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I like everything exsept the main protaganist, he’s really annoying and I hate his personality, it dosent seem real, but other than that it’s fine just ignore the MC
I tried to read this 2 times but the mc acts like a villain and is just a comple jerk to everyone.
(okay I put this on private pretty much because at the end I most likely will save them on the story but don't worry just along you the weed after the Gap you should be okay) anywho the man c is acting like a stupid more eviler child that's all I have to say anywho pretty much one about to say is going to be a spoiler so heads up just in case he's eating CD PS thing anywho pretty much the MC despite being reincarnate and a teenager who should have at least some common sense man you acting more like a kid than anything else who pretty much knows about the few should happen in the future I'm at recording out loud I read to all the way to chapter 55 I literally couldn't any for into simply stupid if you want me to run some more that's lucky ones on top specifically the one had the low start ones just a heads up and don't worry I'm sorry they were stayed there forever anywho here come the spoiler bring my laundry and a child is so and I mean it so had it I'm not black guy is in he don't know what to love I mean black has been as in he don't know how to learn from my own mistakes easily like racing here on classmate quote and quote by the way way with mind you Trinidad slim and to begin with like the MC says and get plenty of all right by going up the whole schools any robots your friends come over talk to him and he know I didn't promise attitude dark cover episodes he dancing when he thinks he's still going out of hero even though he's punished by staying inside of his room so as a result he got kicked out and so he take out a drive with has up by the way there's our prima dummy Troy that much better than the court that I mean have gluttons pretty much you know that Google ghost one for everyone call it and you wash source the eclipse of it I guess you probably know what I meant better turn training and will prove I still prove how we some training hero is him too friend go right batteries oh thank you his anger stay pretty much I'll take it all away oh and heads up he friends are the invisible girl and the one with the light okay okay bye
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Writing Quality? Epic! Stability? Not sure, i left halfway the novel. But I'll give it a 4 Story Development? Actually kind of decent, but it could be better. Gave it a 4. Character Design? Ah god... This character really likes to troll us readers and characters of the story..... World Background? A generic MHA experience!
the only criticism i could give is that 1 the story would be better with a time skit to show where the group were in the future 2 side character were very forgettable
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I noticed this novel on fanfiction years ago and read it there. Now i noticed it here. Even now i still remember how insanely bad this story is. Quite frankly, the idea of a Craftsman System + My Hero Academia has great synergy and i was really interested in reading it. But the following novel is just disappointing. The MC is an insanely rude, bad-tempered, rebellious and annoying for no other reason than that is the character the author gave him. Like the MC is cussing out people casually for no reason. The author did try to show a few times that the MC still has some likable characteristics, but the more you read on, the more you realise what a farce that is. The only growth I see on the MC is his system, he himself never grows. You would think living more than 15years in My Hero Academia Japan would make the MC grow less rude, but nothing. His system is boring. At the beginning you can see the MC exploring, grinding and growing, but after that the system is sidelined and the MC just get's his crafted stuff. It also does not feel the MC is using his crafting system to it's full potential. More like a ready-made excuse why he got gadgets and uses gadgets besides his quirk.
Freaking love this story, it makes rhe characters relatable and seem like actual people, I even caught myself laughing at some of it's jokes and the characters antics
THIS NOVEL IS SUPPPPPERRRR.... super average that it. writing qual is okay compared to other novels here but the MC is annoying as hell. he's annoyingly idiotic and pissed of God for no reason and then denies the bloody tutorial just cuz he's pissed? wha?? also his declaration on what type of hero to be was what made me rethink reading it. dropped in the first 6-7 chaps unfortunately
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awesome awesome 😊👍😊👍👍 the web page is a good idea to have the opportunity I really appreciate your king 👑👑😘😘☺️☺️😚💖👑👑👑😚😚😚😚👑💖👑😚😚😚😚👑 it was at
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The character is so fuckin toxic i couldn't stand it.. i just dropped it....12345678912435768912437579946464554545451555545155154551555552525
I like the story and I like the other characters, but for **** sake, the mc pisses me off. He goes spiling **** out of his mouth but when he faces real danger he freezes up and just too much swearing. Like I said I like the story, I like the characters, but **** the mc.
One of the worst novel i have ever read. Dont read it its waste of your time. Just because he has a system with him he think of so highly of himself, fucking bastard personality
best fan-fiction I ever read I hope you never stop.[p.s this is my first novel I ever read before I signed up on royal road and on webnovel ]
This is by far the best My Hero fanfiction on this site. For starters it follows the plot without being boring and we see different things added to the events we are familiar with. I really enjoy how the MC has a quirk that isnt godlike and doesn't have One For All, like so many people want to take away the only thing that makes Deku relevant to the story and we need Deku. Grammar is good and the dialogue flows well. I haven't caught up yet but I really like it so far.
