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Γcrire un avisnonsense.mc stupid.he started a successful company but naive and stupid.money can't fill his heart hahahaha.mc has no brains.no logic.the author must be a kid.The novel has no logic. The mc has no brain.
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the synopsis gave me the feeling of a mc with a negative iq or a child of a chinese novel, where he wants to prove himself to be the best for everything and everyone for no "apparent reason". it looks like the synopsis of a child who wants to show himself better than the other in everything
Is this novel DROPPED!!? ..... . . . .. . ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Well I didn't read this yet but I will sure raed this later, I'm giving this a 5 star. Just asking! Is this a dropped story? I mean did the author"dropped" the fanfic?
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Very good novel.only slow release rate per chapter.If you are still okay with that then you like or love this novel.I am specially fan or OP MC, group or organization building where mc is the leader.This is also have similarities with pocket hunting dimension novel where Yuhao(MC or soul land 2 Mc) is hunting on another dimension to get spirit bones,ring and etc.Looking forward for the upcomming chapters ^_^.
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The novel might have been fun to read IF it didnt have such atrocious grammar. The author is conscious of it and he is probably working on improving his english but I must say how it is. The story is a typical reincarnation story with a bit more of an emotional past life. Characters... I cant really comment on that since I only read like 5 chapters. Not the first time I see this type of system but it is surely an interesting system by itself. Would have kept reading only if not for the atrocious grammar. good luck on your story author :)
extraordinary, honorable writer I am waiting for the continuation of the story I hope you can continue the story I hope you have not forgotten this novel please continue the story so and thank you for the chapter honorable author. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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great story love how the characters are developing and the plot is really good cant wait to know how these plots end goog luck keep it up its a great read
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Story is good... dont read the comment till you finish reading since it might affect you experience. Kinda like someone keep telling you potato chip is bad and doesn't tasted good...!!!
nonsense.mc stupid.he started a successful company but naive and stupid.money can't fill his heart hahahaha.mc has no brains.no logic.the author must be a kid.The novel has no logic. The mc has no brain.
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the synopsis gave me the feeling of a mc with a negative iq or a child of a chinese novel, where he wants to prove himself to be the best for everything and everyone for no "apparent reason". it looks like the synopsis of a child who wants to show himself better than the other in everything
Is this novel DROPPED!!? ..... . . . .. . ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Well I didn't read this yet but I will sure raed this later, I'm giving this a 5 star. Just asking! Is this a dropped story? I mean did the author"dropped" the fanfic?
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Very good novel.only slow release rate per chapter.If you are still okay with that then you like or love this novel.I am specially fan or OP MC, group or organization building where mc is the leader.This is also have similarities with pocket hunting dimension novel where Yuhao(MC or soul land 2 Mc) is hunting on another dimension to get spirit bones,ring and etc.Looking forward for the upcomming chapters ^_^.
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The novel might have been fun to read IF it didnt have such atrocious grammar. The author is conscious of it and he is probably working on improving his english but I must say how it is. The story is a typical reincarnation story with a bit more of an emotional past life. Characters... I cant really comment on that since I only read like 5 chapters. Not the first time I see this type of system but it is surely an interesting system by itself. Would have kept reading only if not for the atrocious grammar. good luck on your story author :)
extraordinary, honorable writer I am waiting for the continuation of the story I hope you can continue the story I hope you have not forgotten this novel please continue the story so and thank you for the chapter honorable author. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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great story love how the characters are developing and the plot is really good cant wait to know how these plots end goog luck keep it up its a great read
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Story is good... dont read the comment till you finish reading since it might affect you experience. Kinda like someone keep telling you potato chip is bad and doesn't tasted good...!!!