Flat_Moon

Flat_Moon

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Reader? Yes. Writer? yes. A great one? Not so much.

2017-09-21 Joint United Kingdom
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Flat_Moon
Flat_Moon
3 years ago
Commented

I don't know why but Mystique would be interesting I haven't read any fanfics that put her in the harem and maybe instead of Black Widow maybe Maria Hill just for the fun of it

Flat_Moon
Flat_Moon
3 years ago
Replied to Vansmoke

4 or 5 still uncertain but definitely no more.

Flat_Moon
Flat_Moon
3 years ago
Replied to Sad_Tweety

Just writers block but I don't know what this 3rd book is. I currently only one other novel "A Father In Marvel" still trying to be updated what's the other one

Flat_Moon
Flat_Moon
3 years ago
Replied to Lasagnaaa

It was the inspiration for it

He is super-power user with the ability to produce and shoot sharp bones from his body. This ability comes with a high healing factor to patch up the holes made by producing bones.

Part-Time Star, Full-Time Dad

Part-Time Star, Full-Time Dad

Urban · Flat_Moon

Flat_Moon
Flat_Moon
3 years ago
Posted

Everything is great apart from the Mc. The Mc has a severe fanboy problem. Its so bad that he willing tells them everything about the Omnitrix and I don't think you need to be a genius to know that is not something you share. I lost all hope when he shared that he can remove the Omnitrix. He basically announced "you just have to force me and you too can be the holder of the Omnitrix" Seriously he trusts spy agency with his knowledge and that's a mistake in itself. My rating is high because the only problem is the Mc's fanboy personality negates common sense.

Flat_Moon
Flat_Moon
3 years ago
Posted

This way better than I expected. The story as I understand is not about simply being a Hero but Chris (Mc) coming to terms with being outcasted again even after being reincarnated. The explanation for his ability's are detailed but not enough to feel like an info dump. I really love this novel keep it up

Flat_Moon
Flat_Moon
3 years ago
Replied to Tezmaster

Its a made up fruit drink brand shortly mentioned in the chapter where Mary got him an interview, gruited ad and a Marathon run.

"Let's put the game to the side today and film your ad for Gruited" Said Mary

Part-Time Star, Full-Time Dad

Part-Time Star, Full-Time Dad

Urban · Flat_Moon

Flat_Moon
Flat_Moon
3 years ago
Commented

I've somewhat been scammed yet I'm not upset

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Flat_Moon
Flat_Moon
3 years ago
Replied to Flat_Moon

the third novel was my first novel which had too many problems to count which even the fans of it agreed.

Flat_Moon
Flat_Moon
3 years ago
Replied to EnderPL

Ummm, you good bro. I don't know what you on about when it comes to attention-seeking. As I've stated that the first one had things that I as the author didn't like. It's a rewrite, not a re-upload. I've changed multiple things to make it so that things can progress faster as my writing is generally slow-paced. Also, I didn't drop four novels I dropped three and two of them was basically the same with the only difference being one harem and the other wasn't. I realised that I couldn't keep up with uploading both so I dropped the none harem one before continuing the harem version for at least 30 chapters before losing interest in the story. The fourth novel which I presume you're talking about the first version of Part-Time Star, Full Time Dad was blacklisted. I did ask a staff member but he never got back to me and after wait 3 days nothing changed even after removing the things that got me blacklisted so the only thing I can do is re-upload Part-time Star Full Dad. Please don't go around throwing 1-star reviews with next to no reason as to why the story deserves it. The review section is for the novel not the past novels under the author's name. Especially since the author could have improved since his/her last novel. Thank you for your incite though

  • Part-Time Star, Full-Time Dad original

    Part-Time Star, Full-Time Dad

    Urban ACTION ROMANCE REINCARNATION R18 SYSTEM COMEDY HAREM SLICEOFLIFE SHOWBIZ

    4.7

    [Warning: HAREM- R-18, Profanity and Emoji's] A reincarnated man becomes Father after waking from his supposed death. After two years of being the rare stay at home dad, his wife leaves him and their daughter for her material goals. With no money, he desperately tries to find a way to feed and clothe his daughter. "I'll just be a streamer" *Ding* _____________________________________________________ Hello, this is my second original novel. I have written up to 5 novels three of which were dropped To be fair two of them were the same novel that had a slight difference. The first novel I wrote had way too many problems to count. The girl on the cover was not done by me nor do I own it either. I found it through google images and edited. If you are the owner please tell me if you'd like it taken down or be credited. The cover will change over time as I either learn digital art or pay some talented artist.

    84 Chs 5k Collections

  • A Father In Marvel original

    A Father In Marvel

    Anime & Comics COMEDY HAREM OVERPOWERED SLICEOFLIFE

    4.61

    To live in an area that is dangerous is a nightmare but to live in a world that is under constant danger is hell. Join Theodore Hunt in his journey to live safely with his daughter's in "hell" which he quickly turned into heaven. • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • Note: This is indeed OpMc Novel but it's the focus is not the fight but the children Disclaimer: I do not own the franchise nor do I own the franchise's characters.

    23 Chs 4.1k Collections

  • DROPPED:Juvenile Entertainer original

    DROPPED:Juvenile Entertainer

    Urban COMEDY HAREM LEVELUP SHOWBIZ

    4.45

    Warning: Harem, system, slow-paced, CRINGE and system with a bad personality. This has been dropped. This is my first novel which had a lot of problems from the pacing, power scale and grammar. Read knowing that it has no end. To be a star is a simple Idea but to turn a boy that's been secluded from Society into one is much more difficult. Even if you took on his body you still felt his anxiety, insecurity and more. It's slow but worth it. _____________________________________________________ Authors Note: The novel you are about read contains strong language and some vivid sexual content The Mc is beta at the start as he is a character that suffers from anxiety due to his upbringing. Although it did take 23 chapters for the Mc to show visible growth that's just due to my naturally slow pacing. Don't expect too much, especially since this is my first time writing a novel. It's also best not to take seriously as I am just writing for fun and to just something to do on my downtime This novel will share a lot of similarities to other novels that I particularly love and mostly because I lack originality but it will be in my style. UPLOAD SCHEDULE Tuesday, Wednesday and Saturday

    119 Chs 1.4k Collections

  • DROPPED: Marvels Strongest Father original

    DROPPED: Marvels Strongest Father

    Anime & Comics HAREM OVERPOWERED

    4.72

    Dropped do not read!! (Slow Paced, Slice of life, Op Mc, Harem) A light-hearted novel to cheer up your hollow heart with its cute interactions, jokes, love and more. A parent's duty is simple but difficult. To be a parent you need to be patient, headstrong, fun, loving and able to one punch planets? What you didn't know well you do when thrown into the Marvel Universe. Disclaimer: I do not own the franchise nor do I own the franchise's characters. This purely for entertainment. • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • This kinda just for fun I don't have a plan just winning it this would be my second novel its a lot cleaner if I'm comparing it to my first one. By clean I mean plot development and grammar English wise I'm not bad its very average Pacing is naturally slow.

    62 Chs 6k Collections

  • DROPPED: Marvels Greatest Father original

    DROPPED: Marvels Greatest Father

    Others

    4.54

    This has been dropped, sorry

    30 Chs 724 Collections