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This is one of the best fanfics I've read, you write very good comedy, only the attitude of the MC leaves much to be desired, he spends it screaming all the time, he insults everyone in his class because he doesn't want to revalue them and because it does not bring benefits (I think that everyone in class A will become great heroes and have potential for that reason he became friends with stheald girl and shiny dude because of that dont?) I do not understand why you do not want the mc to have friends shiny dud and stheald girl are better protagonists than the mc, this fanfic reminds me of the end of game of thrones, I understand that they want to write something different, surprise and not the same as always but in the end not everyone will like them all and that's why the low rating.droping .. good luck and thanks, keep writing you are good😌 but the mc is shit💩💩
This is the third time I've tried to read this thing. After all, I like crafting stories and Boku, so it seemed like a no brainer... Problem is, ...the MC is a douchebag
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I almost dropped at the first chapter seeing how retarded the mc is but I continued but after ch7 I just couldn’t do it anymore, the mc is sickeningly stupid that it physically hurts to read this story, for the people faint at heart, beware. I honestly gagged when I read this, mc supposed to be a genius in most everything but his brain can’t seem to handle simple day to day functioning Good riddance, hope for future readers you simply steer clear of this, it’s simply so bad it doesn’t even deserve to be opened at ch1 to gove Author that 1 extra reader count
Haven't started but the idea is interesting can't wait to read. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well, this was supposed to be amazing but I couldn't continue. And it's all because of how stupid the Mc is. I fail to accept that someone as dumb as the Mc was reincarnated from a teenager that should be somewhat educated to a baby and yet he did but somehow has zero awareness and is impatient as a toddler. Also, the author gives no reason for the Mc delusional mind, like no twisted backstory or anything like that. The only thing that remotely resembles the teenage-like quality is his potty mouth and need to be rebellious but the rebellious side is more childlike then teenage-like. I'm not sure if the author meant it but the second of chapters Mc references himself as a school shooter "Hehe. . . You mess up this time Japan letting this former American into you perfectly safe school filled with all your innocent Japanese children" Which immediately confused me as he said he wanted to be a hero but this thought of his says differ After reading more I realise that him being reincarnated means nothing but have info on the world. It would make more sense if he was reincarnated from a child with an abusive upbringing. This would make sense as he has very little intelligence but instead, you are lead to believe that this dumb ass is supposedly a genius even though Mc simultaneously proves that he is not. If you like stupid Mc's read it if not then don't put yourself through the same torturer as I did.
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I Love the book. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩✋🤩✋🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌🐠🐠👌
This story is really great the MC can't stop doing bull**** and the way he is doing this is quite funny. Keep going on with this story, i want to read more of his #1 hero crap!
The best Boku no Hero fanfic I've ever seen. 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
Meh. Meh. Meh. The mc is annoying. Read something else for satisfaction. /-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/
I like everything exsept the main protaganist, he’s really annoying and I hate his personality, it dosent seem real, but other than that it’s fine just ignore the MC
I tried to read this 2 times but the mc acts like a villain and is just a comple jerk to everyone.
(okay I put this on private pretty much because at the end I most likely will save them on the story but don't worry just along you the weed after the Gap you should be okay) anywho the man c is acting like a stupid more eviler child that's all I have to say anywho pretty much one about to say is going to be a spoiler so heads up just in case he's eating CD PS thing anywho pretty much the MC despite being reincarnate and a teenager who should have at least some common sense man you acting more like a kid than anything else who pretty much knows about the few should happen in the future I'm at recording out loud I read to all the way to chapter 55 I literally couldn't any for into simply stupid if you want me to run some more that's lucky ones on top specifically the one had the low start ones just a heads up and don't worry I'm sorry they were stayed there forever anywho here come the spoiler bring my laundry and a child is so and I mean it so had it I'm not black guy is in he don't know what to love I mean black has been as in he don't know how to learn from my own mistakes easily like racing here on classmate quote and quote by the way way with mind you Trinidad slim and to begin with like the MC says and get plenty of all right by going up the whole schools any robots your friends come over talk to him and he know I didn't promise attitude dark cover episodes he dancing when he thinks he's still going out of hero even though he's punished by staying inside of his room so as a result he got kicked out and so he take out a drive with has up by the way there's our prima dummy Troy that much better than the court that I mean have gluttons pretty much you know that Google ghost one for everyone call it and you wash source the eclipse of it I guess you probably know what I meant better turn training and will prove I still prove how we some training hero is him too friend go right batteries oh thank you his anger stay pretty much I'll take it all away oh and heads up he friends are the invisible girl and the one with the light okay okay bye
Spoiler de révélation Writing Quality? Epic! Stability? Not sure, i left halfway the novel. But I'll give it a 4 Story Development? Actually kind of decent, but it could be better. Gave it a 4. Character Design? Ah god... This character really likes to troll us readers and characters of the story..... World Background? A generic MHA experience!
the only criticism i could give is that 1 the story would be better with a time skit to show where the group were in the future 2 side character were very forgettable
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I noticed this novel on fanfiction years ago and read it there. Now i noticed it here. Even now i still remember how insanely bad this story is. Quite frankly, the idea of a Craftsman System + My Hero Academia has great synergy and i was really interested in reading it. But the following novel is just disappointing. The MC is an insanely rude, bad-tempered, rebellious and annoying for no other reason than that is the character the author gave him. Like the MC is cussing out people casually for no reason. The author did try to show a few times that the MC still has some likable characteristics, but the more you read on, the more you realise what a farce that is. The only growth I see on the MC is his system, he himself never grows. You would think living more than 15years in My Hero Academia Japan would make the MC grow less rude, but nothing. His system is boring. At the beginning you can see the MC exploring, grinding and growing, but after that the system is sidelined and the MC just get's his crafted stuff. It also does not feel the MC is using his crafting system to it's full potential. More like a ready-made excuse why he got gadgets and uses gadgets besides his quirk.
