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Overkill

Story is good... dont read the comment till you finish reading since it might affect you experience. Kinda like someone keep telling you potato chip is bad and doesn't tasted good...!!!

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timeawayfromstress

nonsense.mc stupid.he started a successful company but naive and stupid.money can't fill his heart hahahaha.mc has no brains.no logic.the author must be a kid.The novel has no logic. The mc has no brain.

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Locodelacieraxx

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Mathias_Irusta

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No_friends_

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Carlos_Balbizan

the synopsis gave me the feeling of a mc with a negative iq or a child of a chinese novel, where he wants to prove himself to be the best for everything and everyone for no "apparent reason". it looks like the synopsis of a child who wants to show himself better than the other in everything

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Eleventh_Realm

Is this novel DROPPED!!? ..... . . . .. . ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Kaitoxp

Well I didn't read this yet but I will sure raed this later, I'm giving this a 5 star. Just asking! Is this a dropped story? I mean did the author"dropped" the fanfic?

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Supri_Dodi

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Zer0phia

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Nyamsu_87

Bagus...... Lanjutkan..... πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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salamander0

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K_M24
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K_M24
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Good good goos good good good good Good good goos good good good good Good good goos good good good good Good good goos good good good good p

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DreamyFatCat

Very good novel.only slow release rate per chapter.If you are still okay with that then you like or love this novel.I am specially fan or OP MC, group or organization building where mc is the leader.This is also have similarities with pocket hunting dimension novel where Yuhao(MC or soul land 2 Mc) is hunting on another dimension to get spirit bones,ring and etc.Looking forward for the upcomming chapters ^_^.

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ghazi_ali

Ω‚Ψ΅Ω‡ Ω…Ψ«Ψ§Ω„ΩŠΨ©πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°β¦>.<⁩⁦>.<⁩⁦>.<⁩⁦>.<⁩⁦>.<⁩⁦>.<⁩⁦>.<⁩،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،

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Dedao
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Its good ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Cewu
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The novel might have been fun to read IF it didnt have such atrocious grammar. The author is conscious of it and he is probably working on improving his english but I must say how it is. The story is a typical reincarnation story with a bit more of an emotional past life. Characters... I cant really comment on that since I only read like 5 chapters. Not the first time I see this type of system but it is surely an interesting system by itself. Would have kept reading only if not for the atrocious grammar. good luck on your story author :)

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Delem
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extraordinary, honorable writer I am waiting for the continuation of the story I hope you can continue the story I hope you have not forgotten this novel please continue the story so and thank you for the chapter honorable author. πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

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KrulCifer

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Tako_
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Good..............................

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ToxicPickle

great story love how the characters are developing and the plot is really good cant wait to know how these plots end goog luck keep it up its a great read

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Muhammad_Aditiar

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Tako_
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AsuraUzumaki

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xxplayer

Great fanfiction novel pls keep on goingπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Ancient0

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MAGE_OF_FLOWER

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DA_26
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Show them the true dispair 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎 ...............................................................................

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Overkill

Story is good... dont read the comment till you finish reading since it might affect you experience. Kinda like someone keep telling you potato chip is bad and doesn't tasted good...!!!

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timeawayfromstress

nonsense.mc stupid.he started a successful company but naive and stupid.money can't fill his heart hahahaha.mc has no brains.no logic.the author must be a kid.The novel has no logic. The mc has no brain.

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Locodelacieraxx

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Mathias_Irusta

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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No_friends_

please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please

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Carlos_Balbizan

the synopsis gave me the feeling of a mc with a negative iq or a child of a chinese novel, where he wants to prove himself to be the best for everything and everyone for no "apparent reason". it looks like the synopsis of a child who wants to show himself better than the other in everything

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Eleventh_Realm

Is this novel DROPPED!!? ..... . . . .. . ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Kaitoxp

Well I didn't read this yet but I will sure raed this later, I'm giving this a 5 star. Just asking! Is this a dropped story? I mean did the author"dropped" the fanfic?

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Eryw
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Supri_Dodi

lanjutkan min young and care lanjutkan min young and care lanjutkan min young and care lanjutkan min young and care lanjutkan min young and care

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Zer0phia

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Nyamsu_87

Bagus...... Lanjutkan..... πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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salamander0

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K_M24
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K_M24
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DreamyFatCat

Very good novel.only slow release rate per chapter.If you are still okay with that then you like or love this novel.I am specially fan or OP MC, group or organization building where mc is the leader.This is also have similarities with pocket hunting dimension novel where Yuhao(MC or soul land 2 Mc) is hunting on another dimension to get spirit bones,ring and etc.Looking forward for the upcomming chapters ^_^.

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ghazi_ali

Ω‚Ψ΅Ω‡ Ω…Ψ«Ψ§Ω„ΩŠΨ©πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°β¦>.<⁩⁦>.<⁩⁦>.<⁩⁦>.<⁩⁦>.<⁩⁦>.<⁩⁦>.<⁩،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،

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Dedao
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Its good ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Cewu
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The novel might have been fun to read IF it didnt have such atrocious grammar. The author is conscious of it and he is probably working on improving his english but I must say how it is. The story is a typical reincarnation story with a bit more of an emotional past life. Characters... I cant really comment on that since I only read like 5 chapters. Not the first time I see this type of system but it is surely an interesting system by itself. Would have kept reading only if not for the atrocious grammar. good luck on your story author :)

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Delem
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extraordinary, honorable writer I am waiting for the continuation of the story I hope you can continue the story I hope you have not forgotten this novel please continue the story so and thank you for the chapter honorable author. πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™

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KrulCifer

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Tako_
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Good..............................

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ToxicPickle

great story love how the characters are developing and the plot is really good cant wait to know how these plots end goog luck keep it up its a great read

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kenlinvert1

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Muhammad_Aditiar

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Tako_
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GOOOD.........................................................................................................................................................................

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AsuraUzumaki

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xxplayer

Great fanfiction novel pls keep on goingπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Ancient0

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MAGE_OF_FLOWER

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DA_26
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Show them the true dispair 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎 ...............................................................................

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