario, mas e legal pena que o MC nao se chama Bruce, mas para uma fanfic e umas das poucas que realmente querem ser mais original do que apenas ir pegando personagens e juntando tudo ao inves de criar seus proprios personagens originais e fazer eles evoluirem junto dos personagens da marvel
Toujours bien écrit ça suit sont MCU tranquille et en s'ennuie jamais la suite la suite [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So , is he going to get power up or not. Where entities so strong that with snap of finger they can erase mc and he is fighting them with bajrang, there are opportunities of getting power up but he is fighting them with suit.........
Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story! Full Star for an Amazing Story!
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Spoiler de révélation It had a good start and the idea of this story was great. But for me it ended when a 10yo was invading and exploding a HIDRA base without superpowers. If you look at the character development he was training for 5-6 years. It means that a child without superpowers just need little training (few years is little) to destroy an enemy base, fight the Winter Soldier and escape (there no information how he escaped). There are other issues, like adults allowing a 10yo leave his home just because he is smart.
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Spoiler de révélation I found this story most enjoyable the way Jeffrey portrays what he thinks Batman is supposed to be is very fun to read haven't seen Spider-Man yet just Peter Parker in passing but Gwen Stacy has a prominent role looking forward to what happens between them and if she gains spider powers????
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Esperaba más de este fic, comenzó bien durante los primeros capítulos y luego *BAM* mata a los padres para darle una especie de fondo trágico... luego se va y vende drogas?? WTF.Es un fic bastante inconsistente, prácticamente es canon marvel, con una mezcla rara de personajes en un intento de reemplazar a los de DC. El autor mantiene a Jeff (MC) como un personaje con habilidades de artes marciales y eso es...(No búsqueda de chi ni ningúna habilidad relacionada a las artes marciales ) Aparece incluso batwoman y nightwing de la nada, supongo que es un posible intento del autor para recrear a la familia bat?? Nose ... muy raro y poco interesante. Prácticamente es la copia de batman en marvel a pesar de no ser la misma persona.