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My Power is Upgrading Everything
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Synopsis
Your strength is more powerful...hahaha then I just have to upgrade my power so I more powerful than you
You Have a powerful pet...hahaha then I just have to upgrade this stray cat to become the primordial white tiger
You have a powerful sword that can cut steel...hahaha then I just have to upgrade this kitchen knife to a divine weapon that can cut the heaven itself
My power is Upgrading...
This is my first time writing a story in English ... so I ask all of you readers for your advice
I made this story for my pleasure and to make you enjoy it so don't give me your harsh comment
If you want to read this then please read and if you don't, then go search other stories
p.s All characters in this story belong to their own creator except my own creation
First World: Douluo Dalu 2
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Why does he look like such a prick in that cover? He has such a punchable face...I just get this feeling like I want to just beat the **** out that face. Lmao! Now onto the actual story. It's...ight. There's a system if u like that.
The story is good,it has a nice Character development, good mc and system. The only thing lacking is the grammar but it is still passable...
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Sorry bud but i feel like this is not a good representation if the Douluo Dalu world at all and is just a typical cultivation world with the cultivation system of douluo dalu. Unexplained power use, the mc and his mother somehow randomly learn how to fight without any type of training involved nor are they over spirit level 10. All enemies doesn’t even have any brain, a typical young master, their parents who are city lords (not sure how they became that if they are like that). You left so many plot holes that it literally hurts to just think. What happened to the mistress of Yuhao’s father and his father’s reaction? There was even a period where you just copypasted from slime tensei and just changed the names! Also, (Don’t read any further if you get triggered by my opinion on ******): Wtf is with people in the comment section? Almost all of them want to see ****** between Yuhao and his mom, which is in my opinion something really disgusting. I wonder how many of these 14 years olds (cause 9 years old usually don’t get horny) would love to have sexual intercourse with their own mother. I happen upon 15 comments on a single line with All 15 people asking for ******. in my opinion and as a son, i would love to see them all burn in hell. Harem is one thing in novels that i mostly can’t bear if the novel have characters without brain but ****** is just something i can’t bear at all. Go die in a fire all of you disgusting fuc*s
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the synopsis gave me the feeling of a mc with a negative iq or a child of a chinese novel, where he wants to prove himself to be the best for everything and everyone for no "apparent reason". it looks like the synopsis of a child who wants to show himself better than the other in everything
i will give 5 star for the incest..... thanks sensei --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Great fanfiction novel pls keep on going👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
For me this novel is good, I can see author improvement in this story. I very aware that not all story is perfect... but even though the novel is still lacking at few aspect, I still give author 5 stars
Very good novel.only slow release rate per chapter.If you are still okay with that then you like or love this novel.I am specially fan or OP MC, group or organization building where mc is the leader.This is also have similarities with pocket hunting dimension novel where Yuhao(MC or soul land 2 Mc) is hunting on another dimension to get spirit bones,ring and etc.Looking forward for the upcomming chapters ^_^.
nonsense.mc stupid.he started a successful company but naive and stupid.money can't fill his heart hahahaha.mc has no brains.no logic.the author must be a kid.The novel has no logic. The mc has no brain.
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Amazing concept amazing story, and grammar improving. Suggestions of world travel. Over Lord Naruto Marvel Dc Dxd Familiar of zero. Transformers. High school of the dead. Dragon ball z One punch man
Im just gonna day this to me the story is turning out amazing and the grammar needs work but hey we’re going to get there also please if only by. A little bit could we get a mass release up to like chapter 30 or somethings I can’t keep waiting for these chapters yah know
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Nice chapter Need mass release chapter Lol me 8hiyt8dtd7r7dt7xfu9uf9yf8tdt8dy9fu0vi0g0ig9yc8txt7st8fr7sr7srt9u9g8tf9fgh08txt8d0hu0g8yxfy9ihu0g8txt8s7rs47st8y9fu9g8yuuuhoyu9g0ugu9fhohoghy0g9y9f8tdt8st8d8t8tst8dy8yyuig88td7rsr7yhujhovjohgviohhhocochi8yxt8dtid8ts8ts9yxc9hiovjiijjpjvpjcjoyfgiditditx9g
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Story is good... dont read the comment till you finish reading since it might affect you experience. Kinda like someone keep telling you potato chip is bad and doesn't tasted good...!!!