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Batman in MCU
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a young avid Dc fan gets paid a visit from truck kun then wakes up as a kid in a rich family all is normal until he discovers his family is friends with the Starks and Captain America is real.
follow his adventure as he tries his best to survive in a world of heroes and villains and have fun along the way.
this is my second fan fic I learnt a lot from my first one and I'm going to hope this goes better than the last.
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Was a great start and only some errors but it wasnt that much but when the mc decides to leave after his parents die he goes to china snd joins the triad being a low level grunt selling drugs on the street..... like what? He is a well known person and now he is being a low level drug dealer? Then he decides to join The Hand..... another dumb idea lol could have gone to almost any other place and it would be okay but now? Not a chance. Maybe if that entire chapter was changed then this review will go back to 5/5
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trash very trash the author killed the MC parent just to make him have a sad background to let him become batman of the MCU very trash don't read the author keeps blabing about learning from his previous fan fic yet he seems not don't trust the other reviews the author obviously deleted the bad ones while the rest has come from his alt accounts
Stupid Plot no slight logic at all. How can a kid survived from Winter Soldier? Even if he did training he's still a kid so how can he compared to WS. Never did like Batman(Bruce Wayne), because he is arrogant, naive, and has mental problem. He also force his own beliefs which is "No Killing Rule" to everyone. The only reason Bruce Wayne survived in Batman comics and etc because he is The Batman = Absolute Plot Armor.True fact Flash and Superman can kill Batman if they want to, Bruce doesn't know how he died and there are many ways to kill Batman.
The concept of this book is great author. I enjoyed the story till now quite a bit and as a huge fan of MCU and Batman, it's like a cherry on top of a cake.
The premise of the story sounds really good, but the execution of the story was just as bad as the execution of this batman's parents. Honestly I tried I really did. I wanted this story to be great. Pure cringe throughout and too fast paced in areas it needs to slow down for. In just a few paragraphs he has a 10 ish years relationship with Elektra and then gets betrayed by her in the same few paragraphs. That's just one example.
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you got a frame work for story but not refined. the fact a 10 year old kid can survive winter Soldier is weird for me. it would have been fine if u have explained how that's possible.i mean we all only know that the kid trained from age of 4 to 10.but thats it we don't know what he achieved through that 6 years and I don't even know how mc looks like. the next problem is he is a smartass too.but I don't know how he become smart.after 10 years of world travel he come back and become batman and build an arsenal of bat man like all batman eqipment like batmobile etc.but I don't know where he got the knowledge.he told us that he make a AI comparable or better than Jarvis but how? a lack of information of how he achieved what he did is the only problem I have. for eg: kid started training (there is not much information of what he trained and specialised in story) then one day kid got traped with monster and somehow killed it.(no idea how he did that.no idea about his mental state in there and no idea how strong he is to take care of that monster, it's just monster died ,end of the arc because mc is mc and mc won't die)
A 100% rip off of the orginal Batman begins movie so far he has just replaced the league with the hand and threw in tony other than that its basically a copy and paste
Looking good so far. excited to see more............................................................................................................
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Well..what can I say....MC with 10 years can kill HYDRA agents and survive winter soldier...has a lot of explosives e and a hidden room..everything just appeared from thin air...so yeah I Know with this that this fic is going to be really bad
No Good Character Development. A Wannabe Batman. Character has no type of Build up or strength like batman would, who is a Human. No Effort into making the world background detailed. OVERALL HOT GARBAGE. It Strays from marvel and character is just a low level criminal which batman never was.
From what ive read so far the story is Good but i have one problem with it. when the mc tells sebasTian why hes using bats as his logo hE rips of the original batman. it irritated me a little and was a Wasted opportunity for character development
mc looks dumb even he knows some big future event or a villain mastermind but still act like dumb pretend that don't know anything and made mistake over and over
the mc acts like batman from Walmart he doesn't have his own personality he tries to imitate batman in every way, reading this is a waste of time and I wouldn't recommend reading this.
Although you made great work of introducing batman in the MCU , you later went ahead of turning all this into a lame joke . I mean seriously ? he was working as an assassin for what , 8-9 years , and then he doesnt kill anybody ? This is the reason why batman is the stupidest hero of all . Literally , he keeps capturing the his enemies who brutally kill innocents just so that they later escape arcaham and continuing their work. Dont make this the same pathetic version of DC batman . This is a big letdown . Every villain in the MCU died in the end , so you aint changing anything by killing them off , This is not DC where you see Batman fighting Joker every week. Kraven abducted a school bus full of children and then what did he do ? knocked him out . Yeah , great , bet he will never do anything bad for the rst kf his life now . Anyway , I just dont feel the stroy as it continues . Batman in MCU seems good as captain america doesnt have any power except a stronger physicue , but the idiot DC Batman in MCU is pathetic . You even made him kill the Hudra base leader and exploded the base when he was fking 10 years old and niw he is turning into a hypocrite . This story is a joke .
The first part of the story was originale he leaves But he keeps doing stupid things, looking for the hand for maybe 5-6 years but when he gets There he sudenly remeber that they brainwash people (dude come on not thinking about things a single time for 5 years. Moving forward to when he is back in new York he does What Batman does execpt that he does not prepare for the future. So when marvel starts he is just standing by and the plot is just following the movies, no differents so he might as well be a bystander
It started with promise, it was good. The original story of the past of MC was like a 3.5/5 but when the author intricated the MCU timeline he ducked up. It was just him copying the script as it is- like ther was no deterrence from the original events due to the presence of batman- I proclaim my Batman fic superior to this one
Why did he come home ?? He's still a weakling! He has not learned the art of qi! He has not perfected his martial arts! Batman at his age had already studied more than 90 types of martial arts, became a master of weapons, ninjutsu, stealth, many types of meditation, became a master of yoga, acrobatics, gymnastics, acting, learned tricks from Giovanni Zatara, became a professor in many scientific disciplines, dance, tempered the body, soul, mind and heart, to fight his own fears, the moments when Batman was in a state of shock can be counted on one hand, he reached the body of the Olympic level! He's a Sherlock-level detective, he's traveled half the world !! He calculated his travel plan in just a few minutes! He adopted the experience of many people in different fields of study around the world! Translated by Google translate !!