Freaking love this story, it makes rhe characters relatable and seem like actual people, I even caught myself laughing at some of it's jokes and the characters antics
THIS NOVEL IS SUPPPPPERRRR.... super average that it. writing qual is okay compared to other novels here but the MC is annoying as hell. he's annoyingly idiotic and pissed of God for no reason and then denies the bloody tutorial just cuz he's pissed? wha?? also his declaration on what type of hero to be was what made me rethink reading it. dropped in the first 6-7 chaps unfortunately
Spoiler de révélation Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad.
awesome awesome 😊👍😊👍👍 the web page is a good idea to have the opportunity I really appreciate your king 👑👑😘😘☺️☺️😚💖👑👑👑😚😚😚😚👑💖👑😚😚😚😚👑 it was at
......................................................................good novel.........................................................................................................................................................................................................
The character is so fuckin toxic i couldn't stand it.. i just dropped it....12345678912435768912437579946464554545451555545155154551555552525
I like the story and I like the other characters, but for **** sake, the mc pisses me off. He goes spiling **** out of his mouth but when he faces real danger he freezes up and just too much swearing. Like I said I like the story, I like the characters, but **** the mc.
One of the worst novel i have ever read. Dont read it its waste of your time. Just because he has a system with him he think of so highly of himself, fucking bastard personality
best fan-fiction I ever read I hope you never stop.[p.s this is my first novel I ever read before I signed up on royal road and on webnovel ]
This is by far the best My Hero fanfiction on this site. For starters it follows the plot without being boring and we see different things added to the events we are familiar with. I really enjoy how the MC has a quirk that isnt godlike and doesn't have One For All, like so many people want to take away the only thing that makes Deku relevant to the story and we need Deku. Grammar is good and the dialogue flows well. I haven't caught up yet but I really like it so far.
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Spoiler de révélation This is one of the best fanfics I've read, you write very good comedy, only the attitude of the MC leaves much to be desired, he spends it screaming all the time, he insults everyone in his class because he doesn't want to revalue them and because it does not bring benefits (I think that everyone in class A will become great heroes and have potential for that reason he became friends with stheald girl and shiny dude because of that dont?) I do not understand why you do not want the mc to have friends shiny dud and stheald girl are better protagonists than the mc, this fanfic reminds me of the end of game of thrones, I understand that they want to write something different, surprise and not the same as always but in the end not everyone will like them all and that's why the low rating.droping .. good luck and thanks, keep writing you are good😌 but the mc is shit💩💩
This is the third time I've tried to read this thing. After all, I like crafting stories and Boku, so it seemed like a no brainer... Problem is, ...the MC is a douchebag
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I almost dropped at the first chapter seeing how retarded the mc is but I continued but after ch7 I just couldn’t do it anymore, the mc is sickeningly stupid that it physically hurts to read this story, for the people faint at heart, beware. I honestly gagged when I read this, mc supposed to be a genius in most everything but his brain can’t seem to handle simple day to day functioning Good riddance, hope for future readers you simply steer clear of this, it’s simply so bad it doesn’t even deserve to be opened at ch1 to gove Author that 1 extra reader count
Haven't started but the idea is interesting can't wait to read. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well, this was supposed to be amazing but I couldn't continue. And it's all because of how stupid the Mc is. I fail to accept that someone as dumb as the Mc was reincarnated from a teenager that should be somewhat educated to a baby and yet he did but somehow has zero awareness and is impatient as a toddler. Also, the author gives no reason for the Mc delusional mind, like no twisted backstory or anything like that. The only thing that remotely resembles the teenage-like quality is his potty mouth and need to be rebellious but the rebellious side is more childlike then teenage-like. I'm not sure if the author meant it but the second of chapters Mc references himself as a school shooter "Hehe. . . You mess up this time Japan letting this former American into you perfectly safe school filled with all your innocent Japanese children" Which immediately confused me as he said he wanted to be a hero but this thought of his says differ After reading more I realise that him being reincarnated means nothing but have info on the world. It would make more sense if he was reincarnated from a child with an abusive upbringing. This would make sense as he has very little intelligence but instead, you are lead to believe that this dumb ass is supposedly a genius even though Mc simultaneously proves that he is not. If you like stupid Mc's read it if not then don't put yourself through the same torturer as I did.
Spoiler de révélation I Love the book. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩✋🤩✋🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌🐠🐠👌
This story is really great the MC can't stop doing bull**** and the way he is doing this is quite funny. Keep going on with this story, i want to read more of his #1 hero crap!
The best Boku no Hero fanfic I've ever seen. 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
Meh. Meh. Meh. The mc is annoying. Read something else for satisfaction. /-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/
MC is dumb and evil.